I Was Reincarnated from the Dirt

Subjective evaluation, not reference. JPG The subject matter is okay, there are two problems, but it is obvious that the author has improved. First, segmentation + verbosity, this has been significantly improved, but the level of weird segmentation and nonsense (verbosity) in the dialogue at the beginning was a bit outrageous. Although it has gradually improved subsequently, there are still many problems in this regard. Second, mainline + outline. Except for absolute casual articles, it is best for other types to have a mainline to some extent. It doesn't matter if you don't have an outline, but if you really can't control the plot and setting, it is best to have a simple outline to tie up the subsequent development. The rest is actually not a big problem. After all, the first book by a new author is already pretty good. ps: Although I gave up the book and complained about it and will not come back to read it again, does the author really not consider changing the devilish segment in the opening a little? The effect of this thing to persuade people to quit is definitely much higher than you think. . .

When I saw (Under One Person), I was confused. I felt like the author was digging holes. I felt that the author couldn't control this fierce horse.

As the saying goes, details determine success or failure. Good writing style is also the key to writing good articles, so you should read more books and other people's articles, think of something in your mind, think about it before writing, make a draft first, and then listen to other people's opinions. Such a good article comes out.

I can think of themes like being reincarnated by filthy soil, it's so imaginative.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

It doesn't matter, even if it's an inexplicable article with an inexplicable protagonist, I can still read it (●—●) emmm, I personally support the success of Infinite Tsukuyomi, I just want to know what it will be like after the success of the "Infinite Tsukuyomi Plan". Isn't it delicious that Uchiha's ancestral beauty is beautiful? Isn't it delicious that Uchiha's younger brother possesses attributes?

The protagonist looks like a **

Isn't it nice that the protagonist has a bit of a temper? ! ! !

If you read it as a novice, it's okay and attractive, but the writing style isn't good enough, so try your best.

Nice writing, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง

Overall personal feeling is okay. If the passing line is slightly higher, the picture can be drawn, but it is intermittent. In some places, you have to look back at both sides before the picture can be drawn. You can see it, but you can't study it carefully. It can be used as relief food during the book shortage. The Naruto chapter explained the reason why the protagonist can be reincarnated by the earth, and also his incredible talent. . . The shortcomings are that there is no main line, the character's personality is not well controlled, and the description of the situation is a bit substandard. (The passing standard is that I can visualize the scene while reading) The above is my first book review.

Emm It's obvious that this is a real newbie who started writing after watching a few episodes of Naruto. The language is relatively fluent but there are too many redundancies, the characters are not well understood, and most importantly, there are inexplicable dramas and jokes. If anyone reads the post before reading the book, please be careful not to have any expectations, bye.

I know that this book is not to your taste, and I also know that this book is quite bad, and I am deeply sorry for this, so today I set up a page just so that you don't open posts one by one. As a newcomer, I am self-aware, and I also have a little heart of glass, but I don't want to delete your comments, so please come here.

When I write about his parents, I feel so disgusting. It's such an old routine. The protagonist is obviously very powerful, and then he is forced to go on a blind date. His parents say this and that based on his status. It's a routine from N years ago. It's a rubbish novel.

Why is the name so weird, Tian Ming? ? ? Just like the Chinese naming Li Wen and Zhang Gui, this name is probably a curse. . .

Come on, come on, come on

First of all, the combat power in Naruto has not been fully figured out. Secondly, the protagonist is a high-level combat power of the Uchiha clan, capable of going up to the Six Paths but does not even have a kaleidoscope. Then, the protagonist's combat power is so NB that he actually wrote so many chapters alive. Finally, I suggest that the author should speak well after understanding the original work. This book gave me the same feeling as an old fan of Naruto when Naruto was not finished.

Can you die in separate sections? The writing is rubbish, less than 10% of the plot is plot, and most of it is just complaints. The author is just enjoying himself.

No chapter name! No soul! Even if you post two words casually, and there is a chapter name, the effect will be different.

The Hokage was having a good time, digging holes everywhere, removing the dirt and ascending to heaven, but he went back again? What totality? What Qi? Under ten thousand people? The whole article is full of nonsense.

I'll introduce the poison every day. I won't accept it.

A common problem for newbies is that they talk too much and don't have much essence. Especially during dialogue, there are not many redundant words, all of which are repeated left and right.

Tell the truth! Let's have a good Naruto war. You used to pretend to be Bi and just kill and kill. You are more of a villain than a villain. Even if you know you don't like Naruto, don't be so mean.

Author, I am very optimistic about your subject matter, but this character is written... I just read Chapter 9, and I saw that the protagonist is a severe chuunibyou + bulldozer. He always says some inexplicable things; he flirts with Ino after just nine chapters... Shikamaru has become a reckless man, rushing directly into the enemy group in team battles; Choji's IQ has increased by at least 250, and his eyesight has doubled, and he can directly see through the combat routines of Kage level feelings and analyze them... Darui was originally extremely lazy, but his IQ was also good, but he turned into a reckless man here... The most poisonous thing is not the above, but the analysis of combat power. The protagonist can break free from the dirt, and he can do so with brute force. You know, the second generation of earth, the second generation of water, and the third generation of thunder have not been able to break free from the dirty earth. These three people are all at the peak of the shadow level! Coupled with what you described as "the amount of chakra is greater than that of a tailed beast", it can be determined that the protagonist's strength is about the same as Tobirama, half a step beyond the shadow level (this term is my own definition, but you can understand it). Then the protagonist fights Tsunade + Raikage who don't use all their strength and it's hard to fight... You can say that your body is fragile, then why do you need to fight for Taijutsu? Isn't he good at illusions? Isn't his signature fire escape good? Then the most poisonous point came. The protagonist was controlled by Shikamaru? ! ! ! Have you ever seen a shadow-tailed beast? And then he was controlled by Ino again? Today, the two clans of Nara and Yamanaka are really glorious ancestors 😁😁 Of course, I am not here just to troll people, I just want to make some suggestions: First, communicate with people more about Naruto, read the original work several times, and learn more about the character of the original characters. You can make certain changes, but not OOC. Secondly, the routine of pushing away the harem is no longer popular. Don't use this trick anymore. Of course, I haven't read what you wrote later, but at least these 9 chapters have the hint of a harem. This kind of rogue protagonist is also not likable. I hope you can change your routine. The third is... Practice your writing more. Fourth, take a look at how internet writers segment sentences and paragraphs. I also know that the author is a newcomer. If you want to take online writing seriously as a career, you must have this ability. I hope you will adopt the above. I wish the author can make progress and reach a higher level. By the way, this subject matter is really good.

I just read more than 20 chapters and I can't stand it anymore. I don't know what to write at all. I just know that I am pretending to be 13 in infinite.

Who is Huituzhuan and why does she want to give birth to the protagonist?

There are always people who say that poisonous weeds are just cool enough 😁, but he is really a divine farmer.

So awkward, like a child.

This setting was used by other authors and became a small hit.