Congratulations on the New Year

This book is really great! The protagonist has a distinct personality and the storyline is smooth

Crow brought "My Book of Another World" to participate (Just give it a thumbs up, this word count is almost half a chapter!) First of all, I am very grateful for supporting my new book, and then I hope to work together to sign a contract to complete the book ~ I am an opponent and a friend First of all, there is definitely nothing wrong with the writing, and the words and sentences are sometimes very charming and charming. Then the plot is completely smooth and will not make people confused or confused about who is talking. Who did what? Very, very clear! Although this is a must-have for writers, as a new book, it has a very clear idea, and I feel that there should be some main outline in mind that will not deviate from the right track. There is also the rhythm. I feel that your own writing rhythm is very good. It may be different from the reader's reading rhythm, but if your rhythm is correct, you can rush forward better! Code a group of readers first and don't play stand-alone games! But~ The following is my humble opinion, don't spray it if you don't like it (It's a little bit dyslexic, everyone's works will be corrected slowly%) The first thing is... I feel Isn't it a bit laborious to wear the introduction of yours... In fact, the death is not that weird. It's okay to be locked up in a sealed space due to lack of oxygen. The whole thing is just the security guard and him... The writing is very good, but don't you consider streamlining it? Just wear it like a bang... The male protagonist is just a picture manager (not looked down upon), maybe this is your own experience. But can the time travel of Tu Tuan and the time travel of killer commandos be the same? The killer special forces soldier must first describe his strength and level. The killer will be betrayed by the organization and die... A story about a picture tube being suffocated to death... May not be that attractive, so I personally think it can be simplified and some descriptions that have nothing to do with the plot are the word "water". Dress it early and finish it early... If you really want the male protagonist to have something from his previous life in a different world, then the first chapter can focus more on the character of the male protagonist. It's just that the male protagonist has a feeling of being ordinary among the male classmates around him. It's not that this is bad, but he always has to be a little different to catch the readers. If 👀 you can try the introduction in reverse order Be shut down first, reminisce about one hand and then pass through Then the golden three chapters Chapter 1 Chapter 2, a problem, well written, that old man wrote it for me I think it has a unique visual feel~ There is no trap, there is no unique character of the protagonist On the contrary, the old man seems more three-dimensional than the protagonist's image And there is no trap in the plot🕳️ Not to mention the six-year-old kid who cheated and was beaten by a lady of the same age. Kind of... It's a little awkward, and it must be reasonable to be reasonable, but I always feel it's too casual There is no big contradiction First few chapters Breaking off the engagement, what are you thinking about? Really breaking off the engagement? Dueling, how can you beat it? The writing is good👌🏻The good thing is that you won't get tired after reading all the time It's not like reading a big white text, slowly, slowly, very slowly, especially slowly But what can really win you a group of readers is your plot~ Crow Ginseng

I'm in Longchang and have just gotten off the hot bed. Thank you for inviting me. I'm Wang Shouren. 😁 I always have a dream, dreaming that I am being rubbed around in a book by an author who is not very good-looking. At first I was confused as to what this man was doing, who he was, and why he was touching me. Most people may not understand it, but I am the smartest person in the world. I soon realized that this person was actually writing about me. Frankly speaking, it's not that I can't accept it, but... He, he, he writes so slowly, and he often finds excuses and reasons not to write. Do you think I can bear this? It's like putting on half of my face with makeup, and shaving only half of my head, but I am so anxious. I don't care about it in the past. It has been updated quite well in the past few days. I must keep up the good work, don't slack off, and "unify knowledge with action"! Also, I have read all those who praised me before. They are very good. Remember to praise me more in the future. After all, I am the smartest person in the world. 😁

It's also to gather the number of people ~ hahahahahahahaha. Laugh to hide your embarrassment. Frankly speaking, the updates these days have been a bit weak. I have no ideas in my mind and no power in my hands. This is a big problem. Well, I've tried hard to change what I've been doing these days. Everyone, please remember not to abandon or give up.

Dear readers: Just now, I received a message saying that my status has improved. I clicked on the book and finally saw that I was a lv1 author. Well, I was still very happy! Because of everyone's company, I was able to write until I successfully signed the contract. Today also happens to be my birthday, so I feel even more inexplicable. Although there is no update today, we will work hard to ensure updates in the future. Everyone wants to pursue progress. I hope everyone can support me as always, thank you again Shancheng Shuisu! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 (There was a picture that I couldn't post yesterday and was deleted)

After reading Chapter 18, let me share my thoughts. Basic skills, common sense, writing skills, etc., Really can't be said. At least he is much better than me. It feels like a storyteller in the world is slowly telling the story. Clear tea and fresh water, with a long aftertaste. Let me give you some personal advice. [Sense of immersion]—— The sense of immersion in online novels is very important. The protagonist of this book is too bland and has a happy-go-lucky attitude, which makes people uncomfortable. In many places, it is not inconsistent to replace the protagonist with an original ancient person, but the time-travel setting is originally designed to bring people into the protagonist. When the author writes this way, it feels like the identity of the protagonist as a time-traveler is completely a background setting. [Unknown classification]—— After reading more than a dozen chapters, my first impression was that this was a historical novel. Who knew it was actually a fantasy? ? If you are like this, history readers will not be able to get in, and fantasy readers do not have the patience and basic knowledge of history readers to be willing to read or watch... I sincerely recommend changing it to the historical zone. Such high-level history is still possible there, such as the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms. It is definitely better than using one's own shortcomings to attack others' strengths in the fantasy zone. [Perspective]—— The perspective is too God-like, especially from the first chapter, which weakens the protagonist's sense of involvement. Moreover, the author only treats the protagonist as an ordinary character in your story. The story is well told, but most readers run away depressed. [Reading Threshold]—— One problem is that when you write about historical figures, you don't introduce them at all! ! ! In this case, it may be interesting for you and those who have the knowledge to know who this person is and his general deeds, but it is impossible for most people to know so much. For example, you can write [Sun Wukong smiles rebelliously] without any foreshadowing, and we can all read it without any hindrance, but if you write like this to a foreigner who doesn't even know who Sun Wukong is, people will be confused. Best-selling writers will introduce historical figures, even in one sentence, just to take care of the majority of readers who do not have such knowledge. If you write like this, you may dissuade most readers. [Summary] - Now it seems that this book can become a word-of-mouth book, but most readers will find it difficult to calm down and read it, unless you become popular later. A very good novel, but it may conflict with the mainstream style and rules of brisk online writing. Finally, I wish the author Jun Yue will write better.

Ah, today I finally got my first recommendation vote 😁😁😁 I voted for the author Dada, thank you for your support ٩(๑^o^๑)۶ I also really like the author Dada's writing style, I like the story very much, especially the methods of corresponding phenology~ I really like it~🌹🌹

How can I put it, I seem to have overestimated the author's great appeal and the responsiveness of the book friends. I don't want the reward anyway. Alas, there are only two of them in two or three days. If this continues, I can't even meet the minimum requirements... Let me add someone~ I am a staunch book friend. Although I didn't know anything when I was an operation officer (and I still am), at least I am conscientious, right? Although the author's previous writing was a bit verbose and the collection has been unable to be added, the writing has been getting better and better for a while, and the updates this month have been pretty good. Sometimes being fast may not be a good thing. Look at what is written these days. Fortunately, not many people read it. Make changes as soon as possible. I won't rush you, just do it at your current pace, but you have to ensure the quality. Come on. 💪🤝🤝🤝🤝

Come on, come on 😆

What I want to say is that this is a book that I like more and more the more I read it, and I can't predict the twists and turns in the plot. Each character in "Congratulations on the New Year" has a different personality and life attitude. They may be deep and introverted, quirky, gentle, or... For example, the protagonist is a "polyhedron". The point is, this guy cooks delicious food! The young man has his mountains and seas, his numerous mountain shadows, and his thousands of miles of waves. If possible, give him the wind, give him the desert, and give him the sky. It is the unfettered wind, the desert where it rains heavily, and the sky covered with stars. Give him all things and set him free. Speaking of which, Xin Sui should be free... But in these troubled times, who is truly free... Do you want to see how Master Wang counterattacks the protagonist? ? ? (Xinsui's inner os: I am not free. I still have to cook, I still have to read, I still have to practice, I still have to flirt with girls, and I still have to be a "fire prevention, theft prevention teacher") Please pay attention to "Congratulations on the New Year" to give you a different experience...

Prompt for next update. Have you been having a lot of trouble these days? . . . . . . . . . . 🤫🤫😅😅😠😠

Let's talk about the basic skills first. There is indeed no problem with the writing rhythm and writing style. I believe the author also has certain skills. Even the style makes me feel a bit fishy. Although the author writes well, it may be difficult to attract many readers at a time when cool writing is rampant with such a straightforward narrative of fantasy. There are no small conflicts arranged in the front to continue to retain readers. After reading the first chapter, I felt that it might be dull for a while, but the author at the end of the second paragraph said "Actually, I still like this chapter very much. I will write it myself as I write it slowly. I hope more people will read it. Good night." I don't know why a paragraph in reality makes me feel that the novel is more attractive. But your plainness and writing style may be your characteristics. Being unhappy, not pretentious, and not slapping your face may not attract many readers at first, but it will attract readers who really like you. Encourage each other.

The writing style is good, and Xin Sui is well described in the book, but I personally feel that some parts of the description are too repetitive. For example, the opening chapter describes Xin Sui's time in the library before traveling through time. There are many paragraphs about Xin Sui's difficulty breathing and his search for books, and the description of his behavior is a bit cumbersome. Everything else is pretty good! Come on 👍

Why... I feel like I just didn't pay attention for one day, and your recommendation votes increased a lot.

Take a group photo as a souvenir.

Hello, are you there? My name is Zhang Dongsheng. 🙂 I am a mathematics teacher, but I also like to read a book called "Congratulations on the New Year." During the time I was reading, I once climbed a mountain with my father-in-law and changed medicine for my wife. Of course, I also kept dealing with three hateful children, trying to get back the camera they used to take pictures of my criminal evidence. I was very angry with the three cunning children, and I was also very angry with the author of that book. You know, I like mathematics. I am a rigorous and serious person. I can't stand someone who fishes for three days and nets for two days. I can't stand someone who does things haphazardly without rigorous planning. As for this author, sometimes he wants to update and sometimes he doesn't. Sometimes the update is beautiful and sometimes there are too many words. This really affects my mood and efficiency in working elsewhere. Now that my battle with my three children has reached the final moment, I still can't care about the author, but I want to remind him that if he doesn't update it well, then I will invite him to go hiking. When he is on the mountain, I will definitely ask him: "Do I still have a chance?" Do I still have a chance to see the update of this book on time? I don't know what will happen next, but there is a high probability that I will sing him a song called "Little White Boat": "In the blue sky and the Milky Way, there is a little white boat. There is an osmanthus tree on the boat, and the white rabbit is playing... Floating, floating, floating to the west." Just asking if you are afraid, by the way, don't think I don't know, you are the hot author! 😡😆🔨

Gu Yuan found that something was wrong with his sister recently. To be precise, something was very wrong - more than once, Gu Yuan bumped into his sister rolling around on the bed holding her doll pillow and giggling at a certain dialog box in the chat interface. This once made him wonder if his sister was dating online, but every time he tried to make insinuations about her, he only got a variety of perfunctory answers, which made him more sure of his suspicion. As for whether his sister is in love, Gu Yuan actually has no idea. The family has always been in a state of letting go of Gu Yanran. In the words of his parents: "As long as Yan'er is happy, we can do whatever she wants. Don't interfere. " Gu Yanran can be regarded as a great beauty, and all the boys in school who chase her can be compared with each other, but she doesn't seem to be interested in falling in love at all. What makes him curious is what kind of man can make her so attracted. On this day, Gu Yanran went out of her way and approached Gu Yuan directly. "What? You want to see that magic doll?! Is that the slut from the book club?!" Gu Yuan was very surprised. He never expected that the person his sister was yearning for was actually that person. "Magic Doll" is Gu Yanran's first non-staff reader after writing a book. He is famous in the "Congratulations on the New Year" book club with only 95 fans for his superb driving skills and sexy chapter reviews. His thoughts are extremely impure and he can drive on any bad road. Gu Yanran frowned slightly and said cautiously: "Keep your mouth clean! You are the slut! "The person she likes is evaluated in this way, which makes her feel uncomfortable. "Huh? A slut? What kind of slut? " Gu Yuan was immediately discouraged, because his sister Gu Yanran was in charge of his pocket money. Due to the mistakes he made when he was young, his parents had extreme distrust of him, which made him, a rich second generation, extremely miserable. . Gu Yanran rolled her eyes, not bothering to argue with him, and continued in a commanding tone: "I made an appointment with him to meet tomorrow. You will come with me then. Everything will depend on my eyes for the morning flight. " Gu Yuan didn't dare to talk back, so he could only agree to it. "Well... Sister, he has been catching you as a brother... I know..." "What do you think? " Gu Yuan glanced at the position of his elder sister's chest. Well, it could be used as an airport to take off and land a Boeing 747. Gu Yanran found that Gu Yuan's eyes were a little dodgey, and he kept looking at himself. He glanced at his chest and was slightly startled. ? Little brother, what's wrong with you? Realizing that Gu Yanran looked at him unkindly, Gu Yuan quickly straightened his expression and said the second half of the sentence seriously. Come: "You can dress up as a man, and you don't have to reveal the fact that you are a girl. What if the magic doll..." Although Gu Yuan did not finish the sentence, but she was so smart that she could not guess what her brother was thinking. She just hesitated a little and replied: "Okay, just dress up as a man, what's the problem..." Suddenly, as if she thought of something, Gu Yanran's face fell, and her tone turned cold: "I will deduct your pocket money for three days! " Huh! This little guy actually scolded me for being flat-chested. (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻ Gu Yuan: What did I do wrong? There were heavy dark circles on his face, and his head felt dizzy after ten hours of rest. After sitting in bed for a long time, he finally put on his clothes and got up after the alarm clock rang again. He scratched his head and realized that he seemed to have forgotten something important. , But I just couldn't remember, and I looked around in confusion. It was almost dark outside, and the lights of the city illuminated every place I saw. I'm not back home! Go ahead! Finished! ! Yang Dazhuang suddenly remembered what he had forgotten. In the plan of the past two days, he was chatting with a netizen for a long time. On the day when the author "Shancheng Shuisu" met, according to the explanation given by "Shancheng Shuisu" and Yang Dazhuang's enterprise-level understanding, he summed up this sentence: I went to Beijing and passed by your hometown. We are so familiar, so let's meet by the way. But this is not the case. The main point is that he said he would go to the north gate of the urban overpass at around 3:30 in the afternoon! Today! Therefore, Yang Dazhuang went to the Internet cafe in the city for a night, got off the plane at 7 o'clock in the morning and found a nearby hourly room to fall asleep. As a result, I overslept! He quickly checked his phone and found that the alarm clock was ringing every fifteen minutes from three o'clock to six... Yang Dazhuang was about to cry without tears: "I'm so weird..." He quickly packed up his things and cleaned them up. He wiped his face casually and rushed towards the north gate of the overpass like the wind. "Sister, it's been three and a half hours..." Gu Yuan looked at Gu Yanran again, his impatience was almost written on his face. "Don't worry, wait a little longer. "Gu Yanran knocked Gu Yuan on the head. Gu Yuan looked helpless. Before Gu Yanran could speak again, he said first, "I know, I know. Your name is Gu Su, and you are a big boy. I am your brother-in-law. " Gu Yanran nodded, and when she was about to say something, she saw a person rushing towards them in a hurry, looking around in front of the stairs, as if looking for someone. ps 1: I've been a little busy lately. I haven't read nearly 20 chapters. I'll save them for now and take some time to read them all at once, emmm... I guess? It would be nice if the writing style of "Congratulations on the New Year" could be a little more clumsy... ps 2: I don't have enough time, so I'll make it up another day. It's a real debut novel. It's not well written, so I'll just make do with it 🌹... {"NickName":"Autistic Gu Su","UserId":338833221} {"NickName":"Brother Yuan's Little Cuteness" ","UserId":342717855} The prototypes of the characters in this article are the three of us 😏😏 Also, should {"NickName":"Autistic Gu Su","UserId":338833221} dress up as women to thank you? 😏