The Supernatural Sexual Object of the Passerby Male Protagonist

After reading it, I was confused, what is this about? The mysterious side in the early stage becomes routine in the middle and later stages? ! ! The male protagonist's various speeches are actually still watchable, but the plot is really muddy, dizzy and confusing. The next 20 chapters are basically skip-reading. They are too bland, just like a water account. All the conspiracies and mysterious incidents in the front are gone at the end? ! ! The male protagonist's abilities are not shown. If it weren't for the Lion's Eye in the last chapter, I wouldn't have remembered that the male protagonist had Ultraman's ability in the setting. I fell apart while writing this. I really hope that the author can practice more, and it is best to have a complete outline. In fact, the subject matter is very good and to my taste, and the writing style is not too problematic. Please do your best, author

Did the author stop writing? Stop it! It's very well written, so please don't update it again.

I'm so miserable, no one can see me. I will work hard (´;;`) Can you give me some advice?

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I won't go into too much detail, let's not talk about my parents. I really lost interest in reading it after at least 3 chapters. Author, maybe you only wrote it and didn't read it yourself? I went to taste it for myself. This segment and the male protagonist's conversation almost made me suffer from embarrassment. I could endure the exhaustion of watching the segment. It doesn't matter, but don't you think the male protagonist is too self-indulgent and his conversation is too stupid? Isn't being funny and being stupid the same thing?

Don't open the emotional line, usually it will be poisonous to death.

I've read a few chapters, and to be honest, the readability is very poor. I'm not just making random comments, but I'm really confused.

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The Yukinoshita family has been strengthened a lot by you. . . .

If you don't want to be a eunuch, you can go and watch "My Youthful Love Story Is Over" and it feels like it's just unfinished. You can check it out for reference.

Come on, author😆

Why, I can't see all the interesting things you said or commented about this chapter. . . . What's going on?

The writing is getting better and better. I would like to give you a suggestion to condense the previous plot where the protagonist got the golden finger. If I hadn't read it twice, I really couldn't understand how the protagonist got the golden finger through time travel... The first 3 chapters are not very friendly to people who click on your book...

The writing is quite enjoyable, but it lacks a sense of life and the plot is vague. I hope the author can improve it. The author can look at the genre and learn from similar ones.

I originally wanted to curse a few words, but it was very difficult for me to read the author, so I decided not to!

Your comment circle is so lively! Envious

Come on＾0＾~, it's very well written.

It feels pretty good, at least as long as you are willing to write, you can still write it, and even after the plot is over, you can also turn to spiritual revival and multi-dimensional fusion. After all, the world you constructed has already integrated many worlds.

The first three golden chapters were a bit messy, but things got better later on.

It's quite good, I read five chapters. The main reason is that the logic is normal and there are not too many bugs. Come on

I just want to ask, please answer me, is it a single heroine or multiple heroines?

Full of home articles and self-pleasure format! The setting is good, but the writing style needs to be improved!