Two Goals to Fame

I feel that the characters in the book are too impetuous and violent, and there are also some problems with the setting of the protagonist. A high school student does not look like a high school student, nor does he want to be an adult. Also, it feels a bit confusing to read.

After writing 91 chapters, I finally completed the first football goal in the novel, which scared the baby. I hope to keep up the good work and score as many goals as a dog from now on, with assists all over the place.

I'm not trying to excite you, but if you write a book full-time, the book will definitely not get 1% of the expected income, and it will probably be sold out. Your starting point in writing this book should be good. Being double-bound by the Slok and football systems, I think there is no problem with the extra preparation in the early stage. A relative who went to school as a student in the UK suddenly couldn't find anyone and worked in a billiards club in order to survive. As a result, you discovered your super-accurate Slok talent. Later, you discovered that you have football talent. Each system has a certain completion time every day. It is almost because the system does not treat you as a human being, and you become a beast of the system. To be honest, most people find it difficult to accept this. After all, your setting is meaningless. I would like to give you some advice, change the settings as soon as possible. It's still too late to write the changes now. After all, you have football inside, and football is a big sport, so you invest more time and energy. If you go to school and join the football youth team now, you will definitely not have time to complete the 8-hour training schedule of Slok. You can play games normally in the later period, and then participate in Slok games at the end of the season and during the winter break to make both football and Slok famous. Or a novel that was changed into a Slok game. Otherwise, you will pick the sesame seeds and take the watermelon again. It will be difficult to write according to your current settings! When writing a composition, you should also pay attention to the key points. Add a stroke here and a stroke west, but in the end there will be nothing.

A female artist became famous after two goals (funny)

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This book has been signed, book friends please feel free to collect and invest. In addition, the small seedlings need a lot of watering recommended by the votes, please!

Brother, how long does it take for your old book to be finished? What is it about? Catch up on the progress of this book as soon as possible. Your plot is too slow. How can you improve your grades? Not a professional writer, right? I suggest you write while working and keep it as a hobby, otherwise your grades may suffer.

Should I write about snooker or football😰

The writing is fresh and refined, please release it soon.

Finally, the theme of the novel is back on track. You can't stop being stupid. There are fewer and fewer readers. Come on and update it! Recommended votes

At first I thought it was starting from the explanation, but I found that the writing was a bit too forced and I didn't understand it.

Can any book friends tell me, does it write about Chinese football? ? ? I'm afraid it's poisonous, thank you.