Thousands of Water and Fire

Nice! I like the character setting! !

"Liu's Cultivation Journey" came to visit. The author's writing style is very concise and very comfortable to read. I have collected it and hope to visit again.

Dream Fenghua comes to visit, please return and collect.

Keep up the good work and update two more chapters. Comments are welcome.

Short stories are not easy, come on, master!

Please give me a return visit! ! "Extreme Travel World"! ! Thank you

"The Origin of the Hero Key" is here to visit. The book has been collected. I am also a new author. Come on, let's work together.

"Longji" visited, added to the bookshelf, and added attention! After reading it, it took less than 10 minutes. I can't become an investor. I need to keep it for a few more days 😁

I sincerely appreciate the eight recommendation votes given to me by readers. Thank you for your support.

I read seven or eight chapters. Obviously there are several small problems: punctuation, location Big problem: the overall narrative flow account, I can't find the key points, and I don't know what kind of story I want to tell after reading it. Looking at the first chapter, there is an old woman and a pair of children. I thought it was a suspense thriller, but it turned out not to be the case. Looking further, I guess the author wants to write about developing a village similar to Peach Blossom Spring into a tourist area? Farmhouse? Then there is too little description of this village. The fact that it is so remote that it takes a long time to drive makes people feel that it will definitely not be able to get back to where it started. Establishing characters at the beginning can slow down the pace and describe more people in the village. Later, the protagonist is asked to buy materials, and his strength persuades him to quit. It's the 21st century, even if the male protagonist is not professional, there are professional people in his father's company, right? If that doesn't work, you can check online. Moreover, material procurement needs to verify the cost and allocate funds. There is a set of procedures. It is not like a layman like the male protagonist. Whether the materials are fresh or not is not about buying vegetables. It must have qualification certificates and meet quality standards. These problems can be summarized as follows: The author is young and has no work experience. My personal suggestion is that if you haven't consulted relevant information or corresponding experience, try to avoid writing about things you don't understand, or just go through it vaguely. The part about buying materials here should show that the male protagonist has just entered society and does not understand the sinister nature of people. The director can send a person to accompany him to buy, and use guidance, coaxing, and collusion with suppliers to falsely report the price of materials, so that the protagonist will suffer a hidden loss. That's all for now, I'll read it later when I have time!