Zhen Fu Gang

The content of the free chapter has nothing to do with the title of the book, so I have to mention it to avoid wasting time. 1. It's really a martial arts novel and has nothing to do with science and technology. The protagonist in the free chapter is a restaurant. 2. The author seems to plan to write about Zhao Waner and the protagonist being together last. Even if not, it will be delayed until at least 200 chapters later. 3. At present, the protagonist is mainly dealing with matters in the world, and it is not the main line or even the branch line, just some trivial matters. (The Green Forest Hero is a real trivial matter to the dynasty) 4. This is a real imaginary world, so imaginary that the son of the Secretary of the Ministry of Finance can sever the father-son relationship with his father. 5. Plot Progress The plot progresses extremely slowly. It is not recommended for those who want to watch a fast-paced movie. I have seen many people talking about testing drugs, but this is not testing drugs. Personally, the severing of the relationship between father and son is not considered a poisonous point in the novel. Again, this is not a poison test, and there is nothing poisonous about the free chapters. Just a subjective comment. Don't talk about testing poison, this will affect the author's mentality! ! !

Alas, failure! The drama is played every minute, the challenge fails, the master can't even ride a horse, he rides a donkey, there is no sense of immersion

When will the protagonist recognize the heroine? I feel that the progress of the main plot is a bit slow.

It came in based on the title of the book, and then there was nothing more! Maybe I am too stupid to help it, but the main heroine has gone somewhere!

The title of the book is very good, but I feel that the author has written it a bit crookedly, which will not attract readers.

Wouldn't it be better for the author to just change the name to Travels of the Prodigal Son? What are these things? I can't even explain them clearly in a straight line. It seems that this posture is to lay out the macro picture of ancient times, medieval times and modern times.

I'm not happy to see Chapter 57. It was the first time that the person I was engaged to officially came to visit. According to the traditional Chinese feudal etiquette, I was a guest and could not even enter the host's house. In other words, I could not even get to the main living room. I did not even see the real owner of the house. I had to accept all kinds of tests from the inexplicable three aunts and seven aunts. In my opinion, this was a very serious disrespect. As the object of marriage contracts in ancient times, marriage contracts have a high legal effect. As the head of the family, you either admit it or you don't admit it. If you don't admit it, what's the point of the test? If you admit it, you won't even let the person you're engaged to enter the living room. To use an analogy, it's like having a guest come to your door and not even letting the guest in. This is a very serious insult. Men with a little bit of backbone should turn away and leave first when encountering this situation. Since you are not welcome, then the engagement will be invalidated, which is more or less the same. What's more, those so-called sisters-in-law and so-called sisters-in-law's tests are all self-inflicted. If this is a real marriage partner and they finally get married, aren't they afraid in their hearts that they will offend the future sister-in-law's pensioners? Whether it is a man or a woman, it is the first time that a so-called blind date or engagement partner comes to your door. They should leave a relatively good impression on the other party. To be honest, this is not the way a male monkey house should treat guests. A family with quality and culture should open the front door and the middle door, welcome distinguished guests, and then meet the owner through speech and other small aspects to distinguish the other person's character, culture, knowledge, etc. Through some subtle things. This kind of situation where the engagement partner has not entered the main living room and has not met the owner, there are cats and dogs coming to tease the more distinguished guests in the future, and various tests are also set up. In my opinion, this is the form after the outbreak. It should even be said that this kind of family only has such an idea if the family education is very poor.

These are some heroines. . I'm looking at the roles. Three heroines? ? I read the introduction: Shouldn't a book like this have a single female protagonist? .

I have always thought it was ridiculous: If some people don't like harems, why would they come to harem novels to seek displeasure, impose their own preferences on others, and hijack their creations by shouting, "If you don't want xxx, I won't read it"? Different subjects respect each other and don't like to leave quietly. Don't you have some basic qualities and cultivation? The novel itself is fictional, and people have different preferences and themes when reading novels to meet different needs and are not limited to modern life. What's more, this book also combines ancient backgrounds, so what about writing about the harem? The author has no obligation to explain the plot development to you in advance. Readers have to read it themselves. If you are willing to click on it, but you can't even do basic identification, is it really young and childish or is it a realistic giant baby? If you don't like it, you can ignore it and leave quietly, but some people who impose their own preferences on others and then maliciously slander and attack may not be so noble? 🤮 Being sanctimonious and pretending to be reasonable, criticizing others from your own imaginary moral high ground can only show the selfish and extreme nature of some people. Please leave if you are satisfied with your vanity, but don't make things disgusting here and dirty the comment area.

Pointing out your problem means that people in the circle are stepping on you? Think carefully about the shortcomings of your novel

I have read more than 40 chapters so far, and I counted 152 chapters in total (roughly above). The current record-breaking chapter is 39 chapters in total, 10 (roughly above), and the highest is 3 paragraphs in a row, one paragraph per paragraph (roughly above). The book is a good book, but generally not a good one. I hope the author is okay🙏🏻

I finally saw the male protagonist marrying into the house. There are a lot of poisonous points in the ink in front of me. I won't mention it. You gave the female protagonist a split personality. I really vomited. There is a personality who beats the male protagonist every day. The male protagonist has panda eyes every day and everyone knows that he is domestically abused. But the female protagonist doesn't react at all? The other female supporting characters also look like they don't know? Why are you a bunch of idiots? One thing to say, I couldn't stand it any longer, so I ran away. Maybe some people think your writing is good, but as the old saying goes, there is a reason why your book is not popular. There must be advantages, but the bad points really dissuade you. I hope you can reflect on it.

Isn't the protagonist's most beloved son-in-law? Why are there so many female protagonists? I'm still disgusted. It's equivalent to cheating after marriage.

Do you understand me? Is this book scary or depressing?

I'm convinced that someone named Kang lives in the General's Mansion. The widow of a large family has no male master. How is it possible that you can live in it. I don't know how much trouble there is in front of the widow's door. How could it be possible to live in it in ancient times? Even if it's modern, you can't live in it. If you don't have a home, you can't afford a hotel. Not to mention the sister-in-law's family. What is the relationship between the eldest sister-in-law's family and the second and third sisters-in-law? In terms of etiquette and emotional intelligence, it is impossible to live in it. In ancient times, the number one scholar would be sprayed to death by the imperial censor. It is normal to be dismissed and never to be hired again.

The plot is messy and dragging, I just write whatever comes to my mind, and everything is forced on the deception.

After reading more than 40 chapters, I don't know where the main plot is. It is said that I have entered the general's mansion, but there has been no movement. Do you have to wait for the ending? A modern person traveled through time, practiced martial arts for more than ten years, and wandered around after leaving the mountain, looking for some noisy things here and there, and I don't know what I want to do.

Dear author, I just read Chapter 2 and thought it was very interesting, so I ordered all of them. I would like to ask if there will be a situation in the future where you will be ambiguous and refuse to accept, and you will not marry after teasing? (Personally, I still hope that this situation does not happen🔨)

I am sb, recommend this book to me, so does qd

I've seen Chapter 40. To summarize briefly. At present, this book has basically nothing to do with the title introduction, maybe it will be in the future. Just like writing an essay that goes off topic, no matter how well you write it, you will still get the lowest score. The plot drags on and on.

There are too many male supporting roles, right? Does the male supporting actor still have a harem? This is the male protagonist, abandoned

A good book, a good book, written with great feeling, and comfortable to read. I just hope there won't be any scenes of pretending to be a slap in the face.

In other words, the hierarchy in ancient times was much stricter than in modern times. When guests visit a famous house, they must submit a greeting card before coming to the door. After admission, they can directly meet the recipient through the side door. At least there won't be any trouble here. If the guests are so obviously difficult after entering the door, it will lose the master's face. Not only will the servants be uneducated, but it can even rise to the point where the master himself is uneducated. If you really want to make things difficult for your guests, you should make things difficult before entering the door, or make a mad rush after the meeting. This is the correct way to make things difficult, rather than making things difficult in front of the recipient after entering the door. If you do this, the servants will drag him out and beat him to death. If the relationship between relatives is good, they will have a cold war. If the relationship is not good, they will cut off their robes and sever their ties.

This behavior of the author shows extreme disrespect for the readers. Looking back, I actually spent more than 3,000 points on this book, which is more than thirty yuan. It is a waste.

The beginning was actually quite amazing, but then it started to go off the rails and gave away so many scenes to the supporting characters. Today I saw that the author has started a new book, so don't make the same mistakes again. . .

Since it's a harem story, I have to read it.

I read the comments and saw that it was about the harem, so I planned to read it, but I couldn't stand it at first glance after reading Chapter 1 This is a fraudster who deceives husbands and is cruel, this is a knight, and you actually deny the behavior of a knight.

The setting is very good, but the rest is just ordinary. It's okay to just spend some time and look around.

I think the writing is okay, but the plot is too delayed and the main plot advances too slowly.

Not to mention ancient marriages, most modern marriages have preserved many traditions among the people. They always use modern people's ideas to substitute ancient times, which is very embarrassing.