Cultivating a Male God

How did this become a popular serial and it was discontinued for so many days? Could it be? ? ? ?

The writing is good, but the flaws are obvious. Whoever buys a house is worried about getting mentally ill. The class reunion part is even more inexplicable. It's too ridiculous. Keep working hard to improve. I've been short of books recently

In the topic development system, the starting point is indeed too high and there is no development process. The data fluctuates too fast, which leads to a too fast pace, and the emotional line is not written. The most important thing is that the article is too messy and feels that the plot is all stuck together. It feels that it is difficult for the author to continue writing.