Checking in Begins with Resident Evil

Also, the main character's mother is called "honey". My Fuck "honey" is only used by lovers. Could it be that your mother is a bus?

The first few chapters were really annoying to me, especially when the protagonist's mother saw the neighbor resurrected from the dead and asked the protagonist to save him. Didn't the protagonist's mother see how those people turned into zombies before? Or the protagonist's mother has reached a state of idiotic state.

There are too many plot bugs, and it is forced to follow the main line of the movie. The most important thing is that the author doesn't even know the Resident Evil game. . . I don't know how to read the plot of the movie, so let's write it. I didn't even check the details 😅

^_^ Not bad, keep up the good work

The idea is a bit naive and the protagonist is very naive

How should I put it, it didn't give me the motivation to continue reading it. After reading a few chapters, I felt it was uninteresting. I'll withdraw first! ! !

You have poisoned the readers before and how can you get results? I would like to give you some advice. Don't be a virgin in the early stage. There are not so many people watching you grow up.

If the main character is girly, I think this picture can be used.

The Resident Evil movies are really nothing to write home about. There was a little more than a year between Biochemistry and Biochemistry Final Chapter. The identity of the protagonist also does not participate in most of the plot. What's more, the T-virus in the movie is airborne. As long as a nuclear bomb explodes, there will be no safe place in the world. Think about it. In one year's time, there will be only a few thousand people left out of 7 billion people.

I would like to give you a suggestion. Thank you for the game version of Resident Evil. The game version of Resident Evil has a more complete world view, more information, better writing, and more things to write about.

It would be great if Goldfinger could summon some clone minions.

So what, just slow down and it's okay, just ensure the quality.

There is something wrong with the opening. Does the protagonist know how to escape and wait for death in Raccoon City? The ending is a nuclear bomb

The author can be cool, and it's good to be the protagonist's mother

I really couldn't stand it when I saw the protagonist's appearance when he rescued me. I was incompetent, so why should I blame others? On the contrary, I feel better if the protagonist's mother dies! It's better to die together with the protagonist, I can't stand it anymore!

Pig's Feet should have its own weapons as soon as possible, otherwise there is nothing to fight against the protective umbrella. You can use Rick's team to take down the base in the desert. Wherever there is complete cloning equipment, clone soldiers, implant loyalty and combat experience, and then you can waste away.

Umbrella's cloning technology is very good, you can take it over, 😰 you can hook up with the male clone president of the Umbrella Company, the Red Queen or the White Queen can make their own artificial intelligence, use virtual reality technology, train in the virtual world when the clones are cultivated, and train combat skills. The Umbrella clone soldiers are simply ridiculous, they don't seem to have much combat effectiveness. So many military bases in the United States are in the apocalypse, aren't they all pig's feet? Just pick it up? Before the virus breaks out all over the world, we must quickly recruit talents and revitalize our basic base. The author can also bring in the walking dead to write about it! Pig's Foot has its own base with endless clone soldiers, Alice, the police chick, who can form an Alice combat team, Ace! The police girl leads the clone soldiers, pretending to be cool in the plot of The Walking Dead, and competes with the protective umbrella. It is not easy to write ten million words and thousands of chapters like this. The most important thing is to grasp the plot and not make it boring for readers. There is a degree of relaxation, and there is hope for the fire.

The boss's early writing was okay. As long as there was more of "The Walking Dead Plot", there would still be people talking about biochemical flow.

The author shouldn't charge for the later period, right?

Do the protagonists only exchange guns? Exchange of body armor can also prevent zombies from being bitten. . . The main character is the same as **. I can't stand it anymore. . .

After reading what I wrote earlier, I advised you to quit.

Update quickly! There are too few good biochemical novels. If you persist, you will have a chance to become popular.

I suggest the author to reorganize the book before writing it! As it stands now, I was persuaded to quit within three chapters.

Staying there for 22 years is a bug, not to mention joining an umbrella company. It shouldn't be a problem to mix in a non-staff person, right? . Don't let the plot start. Guns can't hit or kill people. Like a**,

Fan Lunting? Isn't it Jill Valentine?