Weird Invasion

After seeing Chapter 283, let's evaluate it. 1: The plot of the story is not bad, but the writing is limited and many plots cannot be described, so there are a lot of explanatory narrations, which leads to a poor viewing experience and makes readers feel that the word count is wasted. 2: The creation of the protagonist was a failure. The author should have wanted to create a perfect protagonist with super handsome appearance, calm personality, super high IQ, and decisive killing. But judging from the results we have seen so far, the protagonist has nothing outstanding except being handsome. He had a calm personality but was assassinated, made things difficult, and robbed his house. It was understandable that my family had concerns before, but I didn't dare to lift the table even after everyone left. I am an honest person. Even though he has a super high IQ, he doesn't notice that he has the ability to heal spirits. I ask him every day - no, there is a blood contract - no, copy - no, if you change the protagonist, you know who has the problem, copy someone else to give a blood contract, the mysterious organization is very mysterious, right? I can guess that there is something wrong with Vice-Government Xie. Be bold. People from a mysterious organization are full-blooded. How can they still be mysterious? Ask a question every day. After a little use, it will be clear. When someone makes things difficult for you, you only know how to talk, and it's really boring when you talk. 3: It doesn't matter if the protagonist fails to be created, but his ability is really weak. His ancestor is a god, but his own ability is very poor. An intermediate extraordinary person is almost overturned by Master Liu, and a high-level extraordinary person cannot stop a parasite of the holy species, and he is afraid that she will run away. To be honest, this book looks quite disgusting. It's a pity that there is a shortage of books now, otherwise I would have given up long ago

After seeing 169, I finally couldn't hold on any longer, and I finally understood why I ran away from Creation—but the problem is that it's still the same when I go back to the starting point, especially when many readers have been tricked by better novels. Let's take a look. Although the novel started out quite well, the writing style was different from five years ago, the storyline was from ten years ago, and the background of the novel was from fifteen years ago. High EQ: Ye Qinghui Low EQ: Unwilling to make progress It's really like what was said in the book review, only the first few pictures can be seen - it's so embarrassing, why did Tianhu end up like this at the beginning. With the background of the changing world, and then just stay in a small city to do things. To be honest, there is no problem with small scenes. After all, small scenes can be written well and reflect the big background-but this is not done at all. There are also all kinds of love and hate that can be said to be almost without reason, and events that do not consider logic are quite strange.

After reading a few pieces, I was a little dissuaded. From what I saw, Sangou's three views were unbearable at first. He smoked and was full of crooked thoughts. The acquaintances who later scolded the protagonist in a roundabout way really didn't understand how the author thought of portraying a twelve-year-old child in such a disgusting way. Of course, from another perspective, the author did portray the characters very vividly. The second is the protagonist. He knew about Sangou's various problems but did not really correct them. Instead, he just said a few words and said that he didn't care about the relationship between brothers or that he was difficult to discipline due to his identity. Hiding his sister is unjustifiable. Besides, the author said that the protagonist's family has a very strict upbringing. To be honest, I couldn't tell at all. In short, I think the author's biggest failure in the early stages of the book was the character of Sangou. (I only represent my immature remarks after reading a few chapters. If you don't feel comfortable, don't criticize me. I mean you are right)

I really feel that this book is such a pity~ The lack of writing skills of the protagonist at the beginning led to a bit of a dramatic character, but the flaws are not concealed. The mysterious atmosphere at the beginning, just like readers in the circle said, there is a kind of curiosity and desire for mysterious objects that keeps you reading, including the description of the character of the rural boy Sangou, which is very realistic. Although many people don't like him, I have tolerance for him. As for this novel, after it was put on the shelves, I really felt that after reading the novel for so many years, what is it about? ? ? Not to mention the separation between front and back, really, what is the meaning of waves in Honghu Lake? One wave is stronger than the other! ! ! I'm so angry that I want to die. I hate that iron cannot become steel. A work that is obviously capable of becoming a god keeps falling off again and again. You think you have reached the bottom line, but you find that this is just the beginning! ! ! ! Stick to the theme! In order to make money, you can make more money by calling people back and changing these inexplicable slap-in-the-face plots~

After it was put on the shelves, I saw 160 and couldn't stand it. Forced wisdom, always in the water, chirping Wai Wai Wai Wai Wai Wai Wai Wai Wai Wai Wai all kinds of inexplicable weak chicken villain, the result is to endure it, a meal of water, all kinds of words, without telling the background, it is simply throwing watermelons and picking sesame seeds, standing up the stickers as evidence, abandoning the book.

After reading it for two days, I feel that there is really a reason why the author is not popular. Thinking about the whole high-intelligence, good-looking and charming character, but the lack of ability can only forcefully lower the IQ of other people, making most of the female characters get excited when they meet. The Long Aotian routine from more than ten years ago is still used, and it is used in a substandard manner. When people in the officialdom are bullied, they just talk to others, thinking that Zhuge Liang can scold people to death, right? Or just set up a purely indifferent persona, and sit back and watch when things happen while you have various excellent personas. I can't write anything that feels good, nor can I write anything that's profound. It's really not interesting.

The setting is good, the language is good, the ghost setting ✔ But the character creation is distorted the sense of logic and rationality are poor some plots are suspected of excessive force it is very awkward to watch Especially the description of officials and official personnel, either the author cannot write a high-IQ protagonist, so the official IQ is weakened. Either the population of the Dazhang country in the article may be tens of thousands, and it is taller for a short person. It feels like eating pig-flavored chocolate, you have to scan it and don't let your brain 🧠 dwell on it.

The author's scalp went numb after reading the first few chapters. The quality is very good but then it completely fell apart. I didn't understand what was being said. The main plot was not advanced at all.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 23. There's no logic at all in anything written. It's nonsense for an ordinary person with no ability to say that he can see strange traces.

After reading forty chapters, the writing was quite good at the beginning. Both the character profiles and the overall structure were quite interesting. But the turning point came. At chapter twenty, the atmosphere that had been laid out with great efforts was suddenly abandoned and turned into a systematic text. Then you have a powerful but low-key grandfather in front of you. Your powerful and mysterious father has laid so much groundwork. Isn't it for the sake of inheritance that he guided you to the villa? But what kind of system is impossible to defeat? You are too blunt. I was just about to tell you how the plot will unfold later on. Good guy, the system reminds you that your mission must have reminders in your life. The words "Year Eater" are so direct that I almost told you. You spent two chapters to contact the person. You are so smart. Forget about the supporting characters, why do you want to downplay the protagonist? The reader himself has to bring himself into the protagonist to experience the world described by the author. I put myself into the protagonist and feel the plot. I will only feel that I am a Sabi. I am not the only one who feels this way after reading the same comments. Having said so much, I just want to ask, is your gold content as a platinum author reflected in the hydrology? The role of Sangou can completely replace the yin and yang eyes for the protagonist, and then delete this character, it will not affect the viewing experience at all, it will be the same with or without him.

Abandoned, the skill of Dream Eater is not needed, and it is pretending

Is the author a stallion? In it, every girl who can advance the plot a little bit has to have an emotional scene with the protagonist. Moreover, the background introduction routines of each female supporting character are exactly the same. It feels like they are all the routines of early online novels. They use various paper-like supporting characters to forcefully create conflicts and advance the plot. The first 200 chapters and after 200 chapters felt like they were not written by the same author. The plot was too slow.

The first ten or so chapters I read at night gave me chills down my spine. Something seemed wrong, and it began to mutate into a Taoist novel. The protagonist is a child, right? I somehow learned how to read palms. I wrote earlier that I had to think about the old turtle's prompts for a child for a long time before running away. It's too fragmented.

It's okay to watch without thinking. Compared with Hong Yue from the same period, you are too stingy in your writing, and you also forcefully pretend to be cool. This kind of show-off is so cool that you wrote a plot ten years ago.

After reading the beginning, I can read palms for a while, and then experience a lot of strange things, but I can't even understand the warning of the old turtle. I don't know what the character is. It is indeed an old book.

The sense of immersion in the front is really good, but I can't stand the back. I can't even take a look at urban literature.

I regret giving the recommendation vote as soon as I started reading those three chapters...

The subject matter is good, but suspense and horror are inherently difficult to write. When you meet something good, you should praise it. But the author is an old writer, and he is still tepid after so many years. It seems that it has not caught the reader's interest. Is your book any better? Decrypt the entire book about killing ghosts? There are exciting points, plot twists and turns, and readers agree. Without these things, the book cannot take off. Suspense is difficult to write, I hope it will be better.

To be honest, the country is not well written about in this book. You don't know if there are other departments besides this department, whether there are secret departments. It is also impossible for you to know whether your usually friendly neighbor is the country's intelligence agent, whether there is a secret team of the country among the veterans, and the country does not know anything about the supernatural events that have happened since a long time ago, maybe. There are more than one or a few guardians around the world, and who knows if there are people from the country. The country is powerful, but there are many places that need to be guarded. Is the country clueless about the organization that secretly carries out sabotage? Then this country has long been usurped.

I didn't use any of my skills properly. I only sold the talismans I painted. I didn't make a few attack cards. I just pushed the giant across the mountain. Wouldn't it be more fun to destroy hundreds of skeletons in the playground at once? The protagonist is extremely depressed. There is no further story about the rough stones picked up from the mountains. There are still two schools competing in martial arts, and they haven't seen it for more than 400 chapters. They do boring things every day, like sea water.

I thought I would find another good supernatural novel of the same type as Mysterious Resurrection, but I was disappointed. The writing before chapter 20 was very good, and the atmosphere was well rendered. However, starting from chapter 20, the style of painting suddenly changed. The scary atmosphere turned into comedy, and the mystery turned into something similar to a game mission. I couldn't read it anymore.

Generally speaking, this character is very smart at one moment, and very confused and messy at the other.

After reading Chapter 27, whether it is the younger brother who has a full view of the world (author, do you think he is very humorous?) Or is he in love with a smart intellectual (this setting, Master Platinum, must think he is very creative), I can only say that it is too poisonous. Master Platinum is just that.

The protagonist fought with the weird tree for so long but couldn't destroy a weak one and even ran to follow the transformed steel 😂

I quickly read a dozen chapters, and I don't know why you want to write a protagonist!

I feel that the dialogue pattern and writing style of the protagonist in this novel are too out of touch and there is no weird atmosphere. Skills that come readily without any foreshadowing. It has nothing to do with traditional Chinese culture. It may be due to review reasons. It's not like catching ghosts when we build a system that we don't even know what it is. Upgrading is not like upgrading. It's totally different.

After reading the next 800 chapters, I couldn't stand it any longer. I slowly stopped talking about the main plot. The protagonist talked about the doomsday. Instead, he was the biggest saint. He slipped away and watched Yue.

I can't stand it anymore. It's too late.

I started from one o'clock and chased until now four o'clock in the morning. Generally speaking, it is pretty good. I just caught up. Here is the attack of the back wave. There is not much to say in front of it. Just two words, chase. However, when I saw the answer here, I really felt a bit unhappy. Personally, I think it is a bit inconsistent with the setting of the academic master. Or is it because The impact of the amount of information was too great, so it was a bit slow. First of all, it was the foreshadowing laid at the beginning, the keywords mentioned by Mao Qi, then the rewards later, the sanctification in front of others, and finally the slander in my heart. I clearly knew that the system was a pretentious person, so why did I still avoid the correct answer perfectly? Furthermore, from the perspective of the reward mechanism of the system, only by working hard to eliminate the weird ones can you get rewards. How come it turns into building a high wall and hoarding food? Finally, the character of the protagonist, starting from the first life-eating monster, is a character who directly rushes to do it. If he is a stable type, shouldn't he just let the policeman shoot him? Why is the first thing to do is rush to do it? There is also the second case, which he obviously solved by himself, and the third one, who took out the knife. After all, he is only a high school student and has never experienced anything like this. Why do you want to stop him? , So the protagonist gives me the impression that he has a reckless character, but when answering questions, he gave me a feeling of being obscene and not a slut. Doesn't the author feel contradictory? I'm just a newbie who just got into the game. I don't want to brag or criticize. I just want to share my thoughts. Please don't criticize me. Everyone is welcome to discuss. ,

The author's book cannot be said to be bad, but the weird atmosphere is still created quite well, but the routines in the article are a bit old (the feeling of old routines from a few years ago), although the feeling of routines is not very obvious. But the plot can still be guessed. Even so, I clearly feel that the author has tried his best to break out of the routine and write it wonderfully. I hope the following can give people a bright feeling.