Super Talent at the Start

The writing is pretty good, but will it collapse if I keep writing it at this speed?

A chuunibyou novel that I can't understand at all. The plot of the chapter is unreasonable and rubbish. If the author writes it and reads it himself, it's fine. But if it's for others to read, it can only be rated as rubbish. Too many typos

It's just a bit lacking. I feel pretty good at the end. I personally like this kind of book better than I have a Zhanzhan card. It's much more enjoyable to read.

Emmm, the martial arts he talks about and the cultivation system he uses, the author is so lazy! !

^_^ Not bad, keep up the good work

It is a super loose book. It is obvious that the heroine and the hero are classmates, because everyone in the college knows the heroine, and they both got their certificates when they were 18 years old Well, it's not easy for me to read Chapter 12 Let's start picking out the poisonous points The first poisonous protagonist has the strength of 600-700 pounds to withstand a bag of rice and needs help from others. Some people will say that the author did not mention rice. Multiple generations Then please go to the nearest supermarket downstairs to buy a generation of resistance. Do you need someone to help you? Then use the bag of resistance that the author has used as a reference. Can the protagonist not move very much? How big is the size of that generation of rice? Who sells rice so much? My wife is celebrating her birthday that day, and I have thrown a banquet. I won't go. I'm going to show off and slap people in the face to earn some money. I'll give it up. When will you not be able to make money if you have the talent? The Third Poison When I was 18 years old, I was ranked among the top four academies in the foundation building period. Your wife was 18 years old in the golden elixir period. She is simply a monster, okay? I also introduced the existence of the four major academies that surpassed the martial arts hall. He also said that with talent, there are not many resources in the academy, and his wife is just a leg. You set the protagonist to run to be someone's younger brother. This setting is no one else. Some people will say that it is not good to use women's things. The heroine is your certified wife. You are more talented than your wife now. You use your wife's resources now. When you are promoted, you can assist your wife. The good thing is that you don't need to compete in the martial arts hall. If you have the talent, is it possible to go to the academy to strive for it? Go and be someone's little brother Hahahahaha. . . . . . . . . . . . Anyway, I can't stand it. Author, your grades are so bad, why don't you read the post area? ? ? ? Unable to bear it, I retreated, brothers.

This novel is so poisonous that Shen Nong died. Maybe you can read it without thinking, but the author can't insult the reader's intelligence like this. First of all, there are problems with this cultivation system. Why is the first level called Qi training? This cultivation method does not mention Qi training at all. It is almost enough to be called physical training. There is also the protagonist who inexplicably reaches the tenth level of Qi after reading the exercises. Where does the energy come from? Furthermore, the heroine and he have both received certifications, but they do not even explain their breakthroughs, and they participate in the competition almost regardless of the heroine's feelings without explanation. What's even more insulting to me is that the author calls lightning that can cover the diameter of a ring small? And it's okay for the protagonist and his opponents to be wrapped in thunder pillars. The interior of such a thick lightning is only tens of thousands or even tens of millions of degrees. If the protagonist is so weak, wouldn't he have already turned into coke? I died of poison when I saw this. I can understand some unreasonable aspects of Shuang's writing, but the author can't rub the reader's IQ on the ground.

Poison! Poison! Poison! This cultivation system is really confusing. Even if a martial artist has reached the golden elixir stage, he can wait to form an elixir. Even if the fantasy body refining reaches the golden elixir, it will be a elixir. Don't use the system of cultivating immortals. It seems so poisonous. Even a fantasy system is better than a fantasy system.

It's a good idea, but the author failed to write it down across the board. It's a pity.

I don't like those systems where the parasitic protagonist absorbs energy and destroys his talents. Why do we need such a broken system? You are gifted yourself, but you still have to be grateful to the system when you have been turned into a waste?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​, And found that this strength is completely understood, without even a single practice. Once you understand it, you will have strength. If that's the case, why do you still practice? Just look for the secret book and understand it. After all, the first book of "Tai Qing Jue" can upgrade the protagonist from the first level of Qi training to the tenth level of Qi training. Ask the protagonist's wife for it. After all, she is in the golden elixir stage. Even if there are not many secret books, there are still more than a dozen secret books, right? Anyway, you can understand a book in a few minutes, and you will be better than her in less than a day.

The introduction says that you are very talented at the beginning, but if you co-author it, you will be a waste. You have to wait for eighteen years, and you will be given a golden finger at the age of eighteen.

Why did you go straight to the tenth level of Qi training without even practicing after reading a book?**.

Are you writing about One Piece? ? ? ? Realm level depends on strength? ? ? Once you learn the exercises, you don't need to practice them? ? ? ?

The system is just a talent system, which can only give the protagonist super talents. The protagonist will improve his level just by looking at this skill, and he will not eat the natural treasures or other things, but his strength will go up directly. It is embarrassing. The protagonist's strength has improved, how will the body get the nutrients it needs? There is no limit to the improvement of strength. There are no treasures of heaven and earth, no meat of ferocious beasts, mine has no spirit stones or anything like that, and I haven't watched the protagonist absorb the spiritual energy of heaven and earth. This setting is also very strong.

The author's settings for warriors are really awesome. In a small high school, an 18-year-old is building a foundation and an 18-year-old golden elixir. Even if you don't graduate from MMP University and become a god, you are embarrassed to say that you have gone to university.

What setting? Using strength to measure the system of cultivating immortals is ridiculous.

It's very beautiful and has a strong sense of immersion. It's just very messy, beautiful and messy at the same time.

The protagonist has a monster talent. After reading the cheats, he hit the boxing target for half a day, and his strength increased by about 4 times. After reading the cheats, he probably also automatically gained experience against enemies. Did you, the protagonist, drink an alien version of melatonin? Drunk?

I suggest you don't read it. My wife was tricked and almost got a cuckold. You killed a few people, and then a bunch of people called you a forest demon. Poison or not. The real forest demon was killed directly. I saw chapter 57. I couldn't hold on anymore. I even went to the island and shot you with arrows. If you are not strong enough, I just let you go. Then you let him go. Tsk, forget it. There are too many poisonous points. It is better to kill them all on the island.

There are so many incomprehensible words in the article. They don't connect to each other. I want to write simple sentences but it turns out to be gibberish. The writing is not fluent and the language is not fluent. No wonder I'm still a LV1 after writing three books.

Why are the introductions now all recommended after finishing the book? So amazing.

I feel very confused. I don't know what I am practicing. Moreover, I just gain strength as soon as I practice it. Of course, I don't mean that I improve too quickly. I mean that you don't need to absorb energy to improve. You can upgrade directly. Even in the game, you need experience points to upgrade.

True orphan protagonist. . . .

The writing is not very good, it is vague, and the various settings are incomplete!

Came quietly, left quietly

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What a justice. I really can't understand someone like Wudi Wen who cares about the world and is so benevolent and brave. I can't understand someone who has traveled through time and sacrificed his life for the sake of this world.

There is something wrong with the title of the book. How can it be called a super talent after being a FW for more than ten years?

Poison, poison, poison! You'll know after reading more than twenty chapters! Maybe this is the orphan protagonist. We normal people can't see it