The Rise of a Lord: Starting My Campaign as a Nobody

Very well written, don't give up, I want to see the whole world

This book is really well written, the overall picture is quite good, and the pace is okay. I hope the results will get better and better. It's just a matter of the title, so the results are not ideal, but good books will still stand out! Come on! !

Dear readers: The author wants to write a book about Might and Magic seriously The national server is Ying 5 Ashan, the European server is Heroes 3 Colony planet, Erathia There will be clues of Might and Magic interspersed in the middle. There will also be various original planets in the future This book currently has no recommendations and is in a streaking state. If any readers like it, please leave a message and vote. If you have suggestions, you can also make them Thank you to every reader who voted!

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I consider myself a bookworm with some experience, so now I will tell you my opinions about this book (for reference only), I hope it can help you First, the positioning of this book: a virtual online game novel with the theme of Invincible Heroes. The protagonist currently has no plug-ins and no system, and everything depends on his own hard work and hard work (this is the biggest attraction at present) Second, the character of the protagonist: thoughtful, capable, cautious yet brave. It can be seen that the author positions the protagonist as a leader. Judging from the current content of the novel, the description is quite adequate. The protagonist does have the potential to become a leader. He can keep his heart and keep his promise before facing greater temptations. This is relatively rare among the protagonists in novels. The most important thing is that IQ is online. Third, the description of the supporting characters: For now, the three main supporting characters are all well described. There is no general facial makeup in their characters, and not all of them are women, and there is no NC plot like the protagonist who all surrenders as soon as he becomes domineering. Whether it is the kindness and virtuousness of the knight leader, the arrogance of the black dragon but always worrying about the protagonist, or the loyalty of the black knight, they are all well portrayed and there is no character breakdown, and the attitude towards the protagonist is reasonable. Fourth, plot description: This may be the only point worthy of criticism at the moment (it's a spoiler, so I won't go into details). The main problem is that the early plot is a bit too slow. There are several descriptions, and I still can't figure out what the purpose is? Does it have anything to do with the foreshadowing of the subsequent plot? The biggest problem is that there is currently no prediction about the future development prospects of the protagonist. Today's readers are very busy, and everyone wants to know in advance how the protagonist will probably develop in the future (it doesn't mean telling us the ending directly, but revealing a little bit, what kind of development route the protagonist is going to take in the future?) In this way, readers have a sense of expectation, and can better retain everyone. Fifth, update: Currently, the author writes two pages a day, but I still feel that the number of words is too few. After reading it, I feel as if I have not read it. So it's really not enough to see if the author can work on it faster. And does the author have a fixed update time? Been waiting every day. Don't know when it will be updated. Overall evaluation: This is an invincible heroic novel that you can read. It's pretty good among the invincible hero novels of the same period. Worth a look for everyone. Thank you😘😚😗😙

Keep at it, stay away from water, and you will become a god

It's well written, the plot and characters are quite profound, it's not a novice novel

The hero's invincible system and the dungeon style (which I don't like because it's too cumbersome) can be seen that the author wrote it carefully, but the plot is too depressing and the difficulty of the start is too high. Don't switch mindlessly between the skill flow, luck flow, and perseverance flow to break the game. The legendary talent is a big failure and does not reflect its effect at all. Will there be other curses after the legendary curse? Why is infinite energy legendary? Don't you want to upgrade? No experience after playing? Is it a digital world or is it a complete simulation of the real world without health bars and levels?

Although the author is a newcomer, I feel that the writing style is good, and there is no obscene writing style like rubbish and cool writing. According to my experience of observing various writers, as I accumulate experience, the author's writing style must be getting better and better It's just that I feel that the rhythm is a bit inappropriate. The early stage is a bit too fast, giving people a rushed experience. Some descriptions that should not be omitted are omitted too much. There is a lack of detailed descriptions. The plot is also a bit careless. Generally speaking, it is not precise. It has a great impact on building a world view. I hope the author will work hard!

Author, I have some questions to ask you I was very confused by the recent plot about the Japanese server killing and occupying their planet The real world you set is a post-disaster world, and the population should have declined significantly. Then Japan's current total population is just over 100 million. Excluding the elderly and children, there are probably only tens of millions of adults. This still does not include the number of people who have been greatly reduced after the disaster. How can just these people massacre and occupy a planet? Then there is strength At present, players do not have experience and cannot quickly improve their strength. But high-level units have overwhelming combat effectiveness against low-level units. Looking at the protagonist, you can see that every battle is between high-level soldiers and high-level soldiers, low-level soldiers against high-level soldiers, all of which are massacres Then the question is, how did Japan complete the massacre and occupation despite the disadvantages of strength and numbers? It is massacre and occupation