Dimensional World Invades the World

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It is best to learn unarmed attack skills such as elementary combat skills. If you encounter disarming special effects, you can use your displacement and dodge abilities to overcome them.

I thought the title would be a good book, but I can only say that the greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment.

Disappointed, the protagonist's talent is too rubbish, the power is not attributed to himself, and he still wants money.

I have a question, why doesn't the protagonist go to the Water Margin world to hunt Tiangang Disha and improve his bloodline?

To be honest, I felt bad when I saw that there were multiple levels at the beginning, and each level was exactly five stars. It was a complete cliché, but it turned out to be like that later. Knowing that the plot and cheats are so big, the strength is still the same as the upgrade in the game. It's too fake to go up one step at a time. The plot world I went to also didn't give people the feeling that the protagonist was using cheats reasonably. Although there is nothing wrong with this way of writing, and the number of words can be improved, there is nothing outstanding about it, especially for people who have read too much and can't understand it at all.

Bad reviews for Chapter 74, a waste of a summoning quota, just a piece of trash, 100% loyalty wasted, just a piece of wool.

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The author has a good idea, but this is not playing a game. The data suggests infinite simplification, such as physical fitness, mental strength, and ability. Or add some talent or something, and it's enough to have these three data. Look at the messy data you wrote. Are you cheating on the number of words? Let's not talk about whether no one is looking at so much data of yours. So much data is useless, and it looks terrible. This is the reason why the book you wrote failed. This data is a major failure.

More than seventy chapters. The number of legions will not change? Does the author think that we readers are brainless? This has been the case in the past, there is no hope for the future

By the way, the author could create a Pokemon plane, but the plane of fire is not included. The coordinates of the whole plane can be used in the future, and the children of the family will not have to worry about pets.

Except for the pig's feet, I feel that there is not much difference between the talents and the ordinary skills of good people. The difficulty of the task is too high. How can I survive without cheating? Upgrading is a simple pile of data. There is not much difference between knowing and not knowing the plot. There is no clear growth goal. The power system is too complicated. If the various powers in the dimensional world complement each other well, you can even reach the sky in one step. This is just a simple pile of data.

Can I make a complaint? Why are all the middle and low-level officers in the history of the author here, all of whom have reached the rank of captain of ten thousand husbands? I remember that the rank of husband captain is generally the military rank of nomadic people. The Central Plains is full of corps commanders, captains, camp commanders, Sima Duwei and so on.

Ever since the Legion talent appeared, things have become weird. It is recommended to write less about the army and more about the protagonist's personal plot and development.

Why is the protagonist of Naruto World so weak in attributes? Didn't he fight against the dark gold strongman on the grassland before? It turns out that the troops under his command are not used at all. Devil Fruits, Tokyo Yokai, and the direct army commander's deployment are all missing. Is there something wrong with this setting?

Brainless white text, full picture of pig's feet halo

This doesn't work. The main character's only thing is that he knows the plot. Now he relies on his talent to develop. He doesn't feel that way anymore.

In chapter seventy-two, the talent was upgraded, and the number of legion places for the protagonist's talent skills increased by 100. When the number of people in the legion was collected in chapter seventy-eight, the total number of legion places became 61. The author needs to be careful. Typos and grammatical issues aside, it's better not to make mistakes in such important data, right?

Don't read it anymore, it's too invincible, there is no opponent who can compete with the protagonist, don't you think it's boring, author? ! ! ! !

Why not let Emperor Kai join the legion? Kaihuang doesn't need the Eight-door Dunjia. His own attribute level is between silver and gold. He should be able to join the legion. And Kaihuang opens the Eight-door Dunjia Formation (Death Gate), which can burst out the pseudo-sixth path (pseudo-dark gold level, because it can only burst out for a few minutes). Joining the legion can strengthen Kai's strength, and can burn life in Kaihuang. After death, the legion resurrection ability can be used to resurrect them multiple times. The eight gates of death (the combat power of pseudo-dark gold) can be exploded multiple times, which can help the protagonist kill dimensional creatures from the peak of five-star gold to the weak dark gold level. There is a certain chance that the power of dark gold and the life essence of dark gold will be dropped, allowing the protagonist and his legion to qualitatively transform into the combat power of dark gold.

Author, are the dragons in your novel so easy to get?

It's too poisonous. I can't stand the "then" and "after" things. I gave up.

When I first started reading it, it immediately struck me that it was my favorite type, so I immediately ordered the whole thing. After reading more than 150 chapters, I felt that I couldn't stand it anymore. First of all, your army was built too quickly and you collected so many soldiers that I couldn't even tell who was who. The soldiers can be collected one by one with names. Also, if you are in the mainstream, don't form teams often. The writing of the world is also quite messy. There is no sense of connection between the different worlds, and they go more casually. The most important thing is that it is too watery, and the attributes of each minion must be introduced in detail. I hope I'll just skip the minions and stuff, and introduce the bosses and stuff. The attribute list should not appear too ordinary. I will not read this one and look forward to the author's next novel. I hope the author can write this book well and practice his hand, and try to find out his own strengths in every aspect. See you in the next book, come on author 👍

I can't even see it now

Is it okay for the author to update one chapter a day? Don't stop updating.

The main flow is the legion, but in the later stages the legion can't keep up with the pace of the protagonist, and the ending feels rushed, which can be regarded as a blank ending. The level of foresight in the plot is not high, mainly reflected in some intelligence advantages.

When I was doing newbie missions in the first few chapters, the number of bullets was wrong.