Mysterious Journey

I feel like this book has some potential. The setting is advanced layer by layer, the writing is in-depth, and it doesn't feel like a new author at all.

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It's okay. It's not easy to find one like this at the starting point.

1. First of all, this fantasy is not a traditional fantasy, not a traditional fantasy, not a traditional fantasy! ! ! It is a fantasy book with a bit of fantasy Then this book will involve a lot of elements. Essentially, it will have everything that a fantasy should have. Everything in it is completely fictional, so don't think too much 2. There is not just one protagonist, everyone is flesh and blood. There is a story and there is a childhood. It doesn't mean that one or two chapters pop up and then it is finished. Friends who hate the slow pace, please don't save it, otherwise I will feel uncomfortable if you keep reading and collecting it. 3. I haven't really written the main line of the novel yet, I'm still laying the groundwork, yes, I'm still laying the groundwork! There are no villains or decent people in this book, just everyone struggling for their dreams 4. The holes dug will be filled! 5. If you like this book, I hope you will read it patiently. Thank you for your support and free recommendation votes. I also hope that you will not be stingy. This is my motivation to continue creating (ω)🌹

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You can write more plainly. After all, it is an online article and you can write a group portrait, but I think you should establish the protagonist's image, and I think it is too complicated. But the first book should be used as a practice, and you can write freely. The style is a bit like the apocalypse forecast, but I think your writing style should be more delicate, but the details are not as sharp as Fengyue. Also, you can have more supporting roles, or you don't have to play them immediately, but if you keep focusing on the protagonist, your book will be criticized. As I said before, when you write a web article, the web article must have a protagonist. I think this protagonist is like a tool person, driving the story line and promoting the characters, and the protagonist is a bit eclipsed. Also, what are the characteristics of the protagonist? In fact, the above will not make your book popular, but if the character positioning is not there, I am afraid that you will write it yourself. What kind of person is the protagonist? It looks like the protagonist is a psycho. He gets good and bad sometimes, and the psycho is also a coward. It feels like the protagonist you have set will be a coward, but the unset protagonist is like killing a chicken, which looks a bit unsettling.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Yuyujiang, would you like to ask if there will be a female protagonist in this book? φ(^∇^ )

If you don't have pig's feet, then I wish the author the best of luck to you as soon as possible.