All Heavens and Dragons

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[Xianzhu Book Review] The book is good, good luck to the author! [Advantages] The writing is good, and the description and narrative skills are solid. [Disadvantages] The content of the paragraphs is long, and most readers nowadays are impatient. It is recommended that each paragraph be divided into sections to express the key points, so as to avoid concentrating large sections of content in one paragraph. In addition, the plot is not very compact. It is recommended to reduce the expression of some settings and gradually reflect them in the plot and exciting points, which will make people impressed. [Evaluation] C [Remarks] I hope it will be helpful to the author. If you don't like it, don't spray it. If you like it, please add more.

A dragon practicing Chinese martial arts... That's fine, the key is that it transformed in just a few pictures. Forget it. The key is that the protagonist has always remained in human form, so your creation of this dragon race is of no use. Might as well be human from the beginning. Now that I have turned into a dragon, I might as well use this dragon body to show off in other worlds with dragons. It is best to be a Western dragon, because seeing an Eastern dragon being tortured by a Western dragon will cause discomfort to the reader, so it is best for a Western dragon to fight a Western dragon. Otherwise, it will gradually evolve into the form of an oriental dragon in the later stage. It is best to go to a world with dragons. For example, if you go to Douluo Continent, wouldn't Gu Yuena or something like that be delicious? , Or the dragon clan, competing with those dragon kings! Or some Western fantasy novels, or worst of all, you can also pretend to be in Japanese anime. For example, the Dragon Knight of Star Carving is a pretense in a world dominated by dragons. The world you write like this is completely inaccurate, and no one likes to read it.

I felt disgusted when I saw the second chapter. It's true that Chinese people are the descendants of dragons, but don't call Western lizards Chinese dragons. How can a small lizard be compared with a giant dragon that covers the sky? It doesn't matter that you are a descendant of a foreign dragon. Is it okay not to talk about China?

Author, what you write is a bit like a running account 😅😅😅

There are two updates for the time being, one after 10 a. M. And one after 3 p. M.

The work has been signed, and the rules for future updates are: 800 recommendation votes for one update, 15 monthly tickets for one update, 10,000 points for reward for one update, 1,000 collections for one update, and so on. In addition, after three updates have been added, Xiaohai will sprint to achieve the achievement of ten thousand words of daily updates. Additional update, I am serious.

Don't you think magic spells are really ridiculous? 😊

A dragon is sleeping on its stomach. Next to it was its egg, and suddenly there was a movement of space and it opened its eyes! It saw a human soul and rushed to its eggs. Paji slapped him to death with one paw. It wonders why people keep eyeing its eggs lately? The whole book is finished! ! !

Don't write The Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, just go to the next one.

Is the author a beautiful woman? I have despaired of your book, but I am very interested in your people, especially this avatar. Hey hey hey! Drooling🤤

Walking alone? There are actually authors willing to write this!

As the saying goes, a good word can warm you in three winters, but a bad word can make you feel cold in summer! So, I'm here to say, yes! But, the ugly words come first, I am very strict! ! (σ-`д･´) Looking at other posts, some people said that the number of words in the chapters is too many, but I don't think this is a particularly big problem! But, don't repeat the meaning of each chapter, don't repeat it! Don't be too cumbersome with the modifications, it's necessary! BUT, the book is very good, with great ideas and a positive world view. You can read it at a glance. There are few words in the early stage and you can't see much. I look forward to the later stage to lay out the plot bit by bit! Come on, hold on!

I don't like watching TV series! I haven't seen it yet! I simply think it's too long! More than sixty chapters, sister! Bookworms don't like to follow the plot! I came here because of the title of the book. I thought it would be like recruiting dragon descendants, building a demon kingdom, and lighting divine fire.

Not yet ready to devour it? So slow?

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While I was watching, I saw Douluo, and I felt that the protagonist had no sense of existence. We stayed at Shuiyuan throughout the entire journey.

Collect it first and wait until you devour it before reading it

The writing is relatively soft, not stiff, I like it

It is a rare novel, but the writing is quite good. There are no particularly passionate chapters, and there are no ** chapters. It is just a basic book, suitable for reading calmly.

Watch it after you have fattened up, and book it all at once to avoid entering the palace halfway.

There's too much nonsense in the front, I don't want to read the rest

Step back! 1.54 Million, come on!

I read more than 60 chapters today. I feel that there is nothing poisonous or refreshing. It seems dispensable. The pace is still slow, but the setting is very good.

The first fourteen chapters are okay, but the later chapters are uncomfortable to read 😅😅

To be honest, when I saw the conversation between the protagonist and the clone, it was like two people, and the conversation was not very comfortable. I just had an inexplicable feeling. I don't know if it will change in the future.

Good! Very good plot, very good writing, collected. Come on!

Is this what you're starting to devour?

Can you write a fan of The Catastrophe of All Races?

I think so! It is completely similar to the model of the projection of the heavens. It is better to watch the projection of the heavens.