Talent Record

The author's writing is good, but I still think there is a problem with the setting. I guess the author set the protagonist to be a time traveler and intended to use the dungeon plot as a cheat. However, the author had better explain it beforehand. Moreover, in an extraordinary world, the protagonist has never been exposed to cultivation since he was a child. This is unreasonable, even if it is modeled after a game. Board, the author should also consider the reality. It doesn't matter if he doesn't practice skills, and his talent is not surprising. It is not very reasonable for the protagonist to make friends with the rich, handsome and beautiful Bai Fumei in the future world on an equal footing without a golden finger. Moreover, as a time traveler, the game should be familiar to him. The competitive protagonist at the beginning should not be a novice.

The author is so simple, like a blank slate. It's more nonsense than a fairy tale,