I Actually Lived in a Love Apartment

So far, the author's writing style has been strong. The Meijia episode is a character problem rather than a breakdown in writing (if it were Lu Ziqiao who caused Zhang Wei to miss the wedding and Zeng Xiaoxian to lose his share of the bar, it would be even worse than the Meijia episode). This kind of situation would happen if there was no collapse. The author's utilization rate of the character of the love apartment is very high. I think this kind of plot is normal. After all, the protagonist and Dali are still students no matter how old they are (not to mention how old the protagonist is before the time travel. The author's description of the protagonist's character is not unusual. The protagonist's character is like this)! The author also has good control. The key point is how to explain deception. For now, it is stuck in a cycle. And that Wei Shen, no matter how you think about it, I think it's a trap (the author came out to be beaten, is Wei Shen Xiaohei or Gluten Brother?) In addition 🔪 update quickly, save the manuscript and take it out (2020-02-11 12:45 Day 14 of being trapped at home by the virus)

This Dali fanfic is the best novel I have read among at least a dozen of them so far. The image of Dali in it is not broken, and the characters are all there. Finally, Brother Da Shi, you see, I have given you all the recommendation votes for so many days. *^_^*

After watching the live broadcast, I reflected on my own mental journey In fact, it was a bit low. From the perspective of a passerby, the effect was not good, and the second half of the game was indeed a bit boring But now, the whole person is happy again, with a smile on his face It can be seen that, like Zhang Yi Duo has a very good relationship, and when chatting with the crew, it is light and emotional The strong and fruitful fan sharing is actually a good thing Just like Wu Jing was in a very dangerous situation before filming "The Climber". With the success of "Wolf Warrior 2" and "The Wandering Earth", everyone's expectations for him were too high br>"The Climber" was a failure, but Wu Jing himself is considered a soft landing The same goes for her. If she plays role-playing to create the perfect girlfriend's persona, the backlash will be serious very quickly Especially in the current epidemic situation, it is impossible to get the benefits at all I don't want to at all. Seeing the frenzied state I just want her to be happy and relax, just like Zhang Zifeng and Zhao Jinmai treat her as a daughter I also figured out the problem yesterday that I felt that Dali and results were homogeneous I wonder if you have paid attention to a detail Dali is asking Li When Fan confessed, he was in a wheelchair and asked him to squat down so that he was taller than Li Fan The answer she gave was that the height of each other's gaze often symbolizes the height of the relationship. I am a little taller than you In fact, this means that the more emphasis is placed on something, the more something is lacking. She was afraid that Li Fan would not like her. Because his eyes would dim after just one or two words After recovering from his dullness, he was afraid that he would laugh at her and stop listening to her words, so he deliberately pretended to be serious Yifei teased and said that Li Fan didn't like introverted girls, and his whole body tensed up In fact, she has always been low and humble. , Who is used to repressing her nature This point is actually set at the beginning of the article, but we are trapped in the impression of the original version and feel that it is not enough, including me, superficial After watching the live broadcast, the results are good, and the power in the article is good I don't want her to be The original perfect girlfriend I just want her to have the happiness of a mortal Of course, the conclusion cannot be changed, we grow together, support each other, and become equal I hope that one day, even if she really breaks up with Li Fan, Dali can go out to eat hot pot with friends

How should I put it... This is my first time writing a book review, so I may not express myself very well. If it offends me, I hope you won't mind too much. It only represents my personal opinion. In this book, I think the first person can more easily bring in the emotions of the reader and the author. The author can also devote himself more to his emotions while creating the plot. At the same time, the author controls the events and the plot is very rich. Personally, if it is written in first person, readers will have a better sense of the situation when reading it. If it is not written well, it will be confusing and the plot will feel dragged out and disorderly. This book is undoubtedly an excellent work in the first person. It is also the only book on my bookshelf that is in the first person. The language, actions, and psychological changes of the supporting characters in the article are all fed back to the main characters of the main event. Many books have done this, but few have done it in as much detail as this one. At the same time, it increases the attractions of the characters from a new perspective, enriches the characters, and adds depth. (Immature suggestion: The protagonist can have some events in the later stage and collide with the self-selected memory files. It can be with the heroine, or with other characters such as grandma Hu and Zeng. For example, Zhang Wei collided with the protagonist in the orphanage.) As a fanfic, this book does not upgrade monsters and has no martial arts realm. This 11-year-long story is about the youth of a generation and the emotions that everyone is attached to it. Delicate emotions are the reason why we like this story. The character of Zhang Wei is really the best I have seen in Similar Love 5. He is caring and kind. Many books have ignored Zhang Wei's background and his beautiful and tenacious qualities of living alone in this world. The image of Zhang Wei in film and television dramas is that of an unreliable, low EQ, and stingy person, but he can always become the most dazzling person at critical moments. (Wei Zheng's plot requires it, but I can feel that the author will definitely live up to Zhang Wei.) Art comes from life, but it is not higher than life. It is composed of countless precision mechanical parts, but because of all the mistakes and malfunctions that occur when no one is repairing, one art story after another collides. In fact, we can't escape Zhang Wei's shadow in life. There is indeed no such person in reality, but he is the shadow of a kind of person - most people. So I think the quality of this character resonates more with readers. Finally! ! ! ! I am very happy to see such a delicate online article. It may not be the best, but it will be the most suitable category among youth literature. In terms of emotional description, we still need to learn from the author... Hehe I hope the author's book can fill the regrets of youth for more readers, come on! I wish the children who also read this book will reap their own results as soon as possible!

Meijia's writing is superb and unparalleled. Since the launch of Love 5, I have watched countless Love 5 fanfics. . There is no doubt that this book is number one. . The author's writing style is delicate, his writing skills are very solid, and he handles the emotional lines very well. The only shortcoming is that the pace is slow and the plot progresses slowly. (Complaint: The author has 190,000 words and has not graduated from high school. Does he want to write 5 million words?) It can be seen that the author is a very thoughtful person and wants to write Love Apartment 1-5, and add some original creations. However, this can easily cause readers' aesthetic fatigue and make it difficult for novice writers to master their writing skills. It is not recommended to run through the whole drama. It would be better to select a few outstanding and impressive plots and then replace them with the protagonists. It is recommended to highlight more original plots. Dali's family background and the protagonist's family background are good breakthrough points. . . . (I really hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch, and of course he won't collapse) Everyone's youth is beautiful. Although there may be many dissatisfactions in reality, being able to restore one's youth in a novel and give oneself a perfect ending should be what all readers hope for. . The above book reviews are only personal opinions, please don't criticize if you don't like them.

I watched it again from beginning to end, except for the slightly awkward beginning, the rest is almost perfect. Very few new writers have such good writing skills. The character design that is basically in line with the original work is eye-catching. The protagonist integrates into the apartment from the landlord level without being obtrusive, and the writing is delicate. When I saw the big chapter about Children's Day Gifts, I was really surprised by Meijia's monologue. It vividly displayed the characters and handled the emotional lines quite properly. I'm looking forward to the next plot. . Waiting for this book to be released.

Why is it so sweet, but I am starting to be afraid? I am getting more and more scared, as if it is a dream I seem to know what I am afraid of Strong efforts are starting to look more and more like results I can't tell the truth from the text. Who is it? "Most of the stories written by all authors are about Dali becoming a cute little woman after being with the protagonist. When she becomes more and more like a little woman, she feels strange and is no longer the almighty Dali, another child of others." Homogenization I am thinking about how to change the problem of homogeneity In fact, there are only two ways to write novels Write small characters into big characters and make big characters into small characters A perfect person, give her humanity A cowardly ordinary person A mediocre person, endow him with greatness Between lovers, struggling is a matter of pulling each other apart We have seen too much of Li Fan's efforts in this love He worked hard, mostly in his studies and to resist the pressure of not being optimistic about the two of them She is not the 20-year-old after the college entrance examination But how to get closer to the other her How to write so that she can grow up instead of losing herself during the love period Just like what she said to Zhang Wei I like the one who insists on yourself, works hard, knocks out his front teeth and swallows it in his belly With a boyfriend who has neither academic pressure nor financial pressure, nor high demands on his career How can we make each other better The tension of the characters, Comes from contrast And **, including character, situation, choice What she said is to step out of your comfort zone How to write it Never fall into darkness But this is a big deal Chapter, it's too early to think about this now You have just cleared the college entrance examination copy, and the rewards have not been settled Thinking too much Including me also thinking about turning my perspective to other couples Look for the paragraph I wrote How to dig? Yifei and Zhanbo are siblings. The younger brother is adopted and seems to be a single-parent family How did Hu Yifei's strength and Zhanbo's emotional idiotism and cowardly escape come about? Both of them are academic masters, but their personalities have gone into two directions. An extreme Wanyu ran away from home and never ate the fireworks of the world. How can we let her fall into the mortal world The Yumo Moonlight clan is afraid of aging, and their empathy may be the worst in the apartment How to make her calm about the years and shift her focus from the body To the spiritual world I remember she is a beauty consultant And her empathy is different from Wanyu's Wanyu has really never experienced hardship, the eldest lady, clean and pure but not smoky Yu Mo, you can't say that she is shallow, she has really studied aesthetics. It's difficult, but I always feel that her focus is a bit skewed and I can't explain it Guan Gu Guan Gu is honest and honest, but in fact he has an impatient side Always teases him for committing seppuku, but this also shows that behind the calmness, there are high frequency of emotional ups and downs Unlike Mika, it goes as quickly as it comes Because of a magic trick in his childhood, Guangu said that he had never done a bad thing This kind of person is quite stubborn when he is serious, and he is not as rational as Dali Nolan, everyone knows, goddess, nana All good, top-notch tennis, logical analysis can directly break Zeng Xiaoxian's trap, a pillar of the radio station, young and beautiful, gentle and virtuous, generous, friendly and considerate When she was on the stage, a radio colleague chatted with her very happily, and finally went to the bar to drink together 🍺Watch⚽ But the other party expressed After thinking about it, she slapped her in the face and refused cleanly However, Lisa Rong was a sinister person. Lisa Rong said that Zeng Xiaoxian was the meanest among the crowd. She said it was true The weakness was the loneliness after the divorce. She was afraid that she applied for the midnight radio station She did not Sense of security Tang Youyou Wanyu has no pyrotechnics, but she has the most pyrotechnics A gossipy talker who likes to add drama, but works hard and studies hard, is the most grounded in persuading others, and has the most acceptable perspective Have you seen EVA? The strongest defense there is called the wall of the heart People can never truly understand each other And in the utopia of love apartment, the tension of the text comes from the collision, fit and completion of different character flaws Dali has gained sensibility, Zhanbo has a sense of responsibility, Wanyu has a sense of fireworks, Lu Ziqiao is no longer a prodigal, Qin Yumo has learned to change his heart, Yifei Zeng Xiaoxian and Life and Death have become each other's masters🔑, becoming more and more rounded The ending of this story is growth What we write is a run-in In fact, I think that since the timeline changes directly, it does not necessarily have to follow the original version The order in which different characters appear can be changed appropriately Of course, it depends on the plot whether it is necessary To be honest, character flaws that are not caused by lack of love are not easy to write about Guangu's cold war with his father and Nuolan's fear of marriage are two relatively easy entry points I sorted out the records in the group and sent them here

I have never read such a frustrating novel

Actually, I feel that people don't like the first person because they wrote too many essays in the past😂 Most of the compositions start with me in the first person, and then I read many compositions in the first person. As a result, I am not interested in reading the content when I see the novel in the first person. I have missed a lot of good novels. In fact, I just saw that the first person was discouraged, but I saw that many people I supported it, so I read it patiently. The story is very good, and I hope you can calm down and read it. If you really don't like it, then there is nothing to lose by just leaving silently. Reading makes you happy and peaceful. I hope you can find a book that suits your taste.

This book is my favorite among all the Dali fanfics I have read. There is not much plot about Long Aotian, and the emotional line is very delicate, but sometimes it is a bit tangled. PS occasionally inserts an extra chapter. I almost thought it was the main text. Come on, author.

I think you should define this book as a romance novel and give me back my tears.

I am dying to wait for the update! Only the beautiful photos of the dog can comfort my young heart Kneel down and ask for the beautiful photos

Big cheers for the author! I still want to watch it after watching it

Eunuch, I'll send you the blade! 🔪🔪

To be honest, this is the best love apartment fanfic I have ever read. The pace is tight and the character creation is quite good and very immersive.

It's time to push yourself, write homework for twenty minutes for one like, and one hour for one comment 🤐🤐🤐 (Don't mess around qwq)

There are always people in the comment area saying why it is not in the third person, eh, the first person is not suitable, it is so awkward, haha, it is because you don't love it enough, like me, I can read it with gusto no matter what person it is, I am already reading it in the third person. (Silently complaining about the author's shortness and weakness, you might as well save some, save more, and send them out together) "Please improve"

As you said, there are many points buried in this book When I read it three times, I analyzed word by word and read word by word But when I saw two people misunderstanding, I still cried Everyone's dilemma, everyone's difficulties Jin Yong's " "The Eight Parts of the Dragon", all emotions are sinful, and no one is unjust It tells the story of asking for something but getting it The scene of Li Fan kicking in the door reminds me of this Think about it carefully, everyone is a poor person Li Fan, he was in a car accident and time traveled, everything in his previous life became an illusory one. Having a girlfriend from the sky and a series of high-intensity training without preparation As a God's perspective next to the TV, when you look at the characters, do you have the arrogance of sitting in the clouds and overlooking everything? You are just dolls controlled by the screenwriter, I know everything But, he cherishes the most , but it happened to be destroyed by what he was most proud of and feared What would happen if one day, Dali left me and everyone found out that I was a fake I can't say Dali, her life was completely rewritten the moment Li Fan appeared Sometimes I feel Mo The name goes against her, apart from age, appearance and skills, she must have some bigger differences with the original version At that second I realized that it was feelings Dali had feelings for Zhang Wei, but she didn't know it until the moment she got jealous In the final analysis, the original intention was just once Internship is no different from other internships But here Dali is different Her active pursuit is not an internship, but because of love at the beginning I always remember her words after confessing If it weren't for Sister Erniu, I am sure that she would Won it for the first time Experimental love is the next best solution Not boyfriend number one, she was looking for a real couple from the beginning Eleven years have passed, enough data has been collected, enough shared memories have been collected, and even the matter of liking is something I have read through books and thought about. Tong's Dali came into contact with the emotional world earlier than the original version More smiley, more shy, more coquettish, cunning, punishing, and even jealous When Li Fan hesitated about love, Dali said "Oh, why do I have a headache" Is this what the super academic said? At the age of 17, she has actually never stepped out of the shadow of her family Unlike Zhang Wei, apart from her studies, her encouragement to Li Fan, empathy, and rationality are actually not that much Unknowingly, she is enjoying being a little girl if she has the capital." She has not grown into the Zhuge Dali we are familiar with For example, because Li Fan went to a bar, she sat on her back and asked him to do push-ups She became angry, arrogant, and the baby was unhappy Is this what Zhuge Dali can do? Fool, your attachment to your boyfriend is actually more than his attachment to you Lu Ziqiao Lu Xiaobu's change was the most unexpected and surprising His greed for money and lust were all lost to trust I met I am a noble man and have so many sincere friends. If I work hard enough, I will definitely be able to stand out and reach the pinnacle of life In the whole apartment, because of Li Fan, the world line has changed the most, first and foremost Dali, followed by Zi Qiao Yes, Lu Xiaobu is Who is this person? He is a deceiver and a smooth talker without a word of truth. He is a middleman who relies on his words to make a living. However, we have all forgotten that he is just a young man in his early 20s. At the age of 6, his family has fallen into poverty and he is struggling in society. He can't believe others and others can't believe him However, if you are willing to give him trust, care, equality, and you are strong enough (Li Fan's banknote ability), he will never take you as an enemy I don't know when Zi Qiao begged Li Fan , will the rift caused by class be torn apart again Fortunately, both of them are very loyal Chen Meijia Why would Lu Ziqiao, a playboy like him, be willing to spend his life with her? Because she is stupid enough, naive enough, simple enough, and confused enough. Such a silly and sweet person, cheating her has no money and no conscience So what? You still abandoned her, twice The pain, Dali and Li Fan, you are really still the same Children The rent is all coins Please don't drive me away, I really have no place to go Love is vulnerable in the face of life No matter how much they bluff, they will always be weak Lovely Love Apartment is a utopia The other two pairs also have their shining points, but there is nothing to dig into yet. The stability behind Teacher Zeng's wretchedness is quite interesting Zhang Wei has said enough before, so I won't repeat it.

I have always felt that Brother's book is very well written, because the plot in this book is actually a fan novel about an iPartment. In fact, it has begun to break away from the constraints of the iPartment to create its own plot. This is very rare in fan fiction. The Dali in it is not the same Dali as before. There is Li Fan who has interspersed her life for 11 years. His growth trajectory has changed. She is a brand new one. Zhuge Dali was created by her senior brother. I don't understand it very well, but many people in the book review area complained about Zhuge Dali's character. After 11 years of companionship, what Zhuge Dali fell in love with was not Li Fan's ability, but his gentle, kind, brave and correct outlook on things if he worked carefully and didn't complain. As for the word licking the dog when you use it to describe Li Fan, I think it is not quite correct, because for a time traveler like Li Fan, Zhuge Dali occupies the majority whether he just time traveled or spent time with him, and others are not very familiar with him. With his character, he will certainly be kind to Dali. Because there is only one person in the world that you care about and who is relatively close to you. Maybe you agreed to the internship relationship just because you were afraid of being exposed and worried that others (such as Dali) would be sad at the beginning. Later, you really fell in love with Zhuge Dali, so you felt lonely and afraid. As a time traveler, his fear is greater than that of ordinary people in love. Finally, there is the matter of iPartment. IPartment is a comedy, and its plot is often driven and composed of farce and coincidences. If you insist on saying that these coincidences are simply ****, why can't you just say it? Then you might as well spray the iPartment too. The first point is to dig and fill holes. The second point is that he can create a new plot based on the main theme of the love apartment, unlike ordinary fan novels, which focus on the plot of the original work and do not focus on the protagonist's own affairs. What is the main tone of iPartment? In my opinion, it is still a happy coincidence, farce, love and growth. This is the world of love apartment, and the main theme of this book is also the same.        ，， Among these coincidences and farces, what are reflected are the distinctive characteristics of the characters and the vivid emotions of the characters, which cannot be sprayed.

The author said that it will be updated after graduation in June

The book ends with 122 pictures, and there are two hot spots, one for the protagonist and the heroine, one for Zhan Bo and one for Yifei, which is not easy. I have been reading books for 3 or 4 years, and so far I have only read three books with hot spots. This book counts as one, and it is the only love-oriented book among the three. Really, when I first started reading books, there was no difference between first person and third person, only the difference between good stories and bad stories. But later, there were fewer good stories, and then they were slowly introduced, and I got the wrong option of only reading the third person In fact, it cannot be said that it is wrong to only read the third person, but because the first person has a strong sense of substitution, it brings in good stories, and the more you read, the better the story becomes, but brings in bad stories, and the more you read, the more disgusting you feel. To sum up, the threshold for an author is too low. You can basically become an author if you can read. The result of the low threshold is that the base of bad stories is very large. For example, Notes on Grave Robbers is a first-person novel, but it is a good story. We can draw the conclusion from it that novels only lie in good stories and bad stories, not in the first or third person I can assure you that this book is a good story, but compared with Tomb Raiders, it is not that good, but it will not become more disgusting like a bad story. It is definitely a novel worth reading.

I just wrote the article because I was so angry with you. Now I have 300,000 words. I hope you can come back and update it before my word count exceeds yours. It is a pity that such a good story is cut off like this.

The author has recently revised the proposal report, added many courses, and started working on the final text. So I hope you can understand that he has been very busy recently and has few updates. He will be fine after he is busy for this period of time.

Five-year love fan I have been exposed to the first season of Love Apartment since 2013, and now in high school, Love Apartment has also ushered in its finale. To be honest, after 14 years of Love Four, it has been six years, and I didn't feel so uncomfortable at that time. The unfinished ending of Love Four gave me too many thoughts, and I know that there will always be another season. Now it's finally the finale, and there won't be a sixth season in the future. There are too many reluctances, but the story has an ending and life must go on. But at least you can still search for fans online. I look forward to my senior brother's book. The story of the love apartment can continue, Season 6 and Season 7.

In a post, he explained that the author recently revised the project proposal report, added more courses, and started working on the final text. So he has been very busy recently. I hope he can understand the lack of updates. He will be fine after he is busy for this period of time.

Some of my own opinions: Because of Li Fan's poor grades in the second grade, the teacher assigned Zhuge Dali to Li Fan as a separate study committee member. At this point, Li Fan entered Zhuge Dali's world. After Li Fan chased away several people who bullied her in the name of celebrating for Zhuge Dali, he was framed for reporting premature love. The teacher punished him by standing on the bench all morning. Zhuge Dali wrote a 10,000-word self-reflection letter for Li Fan. Zhuge Dali began to change.

We are soliciting for prizes, we are here to provide supporting roles in Brother Shi's works (PS: In addition to the iPartment fanfiction, there are also supporting roles in Brother's new book "Online Dating Cheated 8,000 Yuan") will be played by I will screen by myself (ps: we will publish the winning list on the 14th and every afternoon until all the prizes are sold out, a total of 25 places). As long as you win the prize, you will get a free reading code for the Gou Ge e-magazine, first come, first served, while supplies last. How to participate: Reply your participating character information to this post, and note the title of the book after the character. The winner will take a screenshot and enter the book club group to contact and manage "Strawberries of the Wei Family". Seats are limited, I wish everyone a prosperous career

There's actually nothing to complain about in the first person of this book. The common first-person narrative has always been criticized by readers for its limitations in narrative techniques, and at the same time, the perspective is severely limited. This is what is called no sense of substitution. But this book is not actually first person in the traditional sense. It can be understood as replacing all the protagonist's names with "I" on the basis of third person, and adding more psychological descriptions of the protagonist. This also meets the lens requirement of "one centimeter around the protagonist", so it will not affect the sense of immersion. It is recommended that readers who have read this book can read it first and get a feel for it.

Um, how should I put it, actually I think the concept of love in Dali's original work is a bit problematic. Zhuge Dali Wants Me to Confess is very consistent with the concept of love in Dali's original work, but this also makes Zhuge Dali a character who doesn't think much about himself. In Aiwu's dramas, maybe due to length reasons, Dali's character is not full-bodied and sometimes feels like a tool. After all, things that are too perfect are the least human. The charm of fan fiction lies in inheriting and exploring the original work. Therefore, isn't the humane and powerful force in this book more lovable? Love is a powerful emotion. If a person in love is still rational all the time, it would be too outrageous. Therefore, I personally feel that the transformation of Dali's view of love in this book is more comfortable. Instead of blindly following the original work, I chose Dali, who is not yet complete, as the entry point. It will not be too abrupt or conflict with the original work. This is Dali living in another possibility. If I really want to say it, Dali in this book is happier than the original work. This is a good attempt. For some people who can't accept the slight change in Dali's character, it may be a bit unacceptable. If you have any opinions, please watch the 13th episode of iPartment 5, Danmu Space, and then discuss it.