The Virtual Apocalypse Era

Whenever I see that the damage of a sniper rifle is only a few points higher than that of a pistol, I feel like I have been force-fed a piece of shit and vomited. Can you imagine that a green sniper rifle with an enhanced +8 damage is only a few points more damaged than a green pistol with an enhanced +5 level?

The design of this book is still very good, but after looking at the first picture, there is a demon sister, and I know that the protagonist is a tool person without autonomy, and a person whose behavior is easily changed by others. If the sister or any other woman says something, the protagonist will find various reasons to be a suitable dog. He will not resist and accept everything.

Come on, write your own, and don't be influenced by people with ulterior motives. The book is good. There are flaws, but the flaws don't hide the goodness.

The author hopes you will take a good look at it: 1 First of all, you are really weak in the description of female characters. I suggest you either read it and learn how to write it, or try to write as little as possible, because there should be many people who are persuaded to quit. 2 Let's talk about the advancement of the plot. The theme of your book is quite good, but I don't know if the writing is not enough. Your plot advancement feels stiff and confusing. I hope the author can optimize his outline and read more excellent works of the same type. 3 This is the most important point. If you don't pay attention, your book will either cut it or "let yourself go". Your monetary system has completely collapsed. I have seen you say that you feel like it is about to collapse. I have read more than 300 chapters of you, and I can confidently tell you that you can let go of your feelings. Are you really collapsed? For a person worth tens of billions of apocalyptic coins, do you feel it hurts to buy something worth ten or twenty thousand? Do you understand the concept of tens of billions, and then the next chapter will go out with 5 billion? You can really say whatever you want about your money. I won't talk about combat power. I can only tell the author that if you optimize your outline in time, most of your books will be mediocre. I hope the author can take a good look at it😵

What's the relationship between you two (manual funny)

The natal skill consumes a lot of energy, the protagonist himself is not very energetic, and even leveling up didn't add energy, which made me drunk.

1. It's hard to describe the punctuation marks. Whoever sees it will know it 2. Why don't you add more spirit? Life Skills ➕ Skills ➕ Shield ➕ Control ➕ Group Damage ➕ Displacement... While emphasizing the importance of attribute points, they are also making a fool of themselves; the Life Skills will not disappear, so can't they change careers? 3. MM Which ancient era is this thing from? Those who didn't know thought you were there. 4. There are too many villains in Shabi, and it's not like they are all mentally retarded. But the protagonist can't run into them all, right? 5. Looking at the introduction, you will enter an apocalyptic game later... It's really better not to write "sister", it can't be handled well...

What does the editor think🤐🤐🤐

Why is it that in 0202, there is still such a mentally retarded plot of forced buying and selling? There are all kinds of classic stupid plots. I am convinced.

It's a little awkward... I said in the previous chapters that equipment was scarce. In a blink of an eye, I started to farm n rats and exploded n pieces of equipment 500 scorpion monsters + one elite monster... Single farming... Really cheating