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The more I write this book, the more I think of a clichéd fantasy novel. It doesn't have the flavor of cultivating immortals. It's too open-ended, and I even have a younger sister.

I've just seen the latest one, but I can't get enough of it. The plot is compact, and the plot is quite big, and it's pretty daring. Compared to the protagonist who has only grown a year or two after writing hundreds of chapters and is already extremely powerful, the protagonist of this book has worked very hard.

Why haven't you complained recently? Hey, (my mother hasn't hit me for three days, she hasn't hit me for three days...)

Could the author be faster? Is it okay to update a few chapters a day? Otherwise, 120 chapters are too few, and besides, you wrote it so wonderfully, it's not enough to read.

Big cheers for the author, I like to see this kind of cheats for cultivating immortality. Come on.

As for the special forces traveling through time, the special forces have long been outdated. Even if you say it's a mental illness, time travel is more innovative than this.

To be honest, I feel that people who are too ostentatious are often the ones who die the fastest unless it's a novel.

I would like to make a suggestion and strongly urge the author to design a portable planting space for the protagonist! ! With space for planting, this book will definitely become a hit! ! It will have the potential to become a god! I like your book very much! ! Be sure to use more space when writing about the protagonist! ! This book wouldn't be good without space! ! If I had the space, this book would be wonderful! ! !

It is recommended that after the foundation is established, most of the functions of the golden finger should be lost, which is equivalent to a state where there is no gold finger. You can even directly reward the foundation to permanently improve your understanding. You can rely on yourself for skills, etc.

With thunder, you can make electromagnetic guns

There are fewer special forces. Modern weapons or fighting methods.

This book feels a bit cliché 1

This article is too poisonous. It is simply an article of selfless devotion. Lao Bai cannot read it. I suggest everyone not to fall into this trap. Shennong has already died from the poison.

We can train some tribesmen in the future

I've read so much about this style of writing, but you are the best. There's nothing interesting about it. What do you think? 🤐

This novel is a knot in my mind. I will speed up the pace in the later stages and finish it as soon as possible. Alas, after all, I am not a conscientious author.

It's hard to find a book with genius writing, but it's so immature that it's embarrassing

Are there too many realms to divide? Does a genius become a god in a few years? You have fought in so many realms, how many do you want to cross? ? ?

The realm has been changed, and there are modification instructions for single chapters. In the early stage, just leave it like that, lazy people make trouble.

The author wrote that the protagonist's strength is too poor, and the battle is only one or two levels high. It is a thunder and fire technique, and he did not write anything special. Negative review

Even if you have perfected any skill and you don't see any damn power, how can you let these other people mess around?

I just read the first chapter. Shouldn't spiritual root testing be done alone?

The writing is too silly and the dance is too fast.

The front is fine, but the back is too perverted and boring.

As soon as I saw the bloody words "Special Forces", I instantly lost the desire to read any more.

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The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

After not updating for so long, do you still have full attendance?

Why can't the special forces be the navy?