Online Game Star Chronicles

Coming😁😁😁

I have one thing to say, now is not the era of golden three chapters, but of diamond chapters. I would like to make a few comments. The setting is a bit broken, the plot advances too fast, the world view is too big, there are many typos, the transition transition is not natural enough, and the word count cannot be so watery that there is no trace (of course, the word count before the VIP chapter is not opened, because it does not cost money). The world view is too big, and the number of words is too large. If you can't control it, the result will be a bad ending or a eunuch. If the setting is not good enough and the plot is not exciting enough, it will lack the ability to attract readers. Secondly, too many poisonous points will discourage n people. Of course, not everyone has the same taste, so you don't have to pursue perfection. You just need to cater to the public's taste. Otherwise, you can only write on a stand-alone basis. (If you just write it for fun and realize your desire to write, then write whatever you like.) Finally, the recommended number of words for newcomers to write a book is 400,000-600,000 words (said by an editor) This is purely hand-written. I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you. Emmmm, if you can, give me an operation manager. I want to see what your novel can achieve in the end.

Author, I'm here to give you a little bit, all of them are my trumpets, as follows: Shi Yongmeng Wenren Xuanzhu Xiyun Man in the Mirror Qi Guan Xianglan Zhong Li Yi Yuan Hope to adopt,

Come on 😏😏😏

Let me help you change the first sentence of the introduction: I, Lin Xuan. A powerful man with a level of cultivation in the Sanxian stage was actually killed by a thunderbolt because of his carelessness when breaking through to the Youxian.

In the early stage, it focused on online game system flow, and in the later stage, it returned to orthodox cultivation. The world view will be huge later on, so be sure to look carefully.

Come on, the author, the writing is great. I recommend the book "Reverse the Immortal and Follow the Demon" by the way. (⑉••⑉)‥♡

Come on, wow, I really like online game novels.

Do you have so many recommendations? Come on!

The receptive ability of pig's feet is too strong. It will play games as soon as it comes to the earth. The author is not rigorous in writing.

Here, come on, "Snow Covers Jianghu" is here to see you

Newbies writing books, please give them some support and cheers.

I heard that the heroine is Bai Youyou, so I came 😏😏