Konoha's Strongest Holy Escape

At first I was attracted by the elements you wrote, and I read it all at once. I couldn't figure out why some people said they couldn't understand it. Later I discovered that you did not emphasize what you should write. It is not until today that I understand that these are not the key points. The point is that there are too many "good elements". Each chapter is filled with a large number of alternative elements, which makes people confused and confused. Others will talk about one or a few alternative elements for several chapters, and then start new alternative elements after explaining them clearly. It's better for you to just stuff seven or eight into a chapter at every turn, leaving a foreshadowing to continue with the new elements. To be honest, there is a sense of expectation, but for people who read ten lines at a glance, it affects the perception very much. They don't care whether your writing is reasonable or not. They will leave without understanding it at a glance. If I didn't happen to particularly like reading this type of book, I would probably be like them and leave without saying "I don't understand." From a reader's point of view, of course I want you to keep writing, but speaking from conscience, I still suggest that you, the author, start a new book. Don't change your style, don't write too many offbeat things, start from the first chapter and keep writing around the protagonist, and your results will definitely beat the current one. Looking at this book now, it feels like reading a comic. The main character is not always written. Interesting, but not many people bought it. Do you think besides me, does anyone else give you a recommendation vote? The words may not sound nice, but they are all true. It would be much smoother to write in another direction. That's it, the last time I wrote so much was when "Fantasy Comes to Reality" was about to finish.

Wash your hands more often, go out less often, and wear a mask that actually works when you go out (most people don't need high-end products). Not much else to say, just pay close attention to reliable news and do as mentioned above. Hubei can no longer be ignored.

I can't understand it either, maybe I'm too stupid

Um, is this a novel to whitewash Danzo?