The Assassin of 567: Swordsman Lu Jiu

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The writing is really good. I think the biggest advantage of this book is the style of painting, which really gives me the feeling of an original work. The same is true for the naming and plot, especially the background. I feel that the author must have done serious research. Overall, it is a pretty good Wu Liuqi fanfic. At present, it seems that it should be the best work among Wu Liuqi fanfics. I hope the author will work hard!

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How should I put it? This book has many shortcomings, but it also has advantages 1. Fundamentally speaking, Assassin Wu Liuqi is a work that focuses on warmth, but as far as the protagonist is concerned, he is an inconsistent person. In the past, when he had no strength, he could stand up when he saw others being killed. But later, after he developed the strength through training, his first reaction was when he saw others being exterminated. Just run, and he disdains it in his heart. It's hateful to overestimate one's capabilities, and it's understandable to run away, but has the protagonist's "heart" been declining? 567 Was able to stand up in the face of a huge power gap. Is the gap between the two too big? Besides, I still have a token that can be exchanged for companions from Qinglong Pavilion, so why can't I find a way to use it? (Don't tell me you can't use it. Didn't you use it earlier if you were running for a few seconds? And don't tell me you will be beaten down. If the master of Qinglong Pavilion gives you a token, use this token when you face a strong enemy. If you can deal with weak enemies by yourself, but you can't use it when facing strong enemies, then what's the use of it? Don't say you can't catch up. Isn't the master of Qinglong Pavilion coming soon?) What is the position of the protagonist? The last few pictures have really made me uncomfortable. 2. A brother has mentioned before that the psychological descriptions in this book are too true. The author's writing style isn't very good either. It's too superfluous and makes people look childish. The language description is also uncomfortable. Moreover, the recent several large articles on servers are talking about some dispensable things. For the few chapters I saved, the protagonist only appeared in one chapter, and the plot progressed too slowly. 3. The author emphasizes many times in this book that the protagonist is a genius. What is the most dangerous time for a genius? It's those times that didn't develop. The protagonist finally found time to deliver a letter. Isn't it too rigid to just advance the plot? You can even use a better excuse. 4 The update is too slow, just a few times a day. After saving for several days, it is still full of water, and there is not much work. 5 Since the protagonist is 567's brother, it is easy to dig into the family relationship and family background, and it is also easy to write about it. Mo Lang's divine staff Yama has turned into a red knife, which can be made a fuss about. However, judging from the current situation of the protagonist. He does not want to accept the original family relationship. Just thinking about it makes me feel embarrassed and about to get cancer. Personally, I still hope that she will accept the original family relationship. You can change the settings, reincarnation, etc. 6 About the heroine. Club 11. This character doesn't appear much in the original work. The emotional aspects need to be carefully considered. Ask, is the author single? I'm afraid that this point will break down emotionally. That's really fatal. And the birds in Club 11 are on Qingfeng's list. If he becomes the heroine, then it means adding a Qingfeng who doesn't know what is good or bad as an enemy. I wonder if you have ever thought about this while sitting? Besides, the Plum Blossom Family is also something to pay attention to. Plum Blossom 11 committed suicide by his younger brother in the original work. This fucking adds another enemy, Plum Blossom Hero. If the protagonist still maintains his current progress, he is probably going to be beaten to death. In general, advantages and disadvantages. I don't know if the author has an outline. In short, write well, I support you

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The author did not dare to write, probably because he was afraid of being accused🤣

I think a Shen Nong should come and summarize the first few chapters, so that those brothers who were poisoned in the early stage but couldn't persist can have hope of persevering. After all, Wu Liuqi has very little humanistic writing. . If I hadn't seen it in the introduction, I probably wouldn't have known this book existed. . , I have summarized it and let the author add some details. I think there is no problem.

First of all, I have to say that this is my first book review (really) after several years of reading at Qidian. This book is not like other routine books, Stallion. Rather, it is very relaxed and easy to incorporate your own emotions. When you see that all the foreshadowing and plots are perfectly connected. The first few chapters easily attracted me, and I once thought that Lu Jiu was going to steal Plum Blossom Thirteen. The result was always unexpected in the end. There was endless warmth and happiness among the killings in Xuanwu Kingdom. The writing is elegant and well-paced, making you feel like you have really entered the book. Although the chapters about the siege machine almost convinced me to give up, but after reading it, I realized that it is really very immersive. I have to say that the author's imagination, detailed characterization, and humorous language (key points) made me really fall in love with this book 😊

Come on, today Wu Liu Qi's Strongest Hairstylist has finished, so I came to Qidian for a walk. It really didn't disappoint me.