Undead Players Online

1. The world view is complete, the plot is logically self-consistent, and the characters' basic IQs are online. 2. The writing style is acceptable, and at least more than half of the authors of the new book can be a bonus. 3. The writing method of the classic alien player flow, combined with the background of spiritual energy recovery, is quite looking forward to the subsequent development. As long as the author's outline does not collapse, the quality of this book will not be bad. I hope this book can be 🔥, so that I won't become a eunuch 😃 I ordered it all today and finished reading it. I will definitely invest in it when I reach level 4 😁

Nice! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! I also hope that the author will work hard to update. I can't see enough every day. Wow.

After raising it for more than a month, it seems that it is almost dying. . Seeing that this book is not popular yet, I realized that there may be something wrong with my previous judgment, so I will give a new book review. Let's talk about the advantages first. 1. The world view is complete and the plot is relatively complete. This is rare for a new author. I can score 85 points in this aspect 2. The writing is good, but the description of some events and characters does not seem to be at the level of a novice. Let's talk about the shortcomings. This shortcoming is something I just discovered. It's just that this book lacks humor and excitement. Generally speaking, it is a joke, with jokes as the punchline, and mood swings and extreme characters as the fun points. Those popular gamer-style novels generally treat the player as a charlatan and the protagonist as a real character, in order to create excitement and laughter. This book describes too much about the studio and the official game in terms of players. Players are here more as tools to promote the development of the plot, rather than as sand figures. The protagonist is even worse. No matter in the eyes of the local armed forces or players, it is not very impressive. In short, I got the feeling of "The Ordinary World" while reading a fantasy novel. Although the plot is okay, it just lacks the internal flavor. That's not to say that a more realistic style can't work. Mystery is also more realistic, but it has a strong style and can create its own jokes. And to be honest, the mysterious first few chapters are a bit discouraging. If you are not a master, I do not recommend writing QAQ. PS: The above only represents my personal views and may not be objective, comprehensive or correct.

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I feel like I can't stand this novel anymore. Let's just talk about the player's first job change. What the hell is this setting? Isn't it about the undead stream? Shouldn't it be an undead knight or something? I gave up when I saw this In addition to this text, I feel that the text is a bit jerky, not because of the lack of writing style, but because it feels like there is no warmth (it can only mean something that cannot be expressed in words, okay) And, alas, forget it

The main character is really miserable and I can't stand it. The protagonist cooperates with the prince, and the prince knight wants to kill the protagonist after taking advantage of it, which is tragic. The player Zhou Wenlin accidentally unlocked the spirit and became the only believer. The spirit called the protagonist a little summoner, and looked at him as a scumbag, which was miserable. All the secrets of the protagonist's identity are revealed, which is tragic. The protagonist is surrounded by people from another world and is miserable. Isn't it good to be a behind-the-scenes person?

Another thing I really don't understand is that this article assumes that the male protagonist has a selfless dedication personality? His dream is to carry the banner of saving the world? Do you want to be such a holy father? Are you a necromancer or a summoner? Move your summons to the opposing camp. I want to ask, if the camp wars, your summons will have to come to kill you, and then you still have a motherly smile on your face and continue to spend manpower and material resources to summon these killers? What kind of love is this? Devotion? Lack of basic restraint on one's summons. All people are true, kind and beautiful in nature. They are afraid that others will not know that they can't control it, so they go to the forum to say that they have no restraint on their summons. Oh my God, I really can't understand it. Since I have to be responsible for two worlds, does this mean that I can't control both worlds and let them develop on their own? So the male protagonist is positioned as a gatekeeper? You have to be tough when it comes to blacksmithing. Apart from leveling up, I haven't seen any increase in the male protagonist's combat power. Well, players will protect you. Yes, even those from the opposite camp will sincerely protect you. That's right. As long as you keep an eye on the door, both sides will protect you. You have really taken up the banner of protecting the world. The male protagonist is awesome👏🏻

Author, I found that your plot of starting the age of immortality on earth is a failure, it is very cliche. It should be about developing technology in the fantasy main world of another world, and then when the main world or the earth is invaded, the two cultures are exported at the same time. It will be more exciting to watch.

The world view in this world is generally easy to collapse! It's better not to write anymore later! It was the beginning of hell!

Why do you want to set up a divine creature that can travel into reality? According to your very sophisticated setting for each character in the entire article, if the divine creature comes into reality and develops followers, and then other divine creatures learn from it, how will the real world be destroyed? This is the reason why I don't like to wear both sides. Why can't we simply distinguish the game world from the real world? The protagonist is the most frustrated protagonist. Both sides don't take you seriously, and their summons don't take you seriously. Isn't it embarrassing?

Why did I suddenly feel like I really wanted the mage to kill the protagonist with one blow when I first watched the section of the restricted area, then collect the soul and find the coordinates to kill them all?

Why is it on the shelves and then publishing the public chapter?

Well, the mid-term should be **!

See Chapter 18. It can be said that there is no need to continue reading. Failure, 1 Can the protagonist cause natural disasters for players just after traveling through time? Did you get powerful items like godhead? ? 2 Is it the earthling (skeleton) talking to the hostile church NPC again? ? Author, do you really think you are playing a game? ? 3 The plot arrangement is not good. The author needs to think about how to arrange the design himself instead of copying it. Follow-up questions seem insignificant. I'm not interested in reading anymore! ! ! According to the plot development that the author wrote up to chapter 18, it is too short and lacks many necessary descriptions and foreshadowing. More than 18, more pages.

The recommendation vote for your novel proves everything. How can it be more enjoyable to read it for a long time?

Why does the protagonist summon players who are indifferent to limbs and grains when being hunted?

The early setting and plot arrangement are very novel, but along the way, the necromancer career setting is becoming more and more abnormal. There is no way. After all, the entire game has to rely on the protagonist's own ability. The nb ability is needed in the early stage, and restrictions must be added to the nb ability to facilitate use in the middle and later stages or temporary cheating, such as skill learning and racial equipment. In fact, it can be changed to make it easier for the necromancer to become too strong if there are too many. If there is a bug, isn't it because of the setting of the old gods and demons? The earth is also marked by the demons, so the magic power leaks to the earth. The broken old gods follow the mark and come to the earth to form two souls with the protagonist. Add some authority and other things as needed and apply the golden finger originally given to the protagonist. This solves the problem of game development and upgrading, and can also strengthen the control of reality and make guest appearances. The return of the old gods can also have a first-person perspective or something. Then there is the impact of magic on reality. In fact, the first cat incident was written quite well and even made me want to jump. Later, when the players wake up, it may become more chaotic, so the real settings can also be changed. The general background of the discovery of anomalies and the birth of demons remains unchanged. If the industry becomes more developed, then in the early stage of the game, you can rely on scenery, exotic culture, and fantasy special effects to attract players. The difficulty of the occupation can be increased to the point of death, either with high death requirements or with a life-or-death struggle when you wake up. This prevents daily wars in reality, mainly due to Official personnel, professional players, and those with extraordinary talents. Anyway, there are only a few people in the main line. Other players can be tool players. They rely on skills and magic tools (?) To fight as a team. There are also a few civilian professions that are not awakened. In this way, there will be much less practical troubles. For those difficult professions, a few pioneer representatives will be specially assigned to intersperse them not only to promote the plot but also to add a lot of content. In the beginning, there was a rookie between the two official staff and the boss was really cool.

Update on the 30th + work signing + spending money chapter. . . If you do this, will anyone still invest?

What is written here? It's a mess, the front is pretty good, but the back doesn't feel like it was written by the same author.

I have read a few chapters of this, but I don't want to read it. I feel that the protagonist can do whatever he wants on the earth's network. Whatever he wants to do, he will come out immediately as soon as he thinks about it. You are in a different world, and it is not a technological world, and there is no cheat. If you can do this, other necromancers can do this, but they didn't expect that thousands of necromancers would simply summon skeletons? ?

Chapter 27 fell apart from the beginning. The male protagonist and the church are mortal enemies. What is there to talk about? It not only exposes the position but also wastes time. The priestess and the group of knights are so interested in people that the male protagonist is tortured to death, and they have to fight when they meet. There is no room for relaxation between the two sides! I originally thought that the church monopolized the channels for advancement, and the bottom talents had to learn necromancy, so that they could start a wave of rebellion. The setting of the extraterrestrial demon completely denies everything about the protagonist. Even if the soul is that of a time traveler and not a native, he is still a real traitor (don't tell me that I don't know, because ignorance is not a reason to destroy the world). So what's there to talk about? The protagonist is not only an accomplice who brought the extraterrestrial demon to the world where he was reborn, but according to the setting, the protagonist also caused the extraterrestrial demon to discover the earth. Therefore, the player's position was forcibly reversed later, and the player believed that he was here to save the world (the player thought this was a normal performance of the game). But what is the reality? Did the extraterrestrial demons discover the earth because of this? At that time, will the players continue to hang out with the person who deceived them into selling the ball, or will they directly rebel? No one will demand that the protagonist stand on everyone's side and safeguard everyone's interests, but if the protagonist betrays everyone, even in the end everyone will benefit. He is also destined to be alienated from his relatives. No matter how good the writing style is, if there are major flaws, no one will like it. (Guess later) Even if the protagonist wins in the end, defeats the extraterrestrial demon and defends the earth and another world, then he has only done what is natural. What is the difference between such a person and a third person? I don't know the consequences of preventing the unification of Wuhun Palace, but the destruction of Wuhun Palace will definitely benefit me, so destroying Wuhun Palace. Dou Er lets the Sun and Moon Empire hang the hammer, and Huo (Tang San's puppet) + Tang San appear on the scene pretending to be good guys to turn the tide, and finally become famous forever. The protagonist doesn't know the consequences of practicing undead magic, but practicing undead magic will definitely benefit me. Extraterrestrial demons attack the earth and other worlds. The male protagonist appears as a slinging demon, defending the earth and other worlds, and is praised by others. Although people will not be punished by heaven and earth for themselves, in the eyes of normal people, this is a proper broom star. It is a heinous crime that brings the risk of destruction to the earth and other worlds for no reason.

Let's not talk about this book for now. Let's first consider which book this is by the author, shall we? It's pretty good to write it like this.

The writing is quite good, but the side plots are too trivial. Although I really like the group portrait, reading too many side plots makes me feel tired... Anyway, keep going 🤓

Low magic technology is crushing, high magic technology is nothing, middling, why do we need to develop both, slowing down the pace of development?

I read Chapter 32, but it seems to be meaningless if it affects reality.

Take good care of your health, your body comes first

The early stage is good, but the timeline in the middle is a bit confusing. I just want to write whatever comes to mind in this line. As for the later stage, there is no one because the author is a eunuch.

It's so chaotic that it feels like several books put together.

Forcibly adding some other things looks too messy

Steam gunpowder is black when you see it. For others, steam is a train, tank, battleship. For others, gunpowder is a sniper, cannon, rocket and ground-washing Gatling. The blood dragon is still proud and good-looking 10 years ago. One million ratmen are exchanged for thousands of dwarves.