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My personal thoughts after reading it so far are that first of all, the protagonist is reborn into a world, and then because the background of the world is originally virtual, he ends up being shameless and trying to live a life as a copycat, and then his father, right, dies as cannon fodder, and then his mother also dies of depression. In the end, the protagonist becomes angry and strives for strength. Well, I went to hang out in that legendary world, and then met another one. Good girl, and then because of good girl. After sacrificing himself to death for the protagonist, the protagonist becomes even more crazy, and then goes to do some big things. Anyway, in the end, the protagonist becomes completely stupid, and then he is beaten to death by a group of people on the battlefield, is reborn, and then obtains a system. I will summarize the plot here. No problem. Right, the plot here is pretty good and there's nothing wrong with it, but then it's just right to get to know the big family. There is no problem with the plot of giving information to save the mother, and then there is no problem with fighting the boss to explain some background settings. Then about the fact that the eldest daughter of this aristocratic family was so eager to save her mother that she was not prepared, even if she was given information, she did not report it. Then it's not a problem to find the protagonist here and do it again, and then the poisonous point will come. Regarding this pretentious slap in the face thing, I actually think that the novels that everyone has been reading for so long are just like this. If you really read it, you will definitely look at your balls. There is no problem with good writing, but what the author wrote is true. I personally feel very puzzled, first of all, because neither the man nor the woman in the arranged marriage likes each other, or it could be that the protagonist had a slight liking for this woman before and was reborn after he overestimated his abilities. I feel that there was nothing wrong with pursuing such a girl without overestimating my capabilities. I even felt that because this woman didn't want to see me, she found a group of people with good family backgrounds to deal with her. It's someone else's fault. And now that I am living a good life, I feel like I am doing well and want to take revenge. But in fact, from my point of view, from my perspective, it is completely unnecessary, okay? Just because you don't like the other person, the other person doesn't like you and thinks you don't like them. I find it annoying that you have to stick to it like this. Then that's what happened. To put it bluntly, you don't like this person, and then others think you like it and then throw it away. If you do it yourself, can't you just explain it to yourself? And then they even came up with such tricks and gifts. There is really no need to dwell on this plot. The character of the protagonist has already been drawn, and there is no need for any additional plot to slap anyone in the face. It completely deviates from the main line of what we want to see, which is cheating and invincibility, and then there are some explanations about other places. As for some people asking why they didn't give this bloodline expansion potion to their father, let me answer it here. What's the use of giving it to a cannon fodder father who has been around for a few years and died? Instead of using it to an ordinary old father, let's get to know some families with rich backgrounds, such as the current one. Give your parents a job or living environment where they can eat and drink freely, and have no worries about food and clothing, and let them wait at home to die. No, isn't it good for retirement? And about the subsequent plot, I haven't watched it. I have a big problem with it now, and I'll talk about it later. I will put it on the bookshelf first and then I will continue to read it after I feel better. Then after reading it, I will continue to post my thoughts after reading it. That's it for now, and as for some background issues, I actually think the protagonist's character is portrayed. Not good enough. In other words, it's not that it's not good enough, it's the author's personal experience that isn't good enough. After all, no one in this world really sacrifices their parents to heaven, right? Therefore, it is difficult to grasp such things as a boy's head turning gray overnight and his character changing under such circumstances. Overall, it's okay. Come on, author, I will continue to read it. As for whether it is officially supported, you can decide for yourself.

I saw the Miracle Tavern where the battle was about to take place, so I stopped watching. Advice to readers: Don't try the poison at the birthday party if you don't have strong poison resistance, otherwise you will feel very annoyed. Suggestion to the author: Please change it again. You can ignore it in the past, but for the birthday party, even if you mentioned it in advance, it seems to have been changed. If you change it again, don't be so vicious, it will be easy to persuade them to quit. 1. The routine of rebirth is very common, but now it is 2020. Is it appropriate for you to use the words from the past? The grievances of the previous life must be settled in this life, and those who failed to protect must also be protected. Not many people have written such sentences, which seems very brainless. 2. In order to quickly enter the world of miracles, the protagonist tells the place where he can get the panacea. Is it just a favor and the qualification to enter? Don't you get some money? Even if you take it, it will only make her think that you are an intelligence agent. But if you get it like this, I won't say what will happen. I can't go on. 3. Regarding the birthday party, it is extremely poisonous. You said that the protagonist's mentality is good, that's true, but the reader's mentality cannot be like his. The protagonist gives away a car. I forgot whether it was 800 or 600 for Holy Angel. You use your own money to get the car and give it away directly. Do you think 20 million is a small amount? Wouldn't it be good to give it to your parents? I can't talk anymore, I want to withdraw. I'm really getting more and more angry the more I write. Those who have strong poison resistance will add some information when they see the later stage. I will withdraw it first, don't spray it randomly, it will be okay even if the post is deleted, at worst, I will let others try the poison

The realistic plot is really discouraging! (￣ｏ￣)

The setting and background are still interesting, keep it up! But I want to know what is the positioning of this novel? I feel that your golden finger and setting are more suitable for a cool novel. You should write more about the protagonist improving his strength and adding various talents and abilities. It seems boring to deal with the children of aristocratic families. Shouldn't there be a grand and passionate scene later? Writing about these grievances and grievances about dealing with the children of aristocratic families is so procrastinating and very boring! !

It's okay to write this kind of pretentious routine. The key is not to use the pretentious and slap-in-the-face routine from ten years ago. It's really embarrassing. The author should change it more.

The pk part was really embarrassing, the pretense and slap in the face scene was enough. These days, you can't beat someone in the face, but if you make enemies, how many people can you defend against in your lifetime?

The subject matter is good, but many parts are awkward, poisonous, and watery. He was a big shot in his previous life, and when he was reborn, he was suspected of forcibly subduing his wits. All kinds of awkward conversations, mental descriptions, and forced pretense, (ー_ー)!!

I can't stand watching the second chapter. The road to becoming stronger is actually boring most of the time. I can't wait in line for several hours. No matter how strong I become later, it feels like a forced arrangement.

It's written in an old style. It must be a newcomer with no experience. Now the two choices have been completely changed and all the scenes of pretending to be awkward and slapped in the face have been deleted. The rebirth of the big shot was changed to the rebirth of a small person, and the opportunity was robbed. The biggest opportunity is obtained by the protagonist. I have been hanging around for ten years by chance. He died in the war and was reborn. The game plot is recommended to be original. It can also be adapted from movies, TV series or novels. The power system depends on the author. I'm a noob. Then in the early stage, it was changed to practice + development + school. Although it is vulgar to slap someone in the face in school. But better. The martial arts class competition suddenly reached the top from the middle of the pack. Verify the effectiveness of practicing after rebirth. For the game plot, I recommend the original Xianxia or Gaowu. Or fantasy. Of course, it can also be a big world plus various copies, similar to infinite flow. I read the previous thirty chapters and the author left a message at the end of the chapter. The previous game has little plot. Fast pace. Just enter the game and it's 999. What the author wrote earlier is a bit like dnf. This is the kind of thing where you can defeat goblins, monsters, and bosses to drop equipment. Later advancements are similar to StarCraft. Personally I think it's a bit inconsistent. So you should put more thought into the game. There is also blood flow. Change to talent stream. Kung Fu flow. This is my idea. Just look at the author for reference. Of course it can also be integrated. Want them all. The second option is to reopen. Come back after you have a good idea. Write this alternative plan first and then conceive of the next one. If you don't get good grades in this book, I'll cut it. Keep it if you can still see it. Gain experience. I don't know what I'm saying here and there. Can the author understand it? Hahaha

The cheating gift packs and permissions are enough, there is no need to add a task system! Just put the bloodline in the gift bag

It's awkward and awkward, and I'm speechless. There are too many psychological descriptions. For the sake of word count, the author, the quality of books nowadays is really low. Any book can be recommended. I'm curious. Is the recommendation now special? Not even one of the ten books can be read. It's either poisonous or stupid. Now even this kind of book can be recommended.

Not a bad author, but my thoughts on reading as an old bookworm Typical old routine, nothing new, start with a sacrifice, fight monsters and become stronger, meet the heroine on the road, pretend to take revenge but get killed, another person close to you dies, explode on the spot, continue to be reborn, this is the first chapter, I haven't read the rest, I guess it is just pretending to slap the heroine in the face, chasing the heroine as a dog licker, after all, the heroine saved her in the last life, it is impossible not to lick, in order to lick, the author also put a lot of thought into drawing key points! In fact, it is another stupid book that relies on the halo of the protagonist to live. Such a protagonist is reborn ten thousand times and is still a stupid person. There is no way to change it. If you don't believe it, please give your thoughts after reading it. I haven't read it. I guess, to sum up, without the halo, you would have died long ago 🤫

Hong Honghuo is in a trance. I saw the author's funny look at the end of the chapter. It's so fun.

The subject matter feels good, but the plot is also drunk! Can you decorate it less b? I feel like it's very uncomfortable to look at! It's the kind of slap in the face when nothing happens!

The author is embarrassed and stupid. He has to include a chapter in every chapter about finding a sense of presence.

How is the author's health? Pay attention to your health. Add a little more funny style. I like it very much. Come on, be more refined.

Regarding Kavin, give the author some ideas, or even think that I am making a fool of myself here. Whether you are reborn or not, the system must hide, evade, escape, and hide when facing an opponent of so many levels. Then take advantage of the 4 days when the boss does not end in person to find a chance of survival. (You can hide here. Yin's description is not 100% feasible, only 1/3 of the probability that it will work. Of course, it cannot be written too straightforwardly. Just read between the lines and say that the probability is not high. Moreover, it must describe the importance of the four cores in the first few levels. The most important thing is to have the first level 4 invincibility. How important is it to exchange one level of death for level 4 invincibility? One step at a time.) Then describe yourself, know the information of the past life, and use clever methods to get the props that you can use now. And there is a bug in your previous article. Death at the first level is nothing to a pig's foot. You can negotiate with the two bosses and tell them that I am not afraid of death and I will not die. , You can tell them that you are going to die and kill the dragon egg first. Hydra does not have to give in, and the poisonous dragon must give in. (Here you can also describe that the dragon egg will grow better with you than with you, the mother, in the future), and in order to avoid writing, the poisonous dragon seems to have no brains, and can make a vow that if the dragon dies, I will definitely die. Boos has a much higher IQ than humans, Now there are two ways in front of the poisonous dragon 1. Death with pig's feet, death with eggs 2. Live pig's feet, live with eggs (there is also a possible long future) After getting the eggs, in order to balance the excessive growth of pig's feet, I have to give a lot of resources to eggs or young dragons to eat, and I have to vaguely describe that all of this is worthwhile, all in preparation for the battle in my previous life. What does the author of the novel think of this idea? Can I still gain your discernment? If you can get in, please delete this article I posted. If you think it is really embarrassing, just let it hang here.

Come on, I hope the author will become more and more powerful,