Refining Demon Tutuo

The writing is messy and I don't know what it means.

The protagonist is too stupid, has no brains, and has some virginity. Others sell him out so quickly, and he still thinks he is smart.

I felt very unhappy when I saw Chapter 21 "Poor People". Those who kidnap and traffic children should be killed. It's just that the protagonist is incompetent. He has force and is stopped by the old housekeeper. He heard that the old guy said that there are many poor people in the world and he can't control them. As modern people don't know about fish stranded on the beach, do they care about this fish or that fish? It's one that can be saved.

Only after writing a book yourself can you understand the pain of writing a book.

To be honest, the author's writing is very good. It's just that the protagonist's character and main plot are vague and unlikable, and the whole plot seems confusing. The protagonist's character is not clear, and it is impossible to see the purpose of his thoughts and actions. He wanders around in the world in a muddle-headed manner, working as a monk for a day and clocking time. Such a protagonist, let alone the main plot. It is also mixed with reincarnated zombies, ghosts, evil spirits, and Dharmakaya, but there is no explanation. It seems that it is specially created for the protagonist, and the self-generated martial arts is all convenient. It seems that there is no fundamental method or a specific system when it is pieced together. It is confusing. The whole article seems a bit dark and depressing, and it feels like an article about officialdom conspiracy and fighting disguised as martial arts.

I've read dozens of chapters, and the quality is pretty good! It's just that the requirements of modern society are different, and it feels like you are missing the core of success, especially if there is a problem with the character development of the protagonist. You can just write a cool article to lower your intelligence, but you can only write a novel to lower your intelligence by writing a novel about a Madonna licking a dog. You are not reading a book just to be offended, and then leave if you feel uncomfortable. Even if it's selfish, it's cool! This is what human nature is. As a family, I sincerely hope my grades will improve. The writing is good.

I still want to see it before leaving the temple, but I have no desire to see it after leaving the temple. Hanging sheep's heads and selling dog meat.

Is the protagonist's IQ online?

The protagonist is a lackey of a Jin official

What's going on with the protagonist? And what's going on with his golden finger? I feel like there's something wrong with these two. They were all poisoned. Got slapped in the face. I still haven't solved my own problems. He also looks for trouble everywhere. The protagonist's martial arts skills come too quickly. Nor does it settle. I don't understand, what's the point of him following Liu Daguan? Work as a thug to look after homes and homes. Your martial arts skills haven't matured well either. Why are you recruiting people now? Even if you kill a few thieves. Comment on several cottages. Get some money, and then find a place deep in the mountains and forests to retreat. If you don't find a remote town deep in the mountains and old forests. Chen Wen wrote that his martial arts skills were similar to those of the Toutuo in Shaolin Temple. The above also said that he was much worse than Hong Qigong. Now he goes to Shaolin Temple to pursue the soldiers and beat them. There is something wrong with the value of force!

In this case, there must be a protagonist in the first Huashan sword debate.

You said you won't reveal your martial arts and still ask your apprentice to learn it. Changing your name will make it your own? ? ?

The book is called Practicing Demons. Is the protagonist following the path of demons? If yes, just watch it, not Holy Virgin Bitch, not mentally retarded

Just say this. Although I don't know where you were before, I want to say that your article has strong power. But you are too skillful and cover everything. You are thinking too much. I won't say too much if I offend others. Just asking, do you want to be famous or popular when writing this thing? When you make money, just make money steadily. It doesn't matter if you don't have money later. Just write down-to-earth, with all the bells and whistles and the word water. You are honest, you have spent 80% of your hard power on detours. In the end, there was no center, and the prose was terrible. You don't know how to do old-school martial arts, right? I'm afraid you have this kind of heart but not that kind of life. What fate? Just two words. Times.

The writing is okay, but it just keeps beating and killing. Bother. Also, the outlook of the protagonists in modern novels is too correct. I remember that there used to be some murderous maniacs as the protagonists, but now none of them are gone. They say the novels are all-encompassing, but in fact many of them are gone.

Sometimes the description is detailed, but if your skills don't allow it, don't write in such detail! It took half a chapter to write an inner monologue, and two chapters to finish with a decisive move. If your own skills don't allow it, don't write in such detail, it will look too watery.

The protagonist is obviously a master and has the experience of a high monk, but he actually says that he can't practice martial arts. Like that Taoist's secret book of swordsmanship, he doesn't read it to his apprentices. Poor internal skills can be said to be a problem of aptitude and physical problems, but it is definitely not a problem of knowledge. When he reaches his level, he can just read the general moves and external skills. As long as the internal skills are not unusual, he can know how to practice them. Will it still be difficult for college students to read high school books? Also, even if you don't know how to practice, you can still collect them to expand your knowledge.

The writing is quite good, but I like to spread Shaolin martial arts everywhere, which is a bit poisonous. I feel like the protagonist is a bit shameless in this regard.

Shaolin Temple is really unlucky, the martial arts skills are passed around by the protagonist, haha

Am I getting old? I feel that what the author wrote is very reasonable. There is no problem with logic and writing, and the words are correct. That's it, are the comments so vicious? Do you really think you are smarter than the protagonist? Innocent.

I remember there is a good book by a spiritual master, who is also a fan of The Condor Trilogy, so you can learn from it.

I have only read twenty chapters. Why does a modern person not change his image after traveling in the past for so long but continue to be a tutu?

This book is very good, but it's a pity that the financial resources are limited

How else can one write to comment on such a small army?

Not many people have read this book, but there are quite a few trolls.

I think the writing is pretty good. The key is that the strength is a bit confusing. I feel like I can beat anyone.

It's well written. Are there any other books like this?

It's all local energy, no popularity.

I finished reading it, I feel good, the fighting is well described

Now I can't come to ** to read. Reading a book is really hard.