Starry Sky Martial Arts Era

Well written, good luck to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

The protagonist is very passive and always being led around

Author, you don't have much imagination, so it's not enough for you! Why not crush it with built-in plug-ins? The books that get out of the way are also system-friendly and can be upgraded quickly. It's a slap in the face. Readers will enjoy reading it. Come on oh oh oh. I can see that you put a lot of thought into the concept. Please add more foreshadowing. Although the supporting characters are tool men, they still need to be more detailed. Otherwise, it won't be enough to slap you in the face.

I hope all readers can give me some recommendation votes! ! Thank you! ! ! ! ! ! !

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? Uh, very general, um, the same problem for students, the prologue and chapter 1 are different concepts, and to be honest, you didn't stand up at all, they were all flat, very boring... The key is that the voice of the readers was not heard at all: If you don't listen to the voices of the readers, what kind of products do you write about? Perfunctory? What are you going to do? The writing is really average. The settings are popular not because of how well you write the settings, but just because you use the system writing... The reason is very simple, it is not easy to crash... Whether you listen or not is your business, and what I want to do is tell you what to do. 1. The product is yours. You need to understand that since it is a product for sale, how can you maximize its value? 2. There is nothing wrong with simple and direct writing. The key is whether you can maximize its use. Obviously you don't know how. 3. Please listen to the readers.

Some good books often have their own cultivation realms, and those realms have distinctive characteristics, ranging from small to large, and are catchy. They become an important part of those books and are the necessary reasons why some books become popular. The division of realms in this book is too mediocre and has no highlights. It is recommended that the author use his imagination to create a reasonable and distinctive system. What you think?

I changed the settings and changed the aura. I hope readers will notice which chapter contains a reminder about aura. I will modify it. Thank you! !

The village chief passed by, the author wrote well, keep up the good work! 😍

I'm here, Sifang. Come on and write. Just don't steal your wife from me.

This book can be used as a practice. I feel that your description is a bit simple. Reading your book is like reading those books similar to this one, with abbreviated descriptions. .

"The Big Player of the Night" is here to visit. Received.

Invested. Reading twice is enough for 10 minutes.

After reading the beginning, it felt like the beginning of a science fiction novel, which made me excited! It's a pity that later on I fell back into the trap of fantasy spiritual cultivation. If I insist on coming up with my own model at the beginning, I think it will be a good article. These are my thoughts and my personal suggestions, I hope you don't mind. Come on!

The title of the book gives people an eye-catching feeling. Even if I have read less of this genre, I still feel like reading it. I read it in large letters. The writing style is very stable, but the description is somewhat lacking, especially the characterization of the characters. It gives the characters more descriptions of movements and expressions, making the characters look flesh and blood. Pay more attention to the plot rhythm, don't go too fast! Come on together! Let's encourage each other! Rush the duck!

Very imaginative and well written, please support me. Come on 😁

Basically all the elements are combined together. Why is it classified as science fiction? I just don't understand. There are a lot of questions. You can refer to the previous reader. I think he hit the nail on the head.

Come on, encourage each other 😁

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It's very well written in big letters. I'll accept it. Come on.

It ended like this, with a lot of regrets. A revised version may be published in the future.

The author has a unique idea and rich content, please come on for more 🌹

Um... Modern background, but I still have to keep working hard~ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ﾉﾞ

Love it, I will continue to keep up with Dada's rhythm, come on Dada!

It's taken me so long to vote, but I'm still confused. The setting of the novel is very complete. It's a very thoughtful novel, so please do it~

I rarely see first-person narratives. It's very well written. Come on!

Good literary talent! ! Attractive! ! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The writing is very interesting, I am interested in reading it! I wish the characters were more fleshed out! Come on!

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