The Bald Swordsman Wants to Be Invincible

The author should be hairy in reality

I accidentally saw it and was shocked. More updates can help the author avoid being bald.

No, how can a bald man be a swordsman? ! Of course, it's only for playing with knives and sticks

The writing is good, but "senior" is a bit distracting 😥 Generally speaking, most ordinary people refer to older people when they call them senior, while in martial arts and fantasy or fairy tales, it usually means that the gap in strength is too large. There are several times in the book where I call my seniors an inexplicable feeling. Japanese light novel style. . . Don't look at strength, just age or seniority. For example, the relationship between seniors and juniors in Japanese schools and superiors and subordinates at work. When the protagonist joins the team, when he has conflicts with others, or during competitions, the person next to him shouts "Senior" to come on, which makes me read strangely and inexplicably feel that the writing style does not match. Nowadays, except for light novels, other types of novels generally mean that people who join a team are brothers, right? It's a youth competition, and I've never seen anyone calling seniors to cheer for them. . . 😅. In addition, I would like to give you a small suggestion. For the description of the heroine, you can follow the author's own ideas. It can be multiple heroines or single heroine. As long as you write what you think and the ideal girl you expect, you can basically write the heroines' own style. It doesn't mean that singles can't write about girls. After all, there are so many girls in life to learn from. (Tnd,,, why do you feel that it hurts your heart? 😭)

I don't understand why the protagonist always wants to save points for emergencies... Shouldn't he have used them earlier to adapt? Do you really want to save every time you explode?

I feel like it's well written. Even those villains and supporting characters who cause trouble for the protagonist seem to be useless. I hope the author will adopt it.

Collection, check in 🤓

Cherish it, your hair will be gone on the third page

After seeing the first picture, I was a little worried. Ninth-level swordsmanship 😅, is there 87654321? That's a metaphor. Is there any mysterious difference between the ninth grade and the eighth grade? In other words, it limits the upper limit of power. Anyone who uses it will have ninth grade power. It's okay to say that there are many levels of strength. It really feels like an online game when there are many levels of skills.

Stop by and pop a bubble! (^^)/

The author's language organization is not good, many places are not fluent, and it is difficult to read.

Forcibly suppress the protagonist's strength improvement! It would be better to change the lottery to a shopping mall!

Even though I mentioned it in the chapter, I still want to say it, don't do it all the time. Well, you're not a light novel. If you want to write it, you have to figure out how to use it. It's very annoying to watch it really happen.

10 Times is a bit small. If someone has an innate sword body, he might be several times stronger than him.

It's not unreasonable to say he's invincible, but he's actually upgraded.

Will the protagonist wear armor? I think the fierce bald man wearing heavy black armor and holding a six-foot sword is quite handsome_(:з∠)_

The author went too far. In your other book, I analyzed and evaluated the label book, but you directly banned me permanently and added and deleted posts. Are you so disrespectful of what others say about you?