The Era of the Arrival of the Heavens

And And And And And After After After But But But But But But Overall, the writing style is okay, but it's a bit runny, But after reading a few chapters, it appeared a few times too often, but removing these can improve the reading experience. What do you think of the author in the future?

The setting of the world background power system of this book by the author is very similar to that of the Age of Discovery. If so, you can refer to his setting. Learn from each other's strengths and offset weaknesses.                                                                  ，，，, It shouldn't be just humans, but there should also be other alien races, so that the world background can be larger. Come on, don't let this book end. If possible, you can refer to it.

Do you consider Whitebeard your father? ? ? Although he is said to be very good to his children, he would not recognize him as his father upon meeting him. Although many people regard Whitebeard as their father when watching One Piece, but that's because they have different concepts. As a Chinese, do you know how much it means to recognize your father?

? ? ? ? ? What happened when the dimensional world invaded the whole world?

After 10,000 years, humans will be able to invade other worlds. Why do they feel that they are worse off than now? Even food is a precious resource?

In this currency system, one copper coin has ten buns, one time space coin has one million copper coins, one time space coin has ten million buns, and one goblin has one time space coin. The family's income cannot afford the food of the first-level protagonist, so they have to give it away in batches. Is this family like this?

This book is ruined. One piece of animal skin can be recycled for only a few hundred or several thousand copper coins. It takes dozens of time and space points to get each animal skin back, and then you can exchange one time and space point for one million copper coins. What fool would do this? What do you think, author?

There are too many slots, and the data is simply broken. The protagonist kills a wild boar for 30 time and space points, worth 30 million copper coins, and then slowly collects and organizes the materials on the wild boar, and takes them back to exchange for dozens of copper coins. This feels like a person who can earn tens of millions in less than a day, but he still has to pick up some rags to earn dozens of yuan to supplement his family income. .

It feels like this book is like a running account! , Not a novel! , The characters are all robots without emotions.

The name is wrong, it is not the era of the gods, but the era of Japan. I don't read Japanese comics.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

The so-called family territory is useless and a complete waste. The author has completely put the cart before the horse and turned it into a boring endless flow.

The author does not pay attention to the joy of harvest, which is a failure. The harvest of each battle is blurred. In fact, this is a bright spot, but to ignore it is a failure.

Just use points to add points without adding skills. Pointing skills can improve skill combat effectiveness and attributes. I don't know why you directly add attribute points. Personally I feel this approach is wasteful.

After looking at the front for a while, it was formed thousands of years ago, and the pirate Whitebeard is still there. After so many years, does the setting officially flow after someone enters? Still refreshing

This data is really not good. There are problems in all aspects.

If you don't pay attention to details and don't pay attention to details, you can barely read it to pass the time. When reading this book quickly, the reading feeling is not bad. The numerical system is too broken. Killing a goblin has a little space-time value. A little space-time value = 100 gold coins = 10,000 silver coins = 1,000,000 copper coins. A set of ten bottles of second-level blood recovery potion costs 50,000 time-space values. There are still some minor shortcomings that I haven't mentioned. Recently, there have been too many bad reviews in the book market, and maybe the evaluation standards have been lowered a lot. If there are any untruths, please don't pursue them.

I suggest the author choose new worlds. Worlds like Battle of the Pirates have been badly written, and readers will be really disgusted by them.

I regretted not reading the book review, but I was really poisoned when I saw Chapter 34. The enemies' IQs are all 1, but only the protagonist's IQ is 250. The kobolds just attacked and wiped out the clan, and the high battle left a few behind and were surrounded and suppressed. ? ?

The protagonist is green 😏, didn't Luffy get under Hancock's skirt? And didn't Hancock already like Luffy?

The protagonist practices ancient martial arts, and the world he appears in is either a Western fantasy or a comprehensive comic, which is a bit nondescript.

To be honest, Zhu Tianwen is most taboo about writing anime. The anime's power settings are so nonsense that most of them fall apart. What level do you think One Piece belongs to? I think it's at the middle martial arts level, and there are bugs in Devil Fruit that I can't explain at all.

I just read Chapter 10. There are too many loopholes and inconsistencies. I wish the author will write better and better. Goodbye!

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Many details are too messy, and the writing is mediocre. Although the subject matter is good, it is useless if the author has no control over it. I can't stand it after reading more than ten chapters.

Why is there no emphasis on the description of the bridal chamber?🔨🔨

Is it appropriate for you to let the Japanese be the Queen Mother of the East?

I read about 10 of them, Too Many Poisonous Points, Goodbye, System Chaos, not as good-looking as the one that got 404

After reading twenty chapters, I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

No, I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. The main character was written too exaggeratedly.

The data is too messy, and the author just writes whatever comes to mind regardless of logic. The strength of pig's feet is also unreasonable