Haruno Momo of Naruto

This article is one of my favorite articles I have read in Naruto. The writing is delicate, the characters' emotions are well grasped, and the plot description is wonderful. Especially the descriptions of the protagonist and supporting characters are the best in my opinion. But this article always felt a bit awkward until I read Chapter 164. Haruno Zhaoming knew everything that happened to his daughter, felt guilty but not motivated, maintained a powerless attitude, and accepted compensation. I just knew something was wrong. The general emotional structure of this article is very similar to the Tanmei, bitchy and sadistic novels I have read before. The protagonist is betrayed by his father and his illegitimate son. He was abused by his own mother who did not know the truth. His adoptive mother was kind to him, but she loved her biological son in her heart. Saved the third male, but let himself pretend to be the third male's enemy. Silently helping the second male lead an illegitimate child and enduring the ridicule of outsiders. The most terrible thing is that the protagonist knows everything from beginning to end, and endures everything for that little bit of disguised love. In the end, the protagonist becomes seriously ill and everyone regrets it. This kind of protagonist creation is just like Xiao Tao. The viewer will feel very aggrieved if he feels it for himself. Even from the perspective of a bystander, to put it bluntly, he is bringing it upon himself and looking for abuse. The key is that Xiao Taozi's emotional giving and receiving are not equal. Many people think the overall progress is too slow, but I personally like the slow pace of Dada because the protagonist is Xiao Taozi. Personally, Xiao Taozi is not the type to expect others to lend a helping hand and takes on everything herself. The main reason is that the protagonist is too emotionally entangled. It's enough to have Sakura to represent Xiao Taozi's emphasis on family, Hinata to represent friends, and Xiao Li to represent hard work and genius. Too many repetitive plot descriptions make Xiao Taozi's personal emotional growth seem slow and repetitive. Until the latest learning of the Nodule Technique, Xiao Tao still didn't give people the feeling of pursuing strength and cleanliness. She was more of just muddling along, deceiving herself that she had tried her best by practicing hard physical techniques that would not change much. For example, Scorpion is a bad guy who does all kinds of evil. Readers can accept him destroying the country and feel inspired by the villain for this, but they will not accept detailed descriptions of how he kills ordinary people. I just want to suggest that if you want to express the bond between Xiao Tao and family and friendship, just briefly describe their and Xiao Tao's views on each other in a few chapters or even a few sentences. There is no need to describe it in detail. Too detailed will only make us feel sorry for Xiao Taozi and make people feel that Xiao Taozi is not worth it. In addition to my personal opinion, Xiao Taozi's personal style is too small and the writing style is very good. When reading, Xiao Taozi is cold and gentle, and feels very mature. But she worked so hard, was so down-to-earth, and simply endured hardship. She didn't have any ambition or overall view, or the charm of Uchiha, who has the final say whether the shinobi world is in chaos or not. Even if it doesn't involve the aspect of strength, it feels like you can only play in the ninja school, and even Sakura can grow up for Sasuke and ninja. Of course Xiao Taozi just wants to live and protect the people around her. There is no need to grow into a psychopath like Uchiha. Personal opinions can be ignored.

Let me ask you quietly, is self-recommendation useful? 😠

This is the hardest working protagonist I have ever seen in a Naruto fanfic, and it feels very different from the others. I want to say that this protagonist is probably the protagonist I admire the most. Although he still has some shortcomings, Xiao Tao is really good.

This may be because I like a Naruto-themed fanfic with a heroine. Xiao Tao in it is tangled and straightforward. She is always entangled and hesitant about certain things, but in order to become stronger and have strong power, she chose to give up her ninja career for the rest of her life to become stronger, and she has no regrets. She is A strong, independent, and lonely child. I like Xiao Tao very much in the story. He has no golden fingers, no family background, and does not attract the male protagonist because of a certain place in the beginning. Instead, he gains strength and the attention of others through his own hard work. He is the hardest-working protagonist I have ever seen. The author's handling of the relationship between the characters also won my heart. The quarrel with Sakura, but because they have been together for so many years, they are not used to sleeping in the same room alone. Because Naruto was scolded by Sakura for not having a parent, he got angry and quarreled with Sakura. Because of the power gained through his own efforts, he attracted the attention of Sasuke and others and competed with him. The writing is very realistic, and the descriptions in some places are particularly realistic. Xiaotao told me that strong power is obtained through one's own continuous efforts and proof [the above are all my true thoughts] ^_^ Also the writing is really good (˘³˘)Mi

I have read everything I have written so far. There are a total of two major poisonous points: 1. The original characters will break away from the original work at certain times to serve the plot (commonly known as OCC). 2The author has corresponding errors regarding the setting and time of the original work. For example, in more than 250 chapters, Naruto calls Kyuubi directly as Kyuubi, but Naruto knows Kyuubi's real name during the Great Ninja War. Another example is that Itachi was 13 years old when he exterminated the clan, but in the original work, the author set Itachi's age as 14 when the protagonist first met Itachi. There are too many errors in the setting of the original work like this. If you are more particular about the setting of the original work, or if you see a plot that is very different from the setting of the original work from time to time, you will be upset. As for the rest, it's easier to say. Conspiracy theories like the Three Generations cannot be considered poisonous, because this is how it is written about Naruto now. Like 1 and 2 above, other novels also have 1. This is unavoidable when writing fan fiction. It just depends on the personal writing style to see if it is abrupt or not. Judging from the first 100 chapters or so, the author may have just started writing the book and was not very proficient at it. Later on, it got better and became less abrupt. 2 This is not appropriate. The author of the original setting made a lot of mistakes. Just like the two examples above are a bit too vulgar and should not be committed.

Tao and Sakura hey hey

Slow writing is not a problem, and slowness of the main plot is not a problem either. As long as I am not supervising, it will be easy. Come on.

Can this author's book still be on the shelves? It always feels like a pity. . .

Give the sentence a fair evaluation: a boring running account

Big, big, big, I don't have any equipment, I drew this with my fingers on the iPad one stroke at a time, so it may not look very good, I tried my best QAQ @reader Among the two ⭕️, one is tomato and egg soup. I remember that Taotao was caught when she secretly jumped out of the tomatoes during the meal, and the second one was a tomato🍅 Also Kissing Heaven, pink white blue skirt, Sakura, kunai, shuriken duck