Headlines That Dominate Another World

4. Title of the book: Exclusive Headlines of Different Worlds Author: @ Singe and Gan Type: Light Novel Published: 110,000 words Drug Testing Chapters: First 9 Chapters Drug Testing Date: March 12, 2020 1 , Overall story: Bu Ciyao, a 23-year-old genius game designer, was killed because of an oversight by the old man Shangdi who made a mistake in the life and death spectrum. And because the old man continued to neglect, he could not be resurrected immediately. He could only travel to a world that lags behind human civilization but is full of magic - the Destiny God's Domain. The old man gave him a mobile phone (?) As a cheat, and he cheated all the way to the next level. The story frame has been expressed in the first chapter, and the narrative is clear. The novel is more of a sandbox, and some of the detailed settings and plot developments have a sense of sandboxing, such as the above-mentioned old man's strange operations, the mobile phone as a plug-in prop, and the first magical skill the protagonist acquires is actually farting. Those who like sand sculpture style can enter the pit. 2. Continuing the sense of sand sculpture above, I personally hope to be a little more wild in the way of sand sculpture. From the way of writing, it feels like the various sand sculpture behaviors of the protagonist are described in a serious tone, and the writing style and content are not very unified. 3. In terms of plot, sand sculptures can create sufficient reversals, which will surprise readers, but reversals do not mean abrupt or lack of logic. Plot reversals can withstand scrutiny. Some plot settings have insufficient or even no foreshadowing. The story continues to be told, but are the clues connected? For example, shooting yarn with a wooden gun. Although it was foreshadowed earlier that Shaori was not satisfied with the protagonist and had the intention to beat the protagonist, this foreshadowing seemed to me more like the team members' anger towards their pig teammates. Did the protagonist really attack Shaori? He knocked the captain into a coma, and he did not assume the responsibility of leading the team. Did he not consider the overall situation that they were on the same team? For example, the appearance of the Dark Tower really appeared suddenly. It felt that the purpose of its appearance was to allow the protagonist to rise. However, this can be made up for in the following article, and it may be better to explain it accordingly in the previous article. 4. After reading Chapter 9, the protagonist gave me the feeling that although he is a rookie, he is very strong. The portrayal of his character is a bit retributive, and the portrayal of his moral character seems a little off-kilter, and I don't think it's very flattering. I don't know if this character hasn't been fully developed yet, or if the author just wrote it this way. Maybe it's a matter of personal preference. I like protagonists with flaws, but generally I want the protagonist to be more positive. It's not that there are no protagonists with too high negative energy, they are in the minority, and if the scale is not grasped well, there is a danger of 4. You need to think clearly about the three perspectives.

A great setting worth pursuing. The author will update Oli soon!

I believe you, the writing is very good, I invested~~~

Author, are you a eunuch? There has been no update for five days.

The novel is very interesting, but it's not very long~ Please update it as soon as possible, it's a bit unsatisfying~.

Ah ah ah, the book is very good,,, but not satisfying, too little, ah ah ah, I really want to read it ￣ ￣)σ

The writing is good, I like this style!

Come and support. I have collected it and voted for recommendation.

It opened well. At first, I thought werewolf killing, fake killing turned into real killing, supernatural events, and then it happened, come on＾0＾~, it has been accepted, please return to comment and collect

Sister Gan Yu, someone in the group misses you 🌹🌹

A series of footprints, it's really torture to look at them bit by bit.

The writing is great, the content is quite innovative and very attractive, I love it!

No explanation, I believe the author understands 😍😍

All signed, please update!