A Tree in the Heavens

The protagonist is completely the background. It is the same as writing about the main god and construction flow without describing the protagonist and only writing about the reincarnation. The pattern is too low.

The author's layout is too small and the starting point is too high. World Tree, you should take root in the void outside the universe to absorb nutrients, not in this universe (the multiverse is a universe with infinite planes). Also, it is not good for you to rush to breed the universe at such a young age. Also, in the universe you conceived, you should be a Dao-level existence. What do you want to know? It's just a matter of an idea. What rules you want to change is also a matter of an idea. I've seen a lot of writings about the way of heaven that are not very good. They can't express the form of omniscience and omnipotence, so please come on, the author, it's okay at this stage (this is a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it 🙏🙏🙏)

I would like to make a suggestion, you can speed up while the outline is stable, because the subject of the heavens is not only about Marvel, it has a large audience, and the core is not just a world, but a tree.

The abilities of the World Tree: energy conversion, exploration of the void, connection of all realms, world creation. Isn't it a joke that you, a little sapling, want to create a world and you don't even know about the world you create? You can even create a world and you dare to beat up oAA.

I can't bear it anymore. Who will read a book that doesn't even have a protagonist? The author thought that the protagonist is immersed in his own thoughts. The protagonist is used to let the readers immerse themselves. Even if you want to write a story, you still need the protagonist to feel it. The author is immersed in himself. It feels like describing a story about the world. Andersen's fairy tales also need a story and a protagonist, not to mention that you need a story substitution link to complete the whole story. It is written like a sitcom but there is no character that can give people a sense of substitution. It is simply written wherever it comes to mind.

The pig's trotters have been written out. How many chapters have the pig's trotters not appeared? A bunch of goodies have been given to foreigners. Kama Taj is in China. China has the Divine Spear Bureau. If you don't look for it, all the goodies must be given to foreigners, right? Don't talk about Tony and other special geniuses. According to your book, you can pick any pig and take off. I don't know what you are thinking. . . . .

Is this book a popular science book or a novel? There are various character introductions and technology introductions throughout the book, and often there is only one sentence related to the plot in a few chapters. Even the key plot points are skipped in one sentence and directly introduced to various popular sciences. In the end, the protagonist simply disappears and starts to look at it with novel ideas. The further it goes, the more difficult it is to read further. You should read the novel based on the plot, not the dry narration and introduction. It feels like the author is just enjoying himself.

The plot jumps around a lot, and you won't know what you're looking at after just a few pages. If you don't look carefully, it feels really confusing, and the further you go, the more confused you become 😅

On the Transformed Planet, this book was a bit slow, because the protagonist didn't appear for half a year. When it came to One Piece, not only did the protagonist not appear, but Marvel also completely became a thing of the past. The novel basically collapsed completely!

One thing to say is that it has been boring to the extreme since Shitadaudou started to create a new race, and there is also a feeling of being out of wits.

A person who is severely insecure and suffers from severe persecution paranoia, his first reaction is to find a guardian? ? ? Isn't it to strengthen oneself? ?

Since the emergence of Miracle Civilization and Tony's creation of mechanical civilization, the author has started to let himself go. It collapsed The plot collapsed after more than thirty chapters. I think the author should, probably, probably have no outline.

What is the main character used for? To be a wet nurse? If you really can't, it's okay to get an avatar and come out to do things.

After all, I couldn't bear the poison from the beginning of the Marvel Universe to Tony's search for a baby. My patience was worn out, and I didn't have much expectations for the future, so I ran away.

It's so boring, so boring. I'm always afraid of this and that. Is it interesting? , Where is your body from World Tree? Don't you know you are getting stronger?

After watching more than 20 pictures, the only thing I feel is that the main character is a mascot.

After watching it for a long time, I didn't know who the protagonist was! Is there too little plot for the protagonist? !

The author is making fun of himself🐴?

Chapter 113 begins to collapse, the author wildly lets himself go

When I saw Chapter 1, Side 2, I couldn't help but want to vomit. The character relationships were so messy that a new bookworm wouldn't be able to understand it. I really have to say that the writing is really bad. What is the theme of Chapter 1? Sorry, I have been reading books for 7 years. I was really confused when I saw this book of yours Maybe I don't read enough, who is the protagonist? Until I read Chapter 2, I don't know who the protagonist is. Which world tree is it an ordinary tree? Or one of the two police officers? Okay, your name has already given the answer, but brother, this is an online novel. You don't write according to the format of an online novel. Who knows if your Yggdrasil is the protagonist? Forget it, wait until you play for another two years before writing 🙂

Don't talk about anything else. The most ridiculous thing is that they are all talking about the plot of the Marvel Universe. The plot of the protagonist Yggdrasil is pitiful.

I was confused when I read it. I don't know what the author wanted to write.

I just read the first few chapters, and they seemed so logical.

Fantasy immortality novels basically have some logic, at least to say the least. American comics are completely illogical. Whoever is said to be awesome will be awesome without even giving you a reason!

Come on, author! (ง•̀_•́)ง

I had no idea that it was a host. It didn't feel like a novel, but more like the history of a movie.

I make a sacred oath here: I will never take the initiative to destroy the world hhhhh

When will it be updated? Are there any more?

Come on (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia,

World Tree, like people, grows up through cultivation. If the starting point is too high, it will be difficult to write. Now that I have stopped updating for three months, it is indeed TJ.