I Have an Acquaintance in Another World

After completing more than a dozen chapters, I realized for the first time the cruelty of competition for survival among online writers. I wish you all a bright future, wealth and health.

It is very difficult to write about this kind of subject matter, and the character of the protagonist is honestly not handled well. The writing style also needs to be improved. You can work on the storyline, but writing skills need to be accumulated. We must work hard on the plot. We can't just modify it according to the plot of Dou Po, but we can also change the entire world. In general, I hope you can persevere and finish the book. This is the greatest reward for your efforts. Come on!

Write well, raise it first, and wait for slaughter!

I just read a few chapters and they are really interesting. The writing is good, the plot is clear, the paragraphs are comfortable, and the concept is clever. Like, support, come on!

You can form a team with the author who traveled through time and became Xiao Yan's bodyguard√, hehe 🙂

1. After reading three chapters, I have indeed broken away from the rhythm of Dou Po. The author has gone his own way. 2. The author's ideas are very clear. Personally, I feel that he can take the route of funny and funny writing, which will make his eyes bright and break away from the shackles of time-travel writing. 3. The author's big book title feels average and not very good.