Madam, Please Stop

It's so fucking awesome. I was reading this book while walking on the road today. When I looked up at the girls on the roadside, I suddenly felt like a woman's world.

The overall idea of ​​this book is really good, keep it up.

Well written! The writing is concise and very engaging! The plot is compact and reasonable! Not bad!

Ahem, just have a single female lead. I watched a similar one some time ago, and then I started a harem (reverse harem), hanging several women at the same time, and then I called other men green tea bitches 😰

Would my dignified seven-foot-tall man read this kind of book? Funny! One hour later~ Short, read 😜

The first thing I hate is that the protagonist eats soft food, and the second thing I hate is that the protagonist has a harem. Because I look down on men who use women's money to support other women.

After reading the previous chapters, the author's creativity is great. In a society where women are superior to men, you can write female characters as independent and strong as men, but the plot of writing a effeminate protagonist who is beautiful and coveted really makes me sick to my stomach.

The author's writing is actually great! I think the protagonist is capable and quite good. What kind of harem are you opening? There is a single heroine, and there is a treasure girl. Isn't she delicious? (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧The author must continue to pay attention to his body. In addition--you are too short!

After reading the first few dozen chapters, I was a little confused. In the world of heroines, pretending to be women, why don't you take off your pants and fart?

In recent chapters, the male protagonist has behaved like a bitch, which is extremely uncomfortable! This chapter is very unpleasant to read! What's the matter with Shuangwen's displeasure? The author simply gave the protagonist a "blood-locking buff", just to save the child, and then send his mother back when he was being chased. Just send him back, and tell the enemy the address where he would send him back before he left. What's the point of looking like this? Since there is an author who "locks the blood", why not practice a hammer and directly control the world with the protagonist's aura and set its rules and views of right and wrong, good and evil? I think the outstanding thing about "The Story of a Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" is that a real mortal like Han Li needs to cultivate to the fairyland in addition to the necessary opportunities. He also needs to work hard, give up all unnecessary fantasies, and even restrain his desire for certain things. Only then can he enter the fairyland as a mortal. Isn't this the same as our real life? Can ordinary people become the richest man even if they work hard and have no background or vision? Except for necessary opportunities, you must not exhaust your life's efforts, restrain yourself, be extremely self-disciplined, and give up most of the happiness in life. Only then can you have a slight possibility of success! Do you still want to be a saint? ? ? If you are not at the top of this world, what qualifications and strength do you have to improve the shortcomings of civilization. If an ordinary person wants to become the richest man, if he still has a fragile heart, he may just help an old man who has fallen down, and his wife and children will be separated for half a lifetime. Is there still a chance to become the richest man? Han Li has experienced many desperate situations of life and death along the way to becoming an immortal. He made a wrong step and fell into a state of weakness for a moment. Also build a hammer fairy! Why can you, an ordinary person, become an immortal? And the second generation is going to lose to you? All cultivation worldviews only allow the strong to survive and the weak to perish, but there is no right or wrong of good or evil, including the world background of this book created by the author himself. What nonsense are the Three Saints and Five Sects? There is no moral good or evil at all. If there is, it is also hypocritical. It's just that the benefits are not big enough. I don't see the Rongtian Cauldron reflecting everyone's true face like a mirror. The quality of the protagonist set off by Gu Ran's background is even more commendable! But if you don't have absolute strength, you can only rely on the "author buff" to forcefully unfold the plot. Then the story loses its logic and lacks immersion, making people instantly become dramatized! In this case, the protagonist's current behaviors are very childish and full of romantic fantasies.

What the hell, is this the end? ? ? There are a lot of big things that I didn't write clearly. Suddenly speed up the progress and then end it? ? ? ? I really wasted so many points and voted for you monthly. I must be crazy.

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I don't know what to say, I just hope there will be a single heroine (in addition, the heroine is so beautiful, I feel a sense of substitution 😏. If I have a harem, I will not have a sense of substitution. After all, I am a dedicated man 😌)

I have read two hundred chapters and Pig's Feet has not yet taken the first step towards becoming an immortal 🙂🙂

The protagonist's strength improves very slowly. He is always weak and has few trump cards. He basically relies on luck and thighs to survive the crisis, and he basically doesn't feel happy.

It feels like my side is forcibly frozen at 270 points. I feel dizzy.

It's well written, but it's a pity that it should have been posted on a female channel. I don't mean it in a derogatory way, it's just that many readers of male videos will reject this female figure when they see it, and editors are not optimistic about it. However, there are many books with this background on female channels. The author's writing is more humorous and the writing style is not bad. The part about cultivation is not trivial. If published on female channels, the results will be much better.

... It was inexplicably funny when I saw it. I don't know why but it just felt funny. By the way, how is the heroine? After these 100 chapters, two characters appeared, one of them showed his face, and the other one was still a crow.

I actually saw the finished book on the new book jacket.

I've been out with my family for the past two days, come on! Shanshan, I still have 223 left to contribute and I can apply.

The title of this book has nothing to do with its content.

Recently, I have nothing to do. Searching for books on the homepage, I unexpectedly found several books that I had read before. That's why it didn't appear on my bookshelf. I also liked her very much at that time. But you will always give up when you reach a certain point. I suddenly felt a little emotional. After much thought, I don't know where to post it more appropriately, so I'll post it here. After all, this book is one of the best parts of my memory. It completely established my hobby. Just think of it as a belated speech. When I finished this book, I felt unspeakably uncomfortable. Nearly 200 photos have been saved. But when I see the end. Suddenly I don't want to look at it. It feels like an era has passed. Previous shortcomings have been diluted with the passage of time. The advantages gradually become more profound. In fact, the most important thing this book gave me is that it has many firsts! The first book club I joined, the first book I ordered, and the first article I posted about this chapter It is probably from that time that I became a complete starting point person There are too many thoughts that are hard to express Finally, I can only thank the author and all the big guys in the book club and this book. I have a wonderful memory because of you. See you again by fate.

Night Bird

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Why is there no Miss Song in the character introduction, and the author has dismissed her? ? 😭

Why doesn't the world of female heroes change to a world where men can live forever, but are weak? Women conquer the world through martial arts. This gives a sense of balance.

I don't know what to say, I just feel like my youth is over