Create a Mysterious World

After reading the introduction, I felt that this book had a lot of excitement that made me want to open it, but after reading the reviews, I calmed down my inner curiosity. In the end, I liked the author's setting very much.

It is recommended to add the two related sequences of Apothecary and Alchemist. After all, things like extraordinary potions, extraordinary items or extraordinary weapons cannot just be done by an extraordinary person! You can also add some non-human related sequences, extraordinary creatures, ghosts, strange objects or ancient legends. After all, if you want to play an extraordinary resurrection, the sooner these things appear, the better, so as not to appear abrupt. If the world view is not rigorous enough, I feel like this book will collapse... Of course, this is just a suggestion, don't criticize if you don't like it! ! !

As for the efficacy of spiritual items, I think it can be refined to highlight the extraordinary specialness. For example, since the crystal finger appears in the Faceless Man, it must have certain effects due to the spiritual remnants of the Faceless Man's space-like abilities such as hallucination or absorption. The recycling of spiritual items is also dangerous because of this peculiarity.

Come on, author＾0＾~, I like it very much, don't be a eunuch (I can invest!)

I read this book and felt that the setting was quite good and it seemed to be quite comprehensive. The author seems to have a big plan. The description of the characters was okay, but maybe it was a preconceived notion. I felt it was about steam in the Middle Ages, but then a helicopter appeared, and I couldn't figure out which era the author was writing about. What makes me want to complain the most is the order and rebellion. The opposite of general order is chaos. I personally feel a little uncomfortable. And the potion name is sniper, why don't you call it shooter? Part of it may be the author's own setting, which made me uncomfortable to read, but overall it is a very good novel. I don't know how it will be written later, but when I looked at it in the early stage, I still felt that it was a food, but not a fairy grass.

I feel that sequence and potion novels are not easy to write at all. They are too complicated. The author needs to calm down and write. Please give me a reward first. If it doesn't work, I will order and support it if it is released on the shelves. Please improve it! ! !

Is it so easy to make a magic potion? If you know the recipe, you can just pluck the ingredients from the monster and stir them to use? What about proportions? What is the timing of administering the drug due to drug reaction? The environment used to refine medicines? What about drug mutations? What about the failure rate? Don't you have to worry about waiting a lot? There are so many bugs?

I think the character of Thomas is great, especially the line "I am a policeman after all"

After watching it for a long time, the protagonist doesn't look like a god or demon at all, but looks like a teenage middle school boy, so low that he explodes.

I don't understand why there are so many two-dimensional characters in the fantasy and fantasy Cthulhu novels. Except for the oriental fantasy fairy tales, which are really incompatible, all other novels are crazy about adding otaku elements into them. . .

It was fun to watch before the main character came out, but it became boring after the main character came out.

Please don't let the protagonist appear on the stage again. It's very demeaning. Moreover, once he comes on stage, it's nothing more than a cliche process of pretending to be awesome. In order to show the protagonist's awesomeness, he then slaps his own creation in the face.

What this book lacks is the quality. Now that I have read more than 20 pictures, I feel that the quality is a bit low. I haven't written much yet, but if I change it now, it might help.

The plot is a bit off. The protagonist's territory and base camp are so easily messed up. From now on, I will be far away from the protagonist and still have fun. While there are Sequencers everywhere among the public, even the officials still don't know about Sequencers? The secret place is open to the public, and it is not restricted by government personnel. No African government would be that far behind, let alone the United States, a rogue country. The whole plot is too deliberate. It's like those movies where the police come after the fact in order to highlight the protagonists. It is better for the protagonist to act as a god and form a church than to let the folk sequencers come out to pretend to be gods. Also do a good job of currency exchange, otherwise it will happen sooner or later

The editor of Shenta Ma strongly recommends it. Can I still be a eunuch after 2 months?

Author, do you call this the behind-the-scenes flow? This protagonist's existence is almost announced to the whole world now, and everything that needs to be known is known.

I think you can crowdfund things like sequences and let readers help you think about them. The treatment in the novel is that you can only open a few basic sequences, and let society help you figure out the rest.

Cthulhu Shinto is chaos in nature. The entire world view is full of darkness, depression, and evil. It is simply a hell for ordinary people. If you are not careful, you will die inexplicably. You can die in a dream or by saying the wrong thing. 😏😏😏😏However, this kind of world should be a place for keyboard warriors and masters, and become an elite training base for keyboard warriors and masters!

🤫🤫🤫I thought the protagonist would create a shadow world attached to the real world, discharge chaotic power into the shadow world, alienate monsters, and then draw humans in, digest monsters to purify power step by step 😏😏😏 Let's go on a journey of fighting monsters and upgrading

Let's have a Marvel VS Capcom

Author, I really like your book, please give it a thumbs up.