The Rise of a Lord: Starting My Campaign as a Nobody

Well written, don't give up, I want to see the whole world.

This book is really well-written! The overall structure is excellent, and the pacing is good. I hope its grades improve. It's just that the title is a problem, which is why the grades aren't ideal. But good books always succeed! Keep it up!!

Dear readers: The author wants to seriously write a book about heroes and warriors. The Chinese server uses Ashan in Heroes of Might and Magic 5, while the European server uses the planets Colony and Erathia in Heroes of Might and Magic 3. There will be clues about magic gates interspersed throughout, and various original planets will also appear in the future.

Eureka

As a self-proclaimed experienced bookworm, I'd like to share my thoughts on this book (for reference only), hoping it will be helpful. First, the book's positioning: a virtual online game novel based on Heroes of Might and Magic. The protagonist currently has no cheat codes or system; everything he does relies on his own hard work and effort (this is currently the biggest selling point).

Keep going, don't waste time, you have the potential to become a legend.

It's well-written; the plot and characters are quite well-developed, it's not a simplistic, amateurish story.

The game uses the Heroes of Might and Magic system with a dungeon crawler style (too tedious for me, I don't like it). You can tell the author put effort into it, but the plot is too depressing, the starting difficulty is too high, and there's no mindless switching between skill-based, luck-based, or tenacious character-based playstyles to break through the current level.

Although the author is a newcomer, their writing style is quite good, lacking the vulgar and cheesy style of typical trashy, feel-good novels. Based on my experience observing various authors, their writing will inevitably improve with experience. However, the pacing felt a bit off. The beginning was too fast, giving a rushed experience.

Dear author, I have some questions I'd like to ask you. The recent storyline about the Japanese server annihilating and occupying their planet has left me quite confused. The real world you've set up is a post-apocalyptic world where the population should have drastically decreased. Then Japan's current total population is only over 100 million.