A Hermit Immortal in the Primordial World

You are a kind of otaku fairy, but what kind of otaku fairy you are when you leave the house? A true home fairy does not go out, but quietly absorbs spiritual energy (immortal energy, fairy source, spiritual source, magic power, holy spirit...) At home to practice and become an immortal. He usually does not go 100 meters away from home, and the time outside does not exceed 1 hour, and he is still in a small mobile house (which can be understood as a RV). Copied according to book reviews, do you know? You are the worst author I have ever taught, and you are good at copying and reviewing books. 🐷

There are too few spiritual treasures. The dignified fourth-generation leader of Xuanmen doesn't even have a top-grade spiritual treasure! How to survive the great catastrophe of becoming a god!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Happy New Year everyone! The signing is completed. Thank you for everyone's encouragement and support. I have been revising the article recently while celebrating the holidays. I'm sorry, but I don't dare to be shy and ask for votes. The current progress is fourteen chapters.

This is my first time writing, I am revising as I write, I really feel sorry for everyone 😢

Come on, I've finished reading the existing chapters, what should I say? The beginning is a bit fast, and the author missed a lot of opportunities to improve the word count. For example, the protagonist's living environment as a mortal at the beginning, the emotional understanding of the death of his parents, and the comparison with eternal life and freedom. If immortality is not set off by mortals, it would be difficult for ordinary people to write about the immortality of the world. The author's book gives me the impression that it is bland and does not have much emotional ups and downs. When the protagonist obtains merit in the mortal world, he can also pick out a few cases of fine writing. The opportunity for the Kirin auspicious beast appears spontaneously. He can also seize a little fine writing, and then spread out a little bit of opportunity to train his subordinates. The few boys under the protagonist can also be described in detail to enrich the image of the protagonist. Up to now, I don't have much impression of the protagonist. It's just a lucky man who has the memory of the 21st century in the prehistoric times. He hugged Taiyi's thigh and saved Yang Jian's family. In the hands of others, hundreds of chapters could have been written about this, but it may not be a fairy tale or a fairy tale. It may be that the author has been laying the groundwork, but I can't find the main line that the author wants to express. Which part is the main description? Become a god? Journey to the West? The end of the law? Or is it just plain to let the protagonist become a saint? The author's imagination is okay, and the words he writes are not discouraging, but it is like talking about an idea rather than writing a book, and it does not have much emotion. However, it may be that my requirements are too high, after all, it is only ten chapters. 😜😜😜😜 Come on, new writer, your debut work is pretty good! 😁😁😁

I feel that the recent plot is very unreasonable. The Queen Mother is still plotting against her daughter's love affairs. Isn't this nonsense? After being in trouble, there is no way to end it. What about the wisdom of a god?

There is no book review section. Every time I see some news, I will be happy to click on it and read it. They are all robots, adding this group and that group, alas! Fortunately, there are still people who occasionally vote for recommendations, so it won't be too difficult.

Come on come on. Work hard to update!

Congratulations, Xianxia classification, new book list, fourth place!