Zhutian Exchange Lottery System

Anyway, once I write about Zhu Xian, Douluo, etc., I can't stand it anymore.

The first plot of Special Forces was acceptable. The third one, I thought it was a TV series. But in the movie version, Zhou Zhiruo was turned into a black man. I couldn't stand it. The author also forced the whiteness to be white. If the whiteness in the TV series version was not enough, the movie version was too ridiculous. You said there is a difference between movies and reality. Then why has the world not changed in the first one? The real world is not even on TV. That means there is no difference between the TV series plot and reality.

The same old routine doesn't matter. As long as the writing is interesting. I have only read a dozen chapters of the author Jun's article, and initially I felt it was a bit like a running account. Internet articles are only interesting in describing Dihua's psychology, fighting scenes, wonderful dialogues, reversal of the plot, and touching emotions. In the first dozen chapters, the author basically mentions all these places in one stroke. For example, the first battle was dealt with in one sentence. Dialogue, unless it's original dialogue, is boring. The most exciting thing about Zhutianliu is the reversal, which subverts the plot, but in the end it just follows the original work. This gives readers a not-so-good first impression.

After reading the first copy, I knew that no matter how powerful the protagonist was, he would definitely be a loser.

Brother, the routine from five years ago can be written down

Even with the system, he is still a ruffian.

Sneaking into the women's special forces? The probability of a man entering a women's bathhouse

I got poisoned and died after reading Chapter 7 😒

It's quite abstract. The protagonist scolds the system from time to time, and the system pretends to take back rewards and unbind the host, and then the protagonist admits his mistake and acts like a licker.

I haven't finished writing the first two worlds, do you still want to write? You can consider the finale and explain the ending. If there were no eunuchs

In fact, you can write about that world, but it must not be boring and you can keep reading. To be honest, I really can't stand it...

Whenever I write about martial arts, I feel like vomiting. There is no fucking new idea. When I write about martial arts, I just follow the plot without following the plot. I just write randomly without even establishing basic fucking logic.

Harem novel? Although saying this may be a bit offensive to the author, I hope you won't be angry. The main reason is that you have been poisoned by Qidian's harem novels in the past few years. Qidian's harem novels are not very logical yet. , So none of Qidian's harem novels have tens of thousands of fans, and not many people dare to read them. I still hope that the author will write less heroines. The writing is not good, and if there are too many heroines, it will be procrastinating, long-winded, and easy to persuade. If it is a daily novel, it is okay. For a multi-element fantasy novel like the one you wrote, one heroine is too much. Because it is difficult for authors like you to write about the femininity of the heroine. The heroines in your novels are like harem beauties prepared for the protagonist, promised, always there, and available at the same time. It feels like these outstanding women are guilty if they are not like the protagonist. Don't you feel disgusted? It's just a little suggestion, please forgive me

What is the realm of this road to heaven? Are you waiting for Chapter 7 to explain that there is this realm?

There are missing words and paragraphs, and it looks incoherent.

Not in the mainstream (adult men), third-rate, second-rate, first-rate, acquired, innate, master! (Human Realm) Golden elixir, Yuanying, transformation into gods, out of body, integration, transcending tribulations, Mahayana! (Cultivation of Immortals) Earth Immortal, Heavenly Immortal, Xuan Immortal, Golden Immortal, Taiyi Xuan Immortal, Taiyi Golden Immortal, Daluo Golden Immortal! (Wonderland) Quasi Saint, Saint, (Holy Realm) The Way of Heaven, the Great Way! (Tao Realm) All realms are divided into early, middle, late and peak stages, with 4 stages (each stage increases the combat power of the same stage by half in the early stage) Breaking through the realm*2 Cross-border*10 (does not conflict with sudden changes) Breaking the superposition) Human Realm Not entering the stream (1) Third-rate early stage (1+1) 2 Third-rate mid-stage (2+1) 3 Third-rate late stage (3+1) 4 Third-rate peak (4+1) 5 Second-rate early stage (5*2) 10 Second-rate mid-term (10+5) 15 Second-rate late stage (15+5) 20 Second-rate peak (20+5) 25 First-rate early stage (25*2) 50 First-rate mid-term (50+25) 75 First-rate late stage (75+25) 100 First-rate peak (100+25) 125 The day after tomorrow early stage (125*2) 250 mid-term acquired (250+125) 375 late acquired (375+125) 500 peak acquired (500+125) 625 early innate (625*2) 1250 Middle Xiantian (1250+625) 1875 Late Xiantian (1875+625) 2500 Peak Xiantian (2500+625) 3125 Early Grandmaster (3125*2) 6250 Mid-term Grandmaster (6250+3125) 9375 Late-stage Grandmaster (9375+3125) 12500 Peak Grandmaster (12500+3125) 15625 Cultivation of Immortal Realm Early-stage Golden Core (15625*10) 156250 Mid-stage Golden Core (156250+78125) 234375 Late-stage Golden Core (234375+78125) 312500 Peak Golden Core (3 12500+78125) 390625 Early stage of Yuanying (390625*2) 781250 Middle stage of Yuanying (781250+390625) 1171875 Late Nascent Soul (1171875+390625) 1562500 Nascent Soul Peak (1562500+390625) 195312 5 Early stage of divine transformation (1953125*2) 3906250 Middle stage of divine transformation (3906250+1953125) 5859375 Late stage of divine transformation (58593 75+1953125) 7812500 Peak of Divine Transformation (7812500+1953125) 9765625 Early stage of out-of-body experience (9765625*2 ) 19531250 Mid-term out-of-body experience (19531250+9765625) 29296875 Late-stage out-of-body experience (29296875+9765625) 39062500 Peak of out-of-body experience (39062500+9765625) 48828125 Early stage of integration (48828125*2) 9765625 0 Mid-term integration (97656250+48828125) 146484375 Late-stage integration (146484375+48828125) 1953 12500 peak of integration (195312500+48828125) 244140625 early stage of tribulation (244140625*2) 48818 1250 The middle stage of the tribulation (488181250+244140625) 732,321,875 The late stage of the tribulation (732,321,875+2441 40625) 976,462,500 peak of tribulation (976,462,500+244140625) 1,220,603,125 before Mahayana Phase (1,220,603,125*2) 2,441,206,250 Mahayana mid-term (2,441,206,250+1,220,603,1 25) 3,661,809,375 Late Mahayana (3,661,809,375+1,220,603,125) 4,882,412,5 00 Mahayana peak (4,882,412,500+1,220,603,125) 6,103,015,625 Fairyland Daluo Jinxian peak 1,489 ,871,988,759,765,625 Daojing Peak of the Dao 186,23,8,594,3,125 I should be right to calculate the combat power this way. I haven't added other weapons or skills to the combat power values, including other souls. Simply count the increase in combat power of the realm. I didn't write down the details of the fairyland and the Taoist realm. Although I know that the novel is YY, I still want to trouble myself, break through, and not grow so fast.

I thought this book was written ten years ago, but when I saw the release date, it was 2020

The first chapter was disgusting. The protagonist kept scolding the system even though he knew that the reward would be withdrawn if he scolded him! The author wants to suppress the protagonist's growth, so he has to use this disgusting writing method? Make the protagonist a mentally retarded person?