Black Sword Cuts Off Grudges

You finished the book without even signing a contract... What are you doing?

The writing is good. Please support me. When will the sister chapter be released? I'm really looking forward to it 🤭

The writing style has improved compared to before

Well, this... The problem is a bit big. It really made me unable to read the first chapter. Let me just talk about what I saw. It was quite uncomfortable. When you write this, the words and sentences you use seem too young, and you insist on pretending to be a literary youth... The plot seems too childish. What is the highlight? It's Liu Wushuang, who is a swordsman? You tell me he is not defensive! ? The person who wanted to kill him one second, you tell me the next second, Liu Wushuang can stand in front of him and let him speak into Liu Wushuang's ear... I... If you still have writing skills, the author should not pretend to be a literary person, just write what he wants to write well. The battle process... It's hard to describe in one sentence... It's well written, in my opinion Among the few pages I read, there was only that preface, which was pretty good... It was the dialogue that the author asked the characters to say. I really want to slap you to death... Read more, learn more, copy more and read more. As long as you spare a little time every day to do this kind of thing on a martial arts book that you think is good, you will make rapid progress. I can guarantee it.

Already collected, please update.

The sword that cuts off grudges is interesting. I have collected it.

Number two invested. Come on ✊

Oh, I always support authors who are determined not to write trivial articles. After all, I feel the same way. Haha, come on, the writing is still a bit green. Reading more books about Mao Ni or Fenghuo Opera Princes should be helpful to you.

The author's writing style is exquisite and the descriptions are very immersive. I have collected it and will study it! Be sure to update steadily! Come on, welcome to come back for advice and comments.

The strange book came to watch, the author cheers and Ollie gives

I haven't read much about martial arts, and I am also a new author. I would like to give you some advice. The three golden chapters are very necessary. After reading the first three chapters, there was nothing that attracted me. The first three chapters, or even the first chapter, are best to have the protagonist appear, and his golden finger. As I said before, I have never watched martial arts, so I don't know if I need a golden finger, but I must write a point that will make readers continue reading.

Bai Shilong is here for a visit... So, is it time to stop updating?🤭🤭🤭

I feel that the writing style is okay, but I feel that some details are missing. One plot is not described in detail enough, and then it quickly changes to another plot. For example, in the first chapter, I was still flirting and flirting, but suddenly the style of the painting changed to the death of the couple. However, writing can be practiced, and writing more will naturally make you better. However, sometimes reading more is more useful than writing more. I recommend reading the books of Mao Ni and The Manager. These two books are particularly good in writing. If you want to write with ancient times as the background, you must not write in a colloquial way. It will make people look very embarrassed. The author has done a good job in this regard. Writing in an ancient setting in a colloquial way will make people not feel the taste of a knight-errant at all. Use more idioms. Also, pay attention to some wordings, such as "I don't know" can be changed to "God knows", "Unknown" and the like, which will make people feel more comfortable watching. Secondly, if you want to write martial arts well, you must have the feeling of a Jianghu storyteller. Go to the Himalayas and listen to Da Bin's story in the snow, and you will feel very good about it, not only because Da Bin tells it well, but also because the manager writes it well. Listening to Da Bin's reading of Snow will give you the feeling of a Jianghu storyteller telling Jianghu stories. Another point is the characterization. To quote Xuezhong's introduction: Big characters and small characters are beads, and small stories are strings. Your beads don't look good, how can your necklace look good? On the contrary, if your character portrayal is not good, how can the story be good? A good character can sublimate a book. In terms of characterization, check out Xue Zhong and Zhe Tian. These two books create exquisite characters.

After reading the first three chapters, what this Taoist priest said always makes people feel very embarrassed... Three good things? Isn't it more appropriate to put it another way... There is also the part where God has the virtue of loving life. He kills life in an instant. This is a bit contradictory. You can't just kill something just because you want to use a horse to lead the story. You can beat it away or something.

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What do you say~ (In my humble opinion, no matter how long comments others give me under normal circumstances, I just got up and gave you a bonus🧧. This book review is not too much to make my post more refined!) ~ Crow joins hands with the new book "My Book of Another World" to come I gave a lot of martial arts books📖reviews a while ago Please reply First of all, it feels very good, it is the kind of copywriting that has been carefully and carefully revised The clarity of the article is almost high definition It is rare and rare I can feel it in which chapter Catch me at the contradictory or explosive points In this way, passers-by can click on it and feel that wow is a good book📖 Then if you want martial arts, some words should be changed at the end What and then... At this moment... At this time After all, dance See more Other people's words may be better In a blink of an eye, just one breath A spring breeze blew gently, and the peach blossoms fell like fairies, and then... (Let's word it, it would be better to remove the "like a fairy") One! It's not bad at all... It's just useless, it's all about the word water, clearly write ~ The spring breeze caresss the falling peach blossoms, there are lovers under the peach blossom trees It's explained in just a few words, and it's all over if you start with such a long paragraph (and it's better, I feel) If you If you want to be more detailed, then be really meticulous You can write that the peach blossoms are falling like fairies... Not thick, not thin, stuck in the middle The falling peach blossoms are like the scene of a woman from the heavenly palace descending to earth, slowly as if she is nostalgic for the mortal world and is about to fall to the earth. That's it, my humble opinion Crow Ginseng (Place an advertisement)

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