Ancient Servant

The work has far-reaching ideas and gorgeous rhetoric. It is rare to see such articles on the Internet nowadays. Great support for the author.

Thank you all!

As an advertising scholar, I don't think your cover is very attractive. The writing is quite good and thoughtful, with phonetic notation. Come on 💪

The writing is clear and fluent, the plot is bold and innovative, very good

The author's writing style is great. I have accepted it. Please support me.

The writing is great and the writing style is great, keep it up!

That, though, segmentation is important. But it seems that they are divided too frequently... What the characters say is generally not divided. If there are really many words, they are usually divided after ".". After a title or a "," it is indeed a bit too much to divide it into paragraphs, which makes it uncomfortable to look at. Come on!

Looking back

The writing is smooth and somewhat similar to the plot of the TV series. Come on.

The writing is very good, this paragraph... is it a style ?

I feel that a novel like yours requires a lot of effort. I personally suggest that every dialogue quotation mark should be put in, even if it is disconnected, and the sentences should be more concise. In the first chapter, "In troubled times, sadness and desolation are everywhere." Sentences like this will make it smoother if you remove them everywhere. Don't blame me if you make a mistake 🙏