Fengqi Changlin

A great novel, the plot and writing are very good!

The copywriting is special... It can arouse people's yearning for the world. It's that kind of feeling... Leaning on a building, listening to the wind and rain, and watching the rivers and lakes indifferently. The writing style is also very elegant, and the flow of writing is very encouraging.

Every bloody man has a martial arts dream deep in his heart...

Not bad, looking forward to the next plot

The pen is like a sword, the writing is the formula, chivalry is the name, righteousness is the first, the heroism and righteousness are the decisive martial arts heart. The three poles refine the purpose of the text, and the three nines will never leave. The pen is like a flying dragon opening up the sky and the earth, and the words are like the reflection of the rivers and lakes. I will encourage you today and I will live up to you during the holidays. Come on ᵎ(•̀㉨•́)و ̑̑

Yes, it's difficult. Two problems: 1. There is too much background information in the opening chapter and not enough compact rhythm. 2. Some of the words used are immature, such as seeing an old man trembling after being frightened, which is inappropriate.

It has the flavor of martial arts, but martial arts has been relatively cool recently, so you have to be mentally prepared to endure it to the end. No matter how you say it, I look forward to the revival of martial arts in China

After reading it, I found that my literary skills are still very solid, and the plot is also very good. Keep it up and you will win.

The introduction is very suitable for the subject matter, and the text is also very charming. Come on

The plot is fascinating! The writing is also excellent! What a great novel! Come on!

Very good novel, keep up the good work

The writing is smooth, the plot is smooth, and the characters are vivid. As long as you persist, this book will definitely succeed.

The writing is smooth and the writing style is very mature. However, this kind of writing style will create an overall atmosphere that seems to be more serious. It needs to be adjusted appropriately. In addition, there are many words in each paragraph, which will make you feel stressed when reading it. After reading it for a long time, you will feel tired and distracted. But overall it's rare to write well.