Ye Luolongcheng

The story is good, but some paragraphs are too dense and difficult to read. I suggest you read it on the app after each update.

The author has something to say: 1. The background setting of this book is a bit special, but basically it is to give each noun a basis and let the characters and stories in the book form their own system. You can read it slowly and follow the plot to understand. 2. The amount of information in the early stage may be relatively large, and there are "potholes" everywhere, but the author has planned the ending for these foreshadowings. It is only because the layout is relatively large that it seems complicated. If you are a little confused, don't worry too much. Just follow the current plot and there will basically be explanations or introductions at critical moments. 3. The author's language level is quite high, and he also pays great attention to punctuation. If there are many problems with quotation marks in the early stage, it is for a reason. Later, I will take the time to correct all the quotation marks in the dialogue. Finally, thank you all for reading "Ye Luo Long Cheng". From the title to the plot to the relationship between the characters, this book has a big picture laid out from the beginning. The author will try to improve every detail as much as possible during the writing process, and will also try his best to improve his writing style. If nothing else happens, he will keep double or triple updates for at least a few months. If you have any comments, you can leave them below, thank you all.

The story is good. A few suggestions: 1. Check the punctuation marks. Many quotation marks are reversed. 2. The dialogue is too dense, and there are too many setting words that appear in the front, making it impossible for readers to completely remember. Come on! Let's work together!