The Journey of the King of Elves

No wonder it only has 3 monthly tickets. When you look at the 6 female protagonists, 80 to 90% of them will be dismissed immediately. There are also many poisonous points and the sense of substitution is not strong. I hope the author can improve it in the next book.

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction either. Third, the plot of the original story can be briefly described, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work should be able to roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, enemy and friendly forces and other multi-angle plots. The original story plot can be appropriately modified or extended. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It is okay to change the original plot, but it must not be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand abuse and stick to principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing, and do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to drastically change the plot. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and release packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, the chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. Fifteenth, try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

I really like this book by the author Lao Tie. Please give me more pictures.

Passionate and beautiful

. . . . . . After seeing six girlfriends, I lost interest. . . .

The starting lineup is not too strong, and everyone is at a different level. The Rod-Tail Scale Armored Dragon, Menas, Sniper Tree Owl, and Rock Dog, 3 of the 4 elves are from Alola, and they are indeed preparing to become the champion of the Alola region.

Author, can you let the protagonist use Pikachu? I still prefer Pikachu, especially the little one from Chi.

The protagonist tells the heroine that he is from the earth, 666

Pretty or not🤓🤓🤓

Sirona Sego

I don't even want to complain, but having said that, as one of the earliest elves of the protagonist, Menas still has feelings for the protagonist. Is it really suitable to be a trainer if he gives it away casually without considering the issue of the elves? Moreover, Menas is also very strong. Apart from the mythical beasts, there are not many water elves whose racial values ​​are higher than Menas. Doesn't it seem that he is not very strong? Please, do you really understand Menas? Nothing, let's break up the meeting

He gave up when he saw the elf who had been with him for a long time casually abandoned. There are so many female protagonists who are very casual in their relationships and are no different from the scumbags who just slip away. 😅

I stopped reading after seeing that the author gave away Menas. I was poisoned to death.

What kind of gangster is this Ouyang Xizi? She comes out of nowhere and wants the protagonist to listen to her? After stumbling upon the protagonist along the way, Crystal Snake directly eliminated the protagonist's spot? Even Shen Nong can't handle how vicious you are.

I think this is okay (Meiyi)

After reading Chapter 44, I could resist the previous poisons, but in Chapter 44, the protagonist told Touko and Mei that he was from the earth, and I died suddenly on the spot. Goodbye.

Looking for it blindly

It is a huge failure to directly buy the quasi-gods in the final stage of the Elf text through the system. There must be a lot of people who just give up because of this. I am like this. It is much better to conquer them yourself than to buy them through the system.

I thought it wouldn't be too bad to write so many harem stories, but it turned out to be like this. I am immune to all poisons in FL, but I am deeply poisoned here . Author, you are really not suitable for writing emotional dramas. This is too nt.

It disgusts me to death. He told the heroine that he came from the earth. Isn't this a big fool?

When I saw six girlfriends... I was immediately interested in watching it! 🙂