Feeding the Multiverse

After reading more than 120 chapters, I didn't want to read anymore. I thought it was a waste of starting point currency subscription. I was quite interested in it at first. Is it meaningful to see all kinds of miscellaneous settings in the back, such as laws, gates, and laws? The creation story is just a matter of imagination, and then the plot is too rigorous. To put it simply, there is no moisture. Sugar water tastes good, but eating a mouthful of white sugar is not enough. The finished writing does not have an epic feel, and it is difficult to resonate emotionally. The God-Slaying War is like a pond, without the waves of the sea. You said Gilgamesh waved his sword to the gods, waving goodbye like the gods, with Leading human beings out of the embrace of the mothers of the gods, or the human emperor's ultimate power, returning gods to gods, and humans returning to humans, isn't it sweet? Then the characters become facial makeup, paper-based, not three-dimensional, and have no eye-catching feeling. To put it bluntly, there is no lovable character. In "Shading the Sky", Ye Fan rings the Beginning Bell to shock the dark restricted area, knocking and vomiting blood, and the emotional substitution is high.

The plot is fast-paced, the logic is good, and the characters are average. The biggest problem with this book at present is that it is a little obscure and difficult to understand. This is its characteristic. If it is well written, it can make people astonished. If it is not well written, it will become confusing and incomprehensible. Many of the author's settings are either used as foreshadowing in the book, or are expressed directly. It is best to make them conflicting and noisy, otherwise you will quickly reach a bottleneck if you write too fast. Character design is a big problem. There are not many characters that are impressive and their characteristics are not obvious. For example, Dehaka, whether it is spending a billion to play games or spy wars, it should have been written a few more times to shape it, but the author just did it in one stroke and became a success. . . There is also the "love, hate, and resentment" of the players in the origin world. I could have written several chapters to drive it forward, but the result was that it was written in one stroke. The plot developed too fast, and it was like just watching the story. Recommended works of the same type: "I am the Boss Behind the Scenes", "Dungeon Player", and "Raising All Humanity", all of which are works with better rhythm.

To be honest, this book is not bad. Although it is inevitable that there are some shortcomings in the book because it is the first time for the author to write a book, the author also began to slowly improve it later. Whether it is the mentality of the players or the progress of civilization in various worlds, it can be seen that the author has put in a lot of effort and has begun to slowly improve. Overall, it is indeed a good book worth reading. I hope the author will work hard!

Brother, don't you give yourself a recommendation 😅.

It feels good (maybe it's because I like creation stories, so I add points), but it seems that the plot is indeed as mentioned in the comment area, and there are some shortcomings. However, the process of writing a book is also a process of growth. There are also books written by authors who gradually become better at writing, and the more they read, the more comfortable they become. Anyway, come on!

Thanks to Fengxing Yunnan Road for voting for the first recommendation of this book (voted by someone other than the author)

I saw a group of people shouting that they copied others, and I was convinced. Have you never played the game Spore? It was released many years ago. You can evolve from a single cell into various creatures, from ancient times on earth to interstellar wars on alien planets, and adventures on different planets. Do you not know that?

From now on, it will be updated steadily at about 18.00 Every day. In order to write this book better, I hope readers can give me more suggestions. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the description of the world in the book. Starting from the Spirit Sword chapter, each splendid civilization will be described. Regarding the world of origin, players' monsters, if you have any good ideas, you can come up with them. Generally speaking, if you do anything in the real world, the player species will become super from items with real identities! And every world needs a secondary identity, as well as martial arts and supernatural powers. It needs a lot of name ideas. I hope everyone will throw their money at it 😌

It looks really weird. Why do all the players feel like fools? They are incomprehensible and confused.

Author. You said in the first few chapters that maintaining balance is bad. Balance means no evolution and no change. Only abnormal species can promote the evolution (or destruction) of the biosphere, otherwise other species will be weak.

There is no such thing as a messy conspiracy at the creation of the world. Sneaking away is not my type

The setting is good, but there is no sense of immersion. It feels like I am reading a textbook instead of a novel. It is very boring.

A friendly visit and of the same type. Come on, author😁

Don't those indigenous people have any records of civilization? Your ancestors were driven here, don't you know?

This book is a creation novel, that is for sure. In addition, this book is science fiction, and all settings need to be logically scrutinized. In order to make the world view more rigorous, this book introduces the setting of half energy and half matter, which is the theory of energy carrier. Currently, there are three energy carriers in this book, secret energy, spiritual energy, and magic energy. Secret Energy is the first time the protagonist kills the wool. The energy read from the wool has chaotic and disordered properties. It can be sensed and absorbed by living creatures. It is unbearable and may lead to death. Because this is a general background setting, you can take a guess as to why the secret energy is like this. Aura, the fruit tree that Lu Yao moved from the outside world into the small world. After the fruit tree changes in size, the distance between the basic particles in space remains unchanged, but becomes smaller, which means that the space folds. To use an analogy, folding space is equivalent to pulling on the attached three-dimensional space. It can be understood as a bulge on a balloon. Space and time need fillers, so secret energy acts as a filler, and then a spillover phenomenon occurs in the setting. Secret energy combines with photons to form aura. The attribute of aura is to enhance the spirituality of matter, and the setting is to enhance spirituality at the substantive level. The magic energy is Liu Yuan's green devil. He practices the inner breath cultivation method, condenses the inner breath (interdimensional matter), and then transforms the aura into it. It is set to be the manifestation of spirituality at the phenomenal level. The explanation is cumbersome and the author will add it in the future if you are interested. (The author has tens of thousands of words of settings and logic. Due to limited writing power, the description may be a bit obscure. I hope everyone will understand)... Let me talk about the training system. At present, there are shell world system, tree planting system, inner energy system, demon wheel system, and magic energy system. In order to consider the settings, each system is generally divided into first-order and second-order in the protagonist's cognition, but in specific systems, it is more cumbersome. Shell World System: Extraordinary Uru, Sacred Uru Tree Planting System: (Nourishment of Souls), Open Veins, Chakras, Qi Hai, Guiyuan, Zhenyan, Tianbian, (...), This system has not been fully developed, the understanding is to develop a piece of land, plant seeds, fruit trees grow, harvest seeds, change the ecosystem, just understand it like this. Inner breath system: How many years of inner energy, top of the mountain, and the top of the mountain are similar to the peak of the sixth level. The essence, energy, and spirit resonate together to condense the inner breath. The inner breath is also an interdimensional substance and a spiritual energy band filter. Because this cultivation method bypasses the first type of limit, it requires continuous refining of spiritual energy. The refining process is very slow. Drawing on the ancient cultivation speed, the spiritual energy of the elixir is set to be relatively mild. The spiritual energy of the elixir with attributes has a single frequency band. Therefore, with the elixir, the cultivation speed will be greatly increased. Yaolun system: Li Chong, Xiasheng, Jingyang (third level), the follow-up will not be disclosed for the time being, everything is within the big setting and logic. Magic energy system: The current setting is that nerves store magic energy and cells store magic energy. You can guess what will happen next. ... Finally, a brief introduction, the sacred realm is not a god. The description of the player in the book says that it is a god, but it is not a god. The full name of the player is called a god. God only has one word. If there are multiple words, it is called a god-level creature. To reveal one thing, the germination of two qualities is sacred, divine, or near-god. In short, the full name will have one more word than god. In the setting of this book, two-material creatures and gods control laws. Here we use the world view of this book to explain the rules. This book sets out that regardless of space and time, matter, energy, half matter and half energy, if you keep cutting it, you can get the final unified basic particle. The ultimate goal of the law phenomenon is to encode unified particles. The following settings will not be disclosed for the time being. This book will try to be as rigorous as possible. If you have any objections, you will only accept big logical questions based on the settings of this book. You will not accept arguments or forced scientific nonsense. Some people may wonder why the author would create a setting of tens of thousands of words, and for what purpose? The answer is that the author is obsessive-compulsive. Thank you for your support! ! !

What a great book, I support it. Some parts of the writing are relatively obscure, but Lao Bai can read it, but Xiao Bai persuades him to quit.

Various energies appear constantly in the book, and the cultivation methods are so complicated that the plot feels like a ball of yarn, which seems laborious. It is better for novels to be clear and concise.