Controller of Panlong's Soul

I like Panlong, and my mind is full of story ideas, and I even had the idea of ​​writing a book myself. However, I found that it is easy to come up with stories, but it is really difficult to express them through words, so in the end I couldn't put pen to paper (keyboard). I hope the author can continue to work hard and get better and better. If you make some suggestions about this book, if the author thinks they are reasonable, you can adopt them. If you think it's unreasonable, just think I'm talking nonsense. 1. At the beginning, the protagonist is a complete waste, and his personality is also useless. This almost eliminates the possibility of the protagonist successfully becoming stronger. Although I know that the author must give the protagonist a turning point, the plot is too slow and not exciting enough, causing people to abandon the book after reading the first chapter (maybe some who are patient can read the second chapter). 2. Human novels can make some modifications to the settings of the original work, but not too outrageous, especially the timeline (the Magnolia Festival in the 10,000th year of the Magnolia Calendar in the original work is a major time and event line), so according to the original work, when the protagonist starts practicing, Lin Lei has already begun to go out to practice, and it is impossible for the protagonist to enter the Ernst Academy of Magic with Lin Lei. 3. The protagonist of this book takes the summoning route, and the protagonist's main strength basically comes from his strong mental power. But now more and more people like to practice the tough guy style, and mental strength is basically used as a tool to surpass their contemporaries. I think some settings can be added, and one more summoned beast can be added, so that the protagonist can gain some of its abilities, and then the useless protagonist can increase his strength even while lying down. The above is my personal opinion. I also hope that the author can insist on writing this book and become a great master in the future! Come on

The pace is fast and the plot feels a bit dragging. How many millions of words are you planning to write?

The elemental talents of Panlong Magician will not interfere with each other, otherwise the affinity of the four elements will be immediately eliminated after Lin Lei awakens. It can only be said that it is possible that every talent of the protagonist is low-level. And the protagonist's summoned beasts will not all be bred by themselves, right? How about you set it to break the crystal wall. You can use your own rules to break the crystal wall, such as penetration, shock, soul, traction, contract, etc. Wouldn't it be higher to summon Cthulhu, Nyarlathotep, Yog-Sothoth and the like?

This needs to be practiced in the end. The protagonist has no cheats or cheats. You can't even contract high-level monsters, it looks cool.

There is a problem with the settings. You cannot extract magic power from the same seven series. According to you, a single series is best, and multi-series ones are garbage. Medium talents only extract magic power a little slower. Your setting is a bit unreasonable.

Here I am, just a new Panlong fanfic. I hope the protagonist will become the controller of Hongmeng soon!

If the 7 elements are not enough, then there are 4 rules.

Multiple contract points for monsters. Get some control skills yourself. How many people come and play to death? It's awesome just thinking about it.

This death-defying rhythm. Not bad, not bad. I support you in grabbing the heroine.

Not bad. I haven't seen a good Panlong fan for a long time. Come on.

The introduction of elemental affinities should be different from the original work 😴😴😴

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