Jin Shangqing

🤔Why is the male protagonist eager to start a ginseng business? Aren't you afraid that the king of Jin would buy ginseng and save his own life? According to the original history, the current king of Jin died soon. In this novel, the male protagonist has already invested in the next king of Jin in advance. If ginseng is bought by the king of Jin at this time and saves his own life, wouldn't the male protagonist's investment be in vain?

The overall writing style of the book is quite good. After all, I have written several books, so it is still acceptable. There is no problem with the content. At least it can be read. However, the title of your book is a little divorced from the content of your book. Moreover, it is good that you do not write the back of each chapter. But as soon as the Chronicle of Wei Shihuang comes out, the title of your book will be abandoned, okay?

I couldn't help but laugh when I saw that we were going to make steel and iron. Do you know what the melting point of iron is? You didn't even have a blower or coal in the Spring and Autumn Period. Can iron ore be melted? For your iron smelting, I checked specifically. There is no iron ore in Weiyi. Please note that there is no iron ore. You don't even have any iron ore, so you teased me by saying you wanted to make iron! Moreover, molds are needed to make weapons. You can open the mold and make a sword in one day. It's awesome, awesome, awesome. You actually know how to memorize history books, understand chemistry and metallurgy. Come on, why did you die now and join the slave society? Doesn't this count as being eliminated? Write some history books and don't make things up. Really, this is my first comment, I really can't help it. That's it, the topic selection of this book is okay, but the quality is too poor.

I still can't figure out why Jin was divided. The country that was supposed to unite the world ended up being caused by internal problems... The core of Shang Yang's reform was to prohibit internal strife and to unite with the outside world!

Let me give the author two suggestions. First of all, I hope it won't be like the first dude in the Warring States Period who was so stupid at the beginning. It was so noisy that I actually gave up the book after just a few chapters. Secondly, don't get slapped in the face by being questioned like crazy in the last book. Those ministers simply don't have a long memory... So they have no choice but to jump to the chapter. I hope the author of this book can write well ✊. I ordered the first book, but I didn't expect the next two books to be a bit disappointing.

In the Spring and Autumn Period, a family wanted to unify China even if the king was not even a generation? Are all modern online articles so impetuous? Still as reliable as the Little Lord of Spring and Autumn 😅

To be honest, if the author is not careful when writing historical articles, why not write mindless and cool articles, disguised as historical articles, it will definitely attract some non-target readers to read it, and they will definitely complain if they are not satisfied after reading it, so why bother? It doesn't matter how true you want it to be. After all, it's an online text. It's okay to be exaggerated. It's acceptable to have any coincidences. But since it's a historical text, can it be more logical? This is a sincere suggestion, not to find fault. There are not many well-written historical articles, and there are not many good authors. I hope the author's next book will be better, but I really can't stand this one.

The knowledge reserve is so low, how dare you write about Spring and Autumn Period?

Damn it. . . . I feel like this intelligence-lowering halo is too strong. . . . I'm convinced. . . . Really. . . 🙂🙂🙂 Alas, strength persuades us to retreat. . . .

There is a serious lack of historical common sense and logic. History buffs who like rationality and research can go out directly.

I traveled to the Spring and Autumn Period and didn't know how to raise Kun.

Ginseng is not that powerful and has become a bit of a myth in recent writings.

People who have lived for thousands of years, no matter how useless they are, still stand on the shoulders of giants and look at this era. Vision The overall situation is beyond the reach of ordinary people. Whatever I wrote, the steel sword came out. The steel sword was brought out at the beginning. There is basically no need to read the rest.

The remaining heroes of Qin Fen for six generations rose from princes to emperor. I really don't know how the protagonist can go from doctor to minister to prince to emperor in one generation without a golden finger. Hell level! ! ! !

The best thing written by the author is Zhao Weiwang in the Warring States Period.

The struggle for hegemony in the Spring and Autumn Period is the most difficult thing to write about in history. Anyway, let's go for it.

Give him a frame at the beginning: Wei Shihuang, and then frame himself, so he can only do all kinds of unreasonable tricks.

In fact, the author is writing a novel about the Song Dynasty. I think there are still many people who are very interested in this little tyrant from the Central Plains. The monarch Zi Yan is still very topical. It is funny to think about shooting the sky and the earth and pulling out the seedlings to encourage them.

In fact, the author's writing is okay, but to be honest, you have chosen the wrong dynasty. During the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, everyone prefers more rigorous and hard-core books. You like to climb the technological tree in every book. It is better to place the background in a dynasty closer to modern times. Gunpowder in the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period is just a cannon to fight mosquitoes. The readers not only do not feel happy but feel peace-keeping. You have not found a problem. Most of the popular historical novels are from the Tang Dynasty or after the Tang Dynasty. Before that, most of the popular ones were more rigorous, and there were not many technologies that transcended the times.

Without Zhang Juzheng in the Ming Dynasty, he would have died early. Without Huo Guang, the Qiang Dynasty would have collapsed! How can one Zhao Dun and one Wang Mang be compared with the two of them? Especially, after Zhang Juzheng and Liu Bowen, the Ming Dynasty's third One person, together with Wang Chongyang and Yu Qian, is known as the Four Sages of the Ming Dynasty! It is fair to say that Zhang Juzheng's achievements are the best in the world. When it comes to politicians in the Ming Dynasty, Zhang Juzheng is the first to be mentioned! Without Zhang Juzheng, how could Qi Jiguang fight against the Japanese!

Why do you keep writing about the Warring States Period or the Spring and Autumn Period? You can write about other periods.

I was strongly persuaded to quit in the first ten chapters! Author, tell me, where did the sword come from in the Spring and Autumn Period? Or a long knife?

Isn't the Zhi Feng in the author's book the same Zhi Wuzi who assisted Duke Ao of Jin in achieving the hegemony of "Three Drivers and Weary Chu"? The author depicts Zhi Feng as being so mentally retarded and poisonous. Zhi Wuzi is as important to the Zhi family as Wei Zhaozi is to the Wei family, Zhao Xiangzi is to the Zhao family, and Han Xianzi is to the Han family. Even if the author wants to highlight the pig-footed Wei Prime Minister, he should not bury Zhiwu Zi in this way. Do you really think that the mastermind of Jin Daogong is a fool?

Author, the next book will be about the Kingdom of Yue, the era of the Kingdom of Yue without borders, although I still want to read about the Kingdom of Wu

In the Spring and Autumn Period, the protagonist had already found gunpowder, so what else was there to see? He just pushed it all the way.

A few words for the author: I had high expectations when I first started reading this book. The previous book was very good. Anyway, at least in my opinion, it can be compared with Spring and Autumn Period and I Were the King. The previous book was about the Warring States Period. I never expected it. I only read a few chapters of this book. What the hell. Ghostwriting? Or is the author inflated? The results are clear. The author of the next book should reflect on it carefully. It's not easy to get involved in history these days

The author is suitable for writing about emperors, but he has poor control over the dynasty.

Many famous historical figures are a generation older. This historical knowledge is, well... Really awesome.

Historical novels, especially those written before the Sui and Tang Dynasties, must not include hot weapons such as cannons and pistols, as they would be too dramatic. I thought it was awesome, but actually it didn't feel fun at all.

I don't hate this book, I just simply don't like the protagonist's character and the atmosphere created to cater to this character is so embarrassing.