Fate's Floating Sign

Here are some shortcomings of the Raitu chapter: First, the plot involving Xu Lai regaining his memories and the sealing of the Heavenly Sign moved too quickly, and there wasn't enough build-up, resulting in insufficient appeal in the early stages. Secondly, Xu Lai and Tu Yue's second incarnations don't have much interaction, making their emotions seem less rich and lacking in immersion.

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Wow! Everyone who voted for this recommendation is an angel! I don't even know what to say! Here's the picture! ❤️❤️❤️

I didn't expect it to take so long to post this closing statement. First of all, this book is a disaster 😂 Originally, I planned for five chapters, but I've only written two so far. Before starting "Nancheng Yao," I also thought about writing this book up to the Tongye chapter and then ending it, but I felt like not many people were reading it.

Ah! Don't waste your recommendation votes on this book! I've already applied for completion! My status should change in the next few days! Go vote for my "Nancheng Yao" instead!!

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Your first chapter was very successful, I have to give you credit for that. You must keep a good pace in the plot. Think about how many words you want to write before you start writing, and then build the plot around that. You can use elements like changing generations to expand the plot, but the logic must be rigorous, and the plot should seem absurd. Personal opinion

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Wow!! It's finally finished and approved! Hahahahahaha