Fantasy Journey

The plot of this book is interesting, the characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, the character description of the protagonist is very good... Etc. In short, this book is a good source of food.

Don't let flowers illuminate your eyes, but teach you how to drink wine to support your head. The best things in life are delayed. Publish my paper to make friends. When you win the Qing Dynasty, you have nothing to do, and your worries are in vain. The water of the sun and moon flows eastward for a hundred years. When will you look back when you are young?

The first few paragraphs: shouldn't everyone look like this when they speak: "Hello!" (I'm talking about the format) And there are too many words in each paragraph, which makes it easy for readers to look confused. I hope it can be changed.

Come on, you were much stronger than me at the beginning.

First of all, segmentation is very painful Then... The language is not concise and clear "A stool is a stool"

Thank you for supporting me. I wrote it very seriously. Thank you for your hard work. Come on, I will vote for you again.

Send a red envelope, and then find out there is no red envelope, why?

There are a lot of small mistakes, but no big mistakes. It's pretty good.