The Happy Life of a B&B Owner

As of the morning of December 6, 2020, I have followed the latest chapter, so I have a certain say, right? Because I read it in depth. (I am a dividing line full of love, dividing line, dividing line) First of all, this is not an article about daily life in a B&B. Those who are led in by the title and want to read the story of the B&B will probably not be able to read it. This is a soul-traveling book. The top boss in the industry reopens the trumpet, heirlooms, thick thighs, and binding systems are all arranged. The plot design is very careful, and the hidden lines are also unfolded one by one. It is really praised! The IQs of the protagonist and the supporting characters are above average. Even the villain has IQ, EQ, and emotions. Although the female villain is a bad person, I still admire her a little. She is also a really cruel person who leads evil people! The protagonist is financially wealthy, physically beats gangsters, and has the IQ and EQ accumulated through the experience of working overtime for 20 hours a day. With such favorable conditions, of course he has to do things, and do difficult things. I saw a lot of criticism of the author in the book reviews. I seem to have heard that the author can delete book reviews in the backend, but I guess Rourou must not have deleted them. In fact, it is not as bad as they say. It's very interesting, I hope the author can continue writing it. This is my first time writing a book review and I don't understand what it is about. Just read it if you click on it! Anyone who criticizes me, hahaha, I don't accept them all.

I have to say, this is the most disgusting novel I have read in recent years. The author's good writing style turned out to be a failure. He wrapped the shit-like plot in a clever way, just like wrapping shit in chocolate. Mad, you thought it was chocolate and licked it a few times, but it turned out to be shit. I vomited before I saw the chapter on the shelves. Book friends, please take it seriously.

The plot is really too scattered, the main line! Where is the main line? The first thing is the script of The Evil Dead. When I read those chapters, I felt quite suspicious of life. Where is the protagonist? Why is there no one at all for several chapters in a row? It's really unnecessary to write this script in such detail. Maybe the author didn't want to be superficial, but this behavior was really disappointing (I skipped reading those chapters because I was not very interested in the story) Then there was the incident between Xu Jiawen and Aunt Zhang It took many chapters to write the story of Aunt Zhang and Xu Laosan. What was the plot? What are you picturing? The author can write about this matter briefly. If it is to portray Aunt Zhang in a three-dimensional way, it would be good to start with daily life, like in the previous chapters, (details such as Aunt Zhang living in a small room (details, I think)) The author can focus more on daily life. I clicked in because I personally read it for daily life. Love is well written! ! The writing style is also online, with few bad points (for me). I just hope that the author can be more focused, and can have plot extensions, branch lines, etc. If the extension is good, it will greatly increase the readability, but digging too deep will steal the glory of the main line. It's confusing, and the gain outweighs the loss. The above are my personal suggestions. I may not be able to express them well due to the lack of words. I hope they can inspire others. Come on!

This book is all about complaining... The author is still writing. . . Courage is okay

The author's writing is pretty good, the writing is smooth, and the plot is quite interesting. I have already finished all the orders. Although I can accept this kind of slow-paced writing, there are still some small suggestions that the author can refer to 1. The author himself is aware of the script problems. This part is too weak. There is no need to write every scene in detail. Just write an outline to describe the highlights of the plot, probably at the end of Chapter 2-3. 2. The pace could be slowed down a bit, and the timeline could be lengthened a bit. Each plot point is too dense. I have written more than 200 chapters for a movie and have yet to finish it. After all, it is based on the dream life of a B&B owner. Some people and things encountered in the B&B can be interspersed between the main plot. After all, everyone has their own story. Zhang Xiaoxiao's story at the beginning is very good. Just like each of Xiao Huo's cases, there is also a story behind it. 3. I think the description of the supporting characters is great. Each character is vivid but the length can be reduced. I would like to see the protagonist more than the supporting characters. You can consider using a third-person perspective to describe what Da Dandan encounters, and then gradually understand the reasons behind the events through the protagonist. What I see most often in this book is that the author reveals the story behind the supporting characters from a God's perspective. When watching from a God's perspective, I always feel something is strange. Finally, as a single man, I really like the story of Da Dandan and Xiao Huo. I hope the author will not embarrass them too much, otherwise I will feel heartbroken after reading it...

The writing is too scattered, with a hammer here and a stick here and there. It has to make readers wonder whether you have an outline.

I was poisoned when I saw the plot about going to jail for a woman. Can any Shen Nong tell me if the truth about the protagonist is revealed later? Have these four years in prison been in vain? Is this also equipped with a positive energy system? It's very negative to commit perjury, right?

After reading dozens of chapters, I found that the author's writing style is really good, and some of the character descriptions and atmosphere are very interesting. Of course the problem is also very prominent, the key points cannot be grasped, or too much ink is wasted on supporting roles or unimportant things. I tried to skip reading and found that it did not affect reading at all. I prefer to regard the descriptions of these characters as extra chapters - they are detailed and do not affect the main plot. The author also said that this is his first time writing, and after accumulating experience, he can write this kind of plot into a side story in the next novel.

I only saw that the owner of the B&B was entangled in trivial matters. He was not happy at all.

The love story poisoned me to death. That Xu's father was beaten by three gangsters. The footprints were all different. Can't the injury test be found? At least he can detect the time of being beaten by multiple people and the time of abdominal injury. The injury examination doctor the author wrote about can be reworked.

I don't know if I got it wrong, but it's not the male lead, right? If he wasn't the one who hit you, you would be committing a crime and covering up the crime! Let criminals go free?

Suddenly I felt that the text had nothing to do with the title of the book. I read dozens of chapters of conspiracy, calculation, tragedy, betrayal... Especially a green bitch. This pit is not over yet, and I can't stop the commotion in the future. →_→ What the hell are you telling me about a happy life? Do you have any misunderstandings about this word?

Is this a 2020 book? ? What is this? ? I thought it was a book from 15 years ago. With so much emphasis on cracking down on organized crime and eradicating evil, why do you still write about such a brainless gangster? ? The police are worried about not being able to meet their targets, yet they still dare to act like this without any scruples, and they can do it all with just one phone call. Haven't you seen that even violent debt collectors are civilized now? It's just harassment. If they were identified as a gangster, it would be a big deal. How much do you look down on the police by ignoring them like this? Is the author an ungraduated student in an ivory tower? Do you know so little about society?

Author, let's cut it. The problem is not just a small one, most of the comments are quite concentrated. It is Xu Jiawen's part, which has nothing to do with the protagonist but takes up a lot of space. You have written 450,000 words and you don't need to fix it. There is nothing wrong with your literary talent. It would be great to start a new one. If you insist on this book before it reaches 200,000 words, you will be persuaded to quit by Xu Jiawen. This book is fine in other aspects, but if you can't get around Xu Jiawen's part, it won't become popular.

It's so poisonous as it's written, especially the fact that Aunt Zhang is Xu Jiawen's mother. Is it really poisonous to dig a hole for the protagonist? A scheming bitch daughter and a mother who owes her daughter, are you trying to dig a big hole for the protagonist or something?

I think the memory part can be summed up in a few sentences. There is no need to write it in such detail. If you look closely, it is torturing the original owner, and there are several supporting characters in it that make people uncomfortable. The relationship between the characters is also a bit coincidental and ridiculous. Although it is intended to develop the plot, it is too deliberate to make people uncomfortable. Nowadays, everyone wants to read some light-hearted things on the Internet (not to mention the word happiness in your book title). This book attracted people who want to read light-hearted and happy plots. Everyone was tired and didn't see what they wanted to read. As a result, all they saw were negative and dark things, which was quite discouraging. Of course, this is just my one-sided idea. There are many authors who listened to readers' corrections and ended up writing bad ones, so just have fun watching them.

I have been poisoned, especially the reason for being imprisoned. It is a den of thieves.

I'm really addicted. The main character is a dog licker. It's clear that the family conflict has developed into a criminal case, but he still takes the initiative to carry it out. His parents don't think about it. This character is really broken.

The sweet love in the recent chapters is a bit interesting. Recommend and support Zhang.

The setting is like shit, the protagonist is like shit, the plot is like shit! The protagonist is pretending to be mentally retarded with a high IQ! The plot is bloody and disgusting! A useless novel

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The writing is good, but the plot is too weak, and there is no happiness in this one. There is no distinction between priority and priority. I feel that the protagonist is Biaozi Xu, and I feel that I can't hold on until Biaozi Xu's reputation is ruined. Since this is the author's first novel, I won't say more. I can only say that I am not in line with your novel. I hope to see you in the next novel.

It's a mess and I don't know what the author wants to write Let's say it's the second generation of rich people, and I don't want to do anything about the second generation of rich people Let's say it's salted fish, I don't see where the salted fish is, it doesn't taste that way There is also Xu Jiawen, a mess, which line do you want to use her to develop? Did the protagonist uproot the loan shark and gambling ring? ? There is also a script that is inexplicable and extremely embarrassing. Do you want to get involved in the entertainment industry? What are the pictures in your profile? It's chapter 35, I really can't understand it, so I say goodbye.

The writing is pretty good, but there are a lot of typos. . .