I Want to Be an Ordinary Food Hunter

What should I say, I don't like this version very much, especially the character Yina's willingness, Taiyi's self-centeredness, and some behaviors that make me, the reader, feel very uncomfortable. To be honest, although the plot is perfect, it is not as good as the previous one. Nowadays, expectations for the president in novels are very low, and the setting of Ina's character will make some readers uncomfortable. Even more serious is the inversion of the reader's revulsion.

We have collected all kinds of animals and plants. If you have any ideas, whether they are edible or useful, please comment below the post and I will try to add them.

Sorry everyone, I wanted to delete all the chapters, but I accidentally banned them. I can't publish or delete them. I have to wait for a while 😟

Overall rating, four stars. Recommended index three branches. Toxic index, one and a half pills. Funny index, three stars. Not suitable for the general population, low anti-drug ability Evaluation, I feel it is pretty good, but it has a slight criminal record. Sometimes I feel like the comment section is more fun

This is why I reminded the author to change the poisonous points in advance. It was such a painful realization.

I remember that The Prisoner of Food has been linked up with One Piece, Dragon Ball, etc. Please pay attention, author.

Criticism and suggestions post, If you feel that the plot in the article is illogical or unacceptable, please say it under this post and I will try my best to modify it. I also promise that I will write it to the end this time and won't start over again. Don't worry, everyone. ٩(｡▽｡)ρ

Stupid author, remember to call me when you open a new book. No matter what genre you should watch or want to watch, I'm still here to criticize you, so don't be impatient 😁

Suddenly I thought of a skill, the Bajitian in Star Travels, the training place depicted in the animation, and also in The Prisoner of Food. Isn't this specifically for people who travel through the Prisoner of Food? I'll look for the settings and send them to the chapter fragments later.

It feels perfect. It was too poisonous before and now it's better. Let me tell you a dark history. I was hesitant to like fan fiction. I secretly listened to the novel during self-study because the Pokémon fan fiction was so poisonous that I turned it upside down and blackened it on the spot. The end result was that my deskmate watched with trepidation as I reimbursed one pen for the whole table in one day. Comes with fifty homework assignments and a nickname for the female tyrannosaurus for over a month. Your novel is really well written and has a strong sense of immersion, but it is too poisonous. That time, I really didn't even react and went dark. Imagine the scene at that time. Oh my God, I didn't have a table for almost three days. I knocked the board in half on the table, and I don't know how I did it. My first thought at that time was that my pen, my desk, and my hand hurt, and I wanted to beat the author to death 😅😅😅😅😅😅

It's hard to find a fanfic, the author doesn't want to be an eunuch easily 😢

The author is great, come on, I really like the subject of food

If Gourmet Captive is changed, it is best to break out of the circle of the original plot. I don't say that everyone should stay away from it, but it should also have its own original content. I would like to give an immature opinion. The Pirates and Dragon Ball Gourmet Captive crossover plot is best to be an extra chapter. Just like Aru meets Luffy and the others, Pig's Foot can meet Sun Wukong and the others in an extra chapter. Through the collaboration between Pig's Foot and Aru's three comics, the encounter may not necessarily be a fight, but may be eating. Wukong, a foodie, happened to pass by. Pig's trotters met Wukong and invited him to a meal. By the way, Sun Wukong was teaching Pig's trotters a few moves. . This way, the linkage in the extra chapter will not be obtrusive, and it will not be awkward if Pig's trotters joins. It can also add a few skills to Pig's trotters. Personal immature opinion 🙂😁

The piece is back on track, sprinkled with flowers. Author, please keep up the good work.

From the beginning of writing this, Ina's level of disgust has been quite high. In the beginning, this was a human design, yes, mine, because her initial arrangement was to exchange one life for another to bring back one dragon. In the original work, one dragon was beaten half to death by three tigers, and then was trampled to death by Blue Nerok. The world's number one boss died in such a tragic way, and he didn't even beat the Eight Kings' food demon. At that time, I was ready to set fire to the author's house, so I arranged for a guy outside the plot who would not have any psychological burden to die to go up and replace Yilong, that is, Ina. In order to avoid the psychological pressure of writing her to death in the future, I simply set up the setting to be an annoying guy. He has no regrets when he kills people. He has super power and bullies others. He is self-centered and goes his own way. He often beats everyone up and cannot take care of himself. Now this is what I made after everyone regarded Ina as the heroine. They canceled the original and changed it. I only set up the setting of bullying people with super power. She will also consider others. But the idea of just staying alive means she kills all living things and has no reverence for life, because she wants to die but is afraid of pain, so she dares to commit suicide. Nintendo's setting also has part of this idea of ​​death. He refuses to make decisions, completely resigns himself to God, has no pursuit, and will jump off the building without hesitation when God says he will die. There is no such person in society. As for Ina's level of disgust after I changed it, it is still very high. The reason is that in terms of time jumps, at first it was just a sudden increase in super power, and then the five years of getting along did not go into details. However, it can be seen that they have a good relationship when she can enter Nintendo's bedroom and steal clothes. In many cases, it is actually Nintendo himself, and Ina, who often fights in groups, of course can't stand this anger. , There will naturally be some acts of revenge, and it is normal for them to have deviations in body control when the food demon is awakening. And the relationship between Ina and Ren Tian has changed with the jump of time, from familiar people in a strange world to friends, then close friends, until they are ignorant and have some feelings. This whole transition took ten years, but it was all written in sixty chapters and 150,000 words. The above is the result of lazy people who are too anxious and have poor writing skills. I will explain it here. I won't change the details in the article. I don't have the energy for the time being. It can be seen in the latest update time. The house has been very messy and I type at night. Sometimes I just wait until everyone in the family has gone to sleep before I start writing. I have to get up early the next day. Sincerely I don't have the energy. Everyone can give me any suggestions. Lazy people must have made some mistakes in some places, but I don't know if it's out of consideration for newcomers. None of the suggestions I posted have been followed so far. It doesn't matter, anything is fine. If there are any problems, I will correct them. I will also explain the deliberate design, such as this post.

Why did the comic collapse in the later stages? ? ? I think it's because the overall combat power in Prisoners of Food is too high. Author, what you write is a fan, and it is a fan of "Prisoners of Food", not a comprehensive comic of "Prisoners of Food"! Now that you are forcibly raising the fighting power of the world of "The Prisoner of Food", the comic book author can't draw it well. How are you going to round out the plot of Hua Collapse? ? ? ? (The fighting you write is also sincere...) So, if you really want to follow what you are writing now and write it into a comprehensive comic... Or change it as a whole.

Is this the author's first time writing a book?

What is Ina used for? Isn't it nice to travel alone?

Can the speed of author updates be accelerated?

Author, you really just update every now and then. Can't you update a few more chapters a day?

Just accept it and cherish it. Personally, I don't think it can express the feeling of a food fan.

I want to ask something, is it time for Xiaopi to evolve?

It should be easier to write once we get into the plot.