Don't Forget Your Original Intention at Wangyou Tavern

Xiaobai is here to review the book. . . Oh, I'm very angry. You wrote the book like this. How do you want me to comment? The writing is delicate, the context is clear, the rhythm is clear, and the characters are plump. What do you want me to comment on? If you want to hear a compliment, just say it 😡😡😡 Oh, I have pink eye and I still have to write. . . I would like to describe the author's description as clean. The words flow unhurriedly, but they can leave a lot of things in my heart. Xiaobai only read the first eight chapters and enjoyed the feeling of listening to the story quietly in the quiet afternoon. Forget about worries, every sad past will have a happy and worry-free beginning. From the time the article jumped back to the protagonist's childhood, I felt that the author's ability to tell the story with a strong grasp of the main line was no longer something I could comment on. After reading a few chapters, the eloquent story makes people reluctant to recall Lan Ruoxi, who was trapped in the Wangyou Tavern at the beginning. When I picked up that memory that she had forgotten, I was only thinking about one question. Is it sadness or the most important thing in life that she has forgotten? The characterization is delicate and reasonable. Lan Ruoxi is not an innocent little girl. She has the awareness that a child from a political family should have. However, at a young age, she can only escape the problems that she will face sooner or later. At this time, Bai Qianjun gradually becomes her haven of escape. It is this simple boy's instinct to protect his family that makes Lan Ruoxi feel the preciousness of staying with each other. I guess this precious insight will also be the source of their sorrow in the future. . . As for Lan Ruoxi's father, his aggressive behavior and his love and care for his daughter seem to be in conflict but are so reasonable. There is a tiger in my heart, and I smell the rose carefully. Every move of Lan Ruoxi's father drives the plot and highlights the contradictions, which is very successful in shaping. As for Bai Qianjun, he is a gentle gentleman, as gentle as jade. Although Bai Qianjun at this time has nothing to do with these eight characters (I have read too few chapters 😁😁😁), the author has discovered his gentlemanly nature. Maybe future stories will make him grow and change, but the kindness in his bones has now been revealed. If I have to say there is a problem, it is that the modern terms in the dialogue sometimes make people laugh, such as he is cool, such as daddy (should he be called daddy, right?) And so on. Of course, the impact is not big. Alas, I don't think I can make any useful suggestions. I'm sorry, the author! But! After coding so many words, is it okay to add some details and let me advertise? ! 😁😁😁

I haven't forgotten the monthly tickets I promised to give. The five monthly tickets are full.

I have read a few chapters. The content is very good, the conception is rigorous, and the writing is exquisite. I hope you will continue to work hard 😊

More than 300,000 words. I admire it. It has been added to the bookshelf. Read it slowly and hope for mutual acceptance.

The writing is very natural and the ideas are very clear, but some parts are not mature enough in the conception, and the characters are very distinct. I guess it needs to be foreshadowed later when the male and female protagonists change their personalities.

Already collected, keep updated, come on! Mutual income

Is this the boss? He writes so well. I support him greatly.

Author, here I come! It's not that it hasn't been updated. That book failed to pass the 100,000-word contract, and then Xiaobai was very sad and re-opened another book in a small size. I changed the outline of that book and tried to get a contract 😭😭😭 Originally, I didn't want to write a systematic article. I ended up writing it because it might be easier to sign, but I ignored the fact that my writing skills are not good. . . Alas, it feels a little smoother after re-opening the book, so you can check it out! 😅😅😅 I will continue to keep that book and write this one. Thank you for your attention to me! I have been following your book. It is really hard to get up early to write a book. You are a role model for me to learn from! ! ! Of course, if you want to exchange recommendation votes, vote for this book 😌

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