Superman in Game of Thrones

There is a problem with the timeline. Ned went to the Tower of Dorne after he and Robert had a falling out in King's Landing (because of the Mountain's murder of royal family members).

It's so open. You are not afraid of breaking your balls. In a world as low as ice and fire, with low magic and low martial arts, it is hard to imagine that you can transform into a giant dozens of meters tall. Later, I am afraid that you will have to transform into Ultraman and tear down the castle, step on the White Walkers, and punch through the Great Wall.

I don't want to run away anymore. Let's cut it off and start a new book as soon as possible. Since we use Dachao as a template, there is no need to add something like a system assistant. Maybe it is because Dachao is famous for its low magic resistance. The system settings are added, and the follow-up plot line of the nurse who received the box lunch so quickly will most likely collapse. In addition, the daughter's intrusion, internal power, and an experimental accident that was too secondary. There are too many things mixed in, and it is not toxic, but the effect of dissuading him is first-rate. If the author is just for practicing writing, then I don't think I said it.

The system is completely redundant. The main character's superhuman-like Goldfinger is already at its peak in a world with the level of development in the Middle Ages. There is no need to add messy things like the system and rebirth.

This book has just been recommended. I read a lot of the book reviews that I can't understand. There are too many settings that don't make sense. You should be able to tell from the author's level! It's nonsense to say that it's not on the shelves yet. You're talking nonsense in a free chapter. For an author like this who has just started writing a book, it's good to have a good story outline. There are too many settings, so don't read it with your brain. Just take a look. If you really want to be so entangled, you should read books written by great gods or read historical texts. It's enough for you to be sophisticated.

Said to be Superman is actually a variant of the rebirth system flow.

The bond between Superman and the Earth is his adoptive parents and girlfriend. The bond between the protagonist and the world of Game of Thrones is Ned. Writing Ned to death was a bit unexpected.

Ned is not qualified to sit on the Iron Throne, and Robert sits on the Iron Throne on the pretext that he still has dragon blood (his grandmother is the daughter of Aegon V). Ned does not have the strong claims of the other six kingdoms, and the North is poor and weak.

First of all, the title of your book is "Game of Thrones" and "Superman". Readers are attracted by this title. It is understandable that Superman is not the DC Superman. You can say he is a superhuman, but what does Game of Thrones say? You are not a Game of Thrones fan. The plot almost always revolves around the protagonist's experiments and so on. What is the significance of time travel and the title of Game of Thrones? Basically, the people who clicked on this book wanted to see Superman torture vegetables, but they ended up using Qigong and entropy. They must be unhappy. I'm not trying to teach you how to write a book. Your writing style is indeed very good, but you shouldn't have given it such a title.

Alas, there is no sense of involvement or integration. The author went all the way to the point of losing contact while enjoying himself. Not many readers can keep up. How can this be a Game of Thrones fan? It's not even a layer of skin, and it has nothing to do with Superman. Is it interesting to use IP?

Came in confused, left confused

I came to see Song of Killing and Harshness, not to see you write a book of truth and logic. The more I read, the more my head hurts. I just want to feel comfortable reading novels. You gave me a lot of miscellaneous information. Farewell 🤔

Here comes the criticism: 1. Don't mix the Western fantasy background with the Eastern cultivation system, it's neither fish nor fowl, and it's still superhuman. 2. A Song of Ice and Fire highlights the power struggle in the Western Middle Ages and is colored by brutal violence. This book has a Madonna trend, putting the cart before the horse.

The author successfully signed the contract and celebrated with flowers 🌹🌹🌹🌹 A good start is the foundation of success. I hope the author can continue his efforts and bring you a wonderful story I also wish the author a great success in this book🎊🎊🎊🎊

The author's writing is very good, but the update speed is not good enough.

First of all, let me state that the setting logic of this book is closed and the author has good intentions. But! This is not a Game of Thrones fanfic! The power setting is very strong, so in order to prevent collapse, the author introduced weirdness. The problem is that this does not meet my expectations. I came here to watch Game of Thrones, not Cthulhu, not the Foundation, not the Ancient Gods and Outer Gods, and the world is heading towards destruction. So, readers who read the book title will have great resentment towards the author!

I tried two related ones, but they turned out to be irrelevant.

To put it simply, this is the author's self-pleasure article. You can go

If he really is Superman, no one in the entire Game of Thrones can beat him.

I don't have the patience. After reading Chapter 17, there is still not much plot of Game of Thrones. I always think about going home to find my daughter, but can't do anything. It feels boring to read.

I wanted to read a book about Superman and found this book. I saw the elements of Game of Thrones. Being unfamiliar with Game of Thrones, I stayed up all night to read Game of Thrones. Eight seasons, a whole eight seasons. After fast-forwarding through it, I read the book with great expectations. This... Game of Thrones can't be compared to it... Superman can't be touched either 😭😭😭 It's not right! Randomly rub ID! Do you know how desperate I am?

Is this self-pleasure? Did you write it for yourself?

I want to read the attention of Game of Thrones fans. First, let me remind you that this is not a Game of Thrones fan. It can only be said to be a trap, and the main content is not that. The author's writing style is very good, very comfortable and smooth, but don't come in with the mentality of a fan!

Seedlings, I want to read it and write more. I have finished reading these chapters now.

It's very well written, keep it up and put it on the shelves.

I originally thought it was The Eunuch, but the author picked it up again and it was quite good. Invincible but not boring, nor is it like some authors who write an invincible protagonist who is so aggrieved that readers can spit it out. Otherwise, it is just a mindless and enjoyable article, completely for the author's own enjoyment. The more novels I read, the higher and lower my requirements will become. Because I have seen what good writing looks like and how bad writing can be, I am afraid of comparison in everything. So as long as the writing is smooth and I am interested in reading it, I dare to say that this is a masterpiece.

I picked it up, but only part of it was picked up. What a cunning move the author made.

But the content about advanced civilization is really average. Having read interstellar novels, I felt very embarrassed. The author's writing skills are poor, which is a pity.

The author writes very well. Although I have never read Game of Thrones, I can still be attracted by the author's writing style in the first few chapters. The characters and plots in the book are very reasonable, and the IQ is also online. It is better than most novels. I support the author.

It's not very good-looking. The main character lacks a cunning temperament and is difficult to embody.