Gods Left Behind

Thank you very much to Mo Qingcheng for the huge recommendation vote. This is really important for a new writer! Thank you (｡•ㅅ•｡)♡, don't say anything else, I will add more updates, and try to finish writing the prologue in these days, and enter the real troubled times!

It's a good book, but the description is a bit cumbersome. The plot needs to be moved faster and the writing style should be more concise and not too depressing! Come on! ٩( •̀㉨•́ )و Get!

Thank you for your votes and favorites_(:з∠)_ Red envelopes will be sent out from time to time, but they will be updated regularly. There will be thousands of updates tomorrow and the day after tomorrow ε-(=｀ω´=) So, what are you waiting for? ㄟ(≧◇≦)ㄏ Come and bookmark this diligent author? (ㅅ˘ㅂ˘)

I am very easy-going (｡･｀ω´･｡) Really, Fried Chicken is easy-going (σ-`д･´) Not social at all (｀ε´) Come and play duck o(｀ω´*)o

On the first day I posted, I got three recommendation votes from DaDa. I was really flattered. Thank you, boss. I will keep up my efforts. Also, the number of articles saved has exceeded 100,000. I hope you can save them and be ready to be sold at any time (≧∇≦)/

Should it be rewarded? ! Should I hit me with recommendation votes? Should we promote the collection more and let more people read Iris's books (^_－)≡★ Yes! ! ! ! ! Trouble, trouble, Recommended tickets are very rare, open sesame, get the red envelope, mommy mommy hum! ! Call for recommendation votes! !

After browsing for a while, I would like to make some suggestions. Let me first declare my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't comment. Now let's get to the point: 1. The writing style of this work is rather gloomy, but I feel that the author's writing style is a bit immature (I also have this problem), and I can't control this gloomy writing style. I suggest you write a little more briskly to avoid this flaw; or you can practice hard to control this gloomy writing style. It depends on you. 2. There are some bad sentences in the work... There is nothing to say about this. I can only suggest that you check it several times before sending it out. It is best to read it more. 3. The last sentence is just two words: persistence. I'm done.

There are some speech problems, but the rest are pretty good.

Collected, follow.

I've finished reading Chapter 11. The more I read, the more addicted I am, and the updates are pretty fast.

The plot is clever and the atmosphere is well rendered. Come on

I also want red envelopes🥺🥺

How should I put it? It has been updated for forty days and more than 220,000 words. Slowly, a picture has been unfolded. I have written a lot of what I want to write, and also a lot of what I could not write originally. As a newcomer, I know that the book has flaws, but I believe that hard work can make up for the shortcomings. I will pursue it bit by bit, explore it, and pursue better content and abilities that are more eye-catching to my book friends. Two hundred thousand words equals the completion of the preface, equals a broader, grander, and more difficult-to-control worldview, equals a new journey, and equals a better display of one's own writing style. It is not easy to write these two hundred thousand words, but it may be even more difficult for people to read [I am too rubbish (*/ω＼*)]. But even so, there is still a lot of great support. Although it is silent and insignificant in their eyes, for me, it is really like rain, refreshing! It's been so hot for a long time, I can see it in my eyes [ranking regardless of size or order! There may be some omissions, so it's difficult to list them all! @ @ Pig @Endless Universe in the Corner @091 @Rabbit Master @ @fallen angel Ⅱ @Lelori @ @ @solute moon @ Chaoyang @Yinxuan Gongzi @ @ @ @Klax @vu @1586 @@ @Please love me who belongs to you @ @MoQingcheng003 [To ensure that you won't be dazzled by it, I have blanked out a few boxes, hahahahahaha] I can't repay you, I can only sing a song for everyone: The river flows eastward, wow, the stars in the sky join the Beidou (o´`o) Hey, hey, hoho, join the Beidou! When you see injustice on the road, roar, take action when it's time to take action ('へ') Rush through Kyushu! Hey duck, duck! Hey, hey, duck! ! (￣ω￣ゞ When you see injustice on the road, you roar, and you take action when it's time to take action, rushing through Kyushu!! ( • ̀ω•́ ) ，！ —————————————————————————— ，！，！ (,,ω,,) ！ ，，，，，！！ ！！

Although I don't know much about Western mythology, I can tell from the language that you and I both want to create with profound thoughts, but it's just one thing and one thing.

It's really good. Although the previous three eras were a bit weak, you can still read it if you stick to it. The writing is above the average level at the starting point. It's still okay. Let's cheer each other on.

Fantasy, the battle of gods, embarking on a journey of love and hate, cheers for you, I have voted for a return visit

Come on brother, I've already invested, you can't let me lose money🤪

Why hasn't the author signed the contract yet?

Personally, I don't really like to watch this kind of epic western fantasy, but there are definitely people who like it. Let me talk about the signing issue. Fantasy editors currently only have Xuanwu. I have been working in fantasy for a while. According to my experience, your beginning is too grand. Qidian editors don't like this kind of beginning. There are a lot of them. Damn, it's too vulgar. Many people have written about it before. It's not a novel setting, and the foreshadowing is long and slow. If I hadn't come here specifically to read it, ordinary readers would have been directly dissuaded. I suggest that everything in the front be related to the work, and don't treat it as the main text. Start with the protagonist, and then modify it to quickly enter the main line. Just a personal suggestion, if there is any discrepancy, please don't comment and delete the post if you don't like it.